Kriyansh SS:Falling In Love lst part pg 64 pms ltr - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
thanks for the pm and nice concept :-)

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nyc concept...continue soon..! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Osum concept...
continue soon...
waiting for update...
plz do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys..Here's the first part. Enjoy.

Part 1:

Kriya sat there on the middle of the bed with her face covered with a veil. Yes it was her suhaag raat. She sat there thinking about him and how honest her was.

~~~~~2 days before their marriage~~~~~
He had called her to a restaurant to talk something important. When she reached there she found him with another girl. That girl was soo close to him and she was holding his arm. It pained in her heart. They greeted each other and he introduced the other girl as his girl friend.

For a few minutes she became numb. His voice brought her back into her senses.
"kriya Im sorry I know I should have told this before to you but I couldn't. I tried telling you but jab bhi batane ki try karta some thing or the other would happen and I could not tell you. This is Natasha my girl friend and I love her. I'm marrying you because mom wanted this. Mai chahta toh mai yeh baat tumhe nahi batata but I felt I should tell you because I don't have any right to spoil your life. And agar tum chahti ho toh yeh shaadi nhi hogi." He said it all in a go.

It took sometime for her to register all this. His honesty made her fall for him even more. Yes she had already fallen for him when she met him. He was caring, fun-loving, kind-hearted and an amazing person. After some time she replied
"Rey thanks for telling me this. I'm glad you did this but yeh shaadi hogi, we can't back off now, saari rasam ho chuki hai and its just 2 days left for the main event that is the marriage. If this marriage gets canceled our families' reputation will be affected. And I can't let that happen. Hope you understand.

Rey nodded yes. He then spoke "I'm sorry meri vajah se you have to go through so much. After few months we can get divorced on the basis that this marriage isn't working. But I promise we will be best friends."
Kriya just smiled. Deep inside her heart she wished that he would be with her all through her life not as a best friend but as her husband, her love. She wished she could be in Natasha's place.

They talked for some time and then rey dropped kriya and Natasha. All this while kriya was just admiring him.
~~~~~Flash back ends~~~~~

Now they were married and here she was waiting for him. She could hear sounds from outside and guessed that every one was teasing rey. She smiled at this. She heard the door knob being turned and she became nervous. She herself couldn't understand why was she nervous. She herself was confused. But whatever may happen all she knew she would try honestly to make some space in his heart and would try not to let this marriage ruin.

Rey entered the room. He saw kriya sitting on the bed. He went to her and sat near her and lifted her veil. Hell he was dumbstruck on seeing the beauty in front of him. She looked as elegant and beautiful as a princess. On seeing rey stare at her, her cheeks flushed little and she looked down. He with his index finger made her look at him and whispered "beautiful". Both of them had a deep and intense eye lock. Few minutes later rey was the one to come back to present.

Silence prevailed in the room. Finally rey spoke " I'm sorry kriya...for all this...meri vajah se tumhe itni problem hogi"
" shhh you don't need to be sorry at all"

Not knowing what to say next rey spoke "ummm u might be tired, so i think we should sleep."
"Hmmm" came her reply.
He bent over her to grab the pillow. As he bent her heart beat rose, their breaths were hitting against each others skin. He took the pillow and turned to leave. But kriya called him making him stop. He turned around to look at her. She said "vo..uh..we can share the bed"
"uh--uh u sure?!"
"yeah.."
Both of them felt little awkward and were a little hesitant at first but soon drifted to sleep.

So, hows it?? I know a litle short but this was how I planned it. I'll try giving long updates for this. Do hit the like tab and do comment.

P.S for pms buddy me...

P.P.S pms will be sent later,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wooww mannu super awsome ddudee u totally rocked this poor kriyaa yaar and hu is this stupid natasha isse jaldi rey ki zindagi se nikalo warna mein is naasha ki aisi ki taise kardungi bolde ti hoon haan thoda filmy hogaya sorry

weell lets see what next jaldi updte ok my 2nd favorite pdtee added to the list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Nice update. . . . .
Kriyaansh r married. . . .
Hmmm. . . . .interesting. . . . . . .
Lets see wat happns nxt. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awesome start...loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
short but sweet
amazing part
poor kriya..
nxt part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
ooosssooommm...!!!!!
is natasha ko kriya ki life s nikalo jaldi yaar...!!!
make kr one soon...!!!
nd update nxt part soon ...!!!

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