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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
R e dhat...ami ghumpadani gaan oi supno gaaanta Samrat ke shuniye ghum padate chai...ami ektu possessive baba...amar Samrat ke karo sathe share korte raji noi...r tor r QUeener kathai amar ghum pele ami ki korbo???? Queeno jodi r kau ke na peey Jatin Sengupta ke niye poden to.

ha ha...k king k queen guleye phelo na badse kalaboti😆

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Susmita

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
The both Girl are sweet and subtle...and they become friend.

No adult friend,nursery friend😊

They needs to talk with each other.
The both girl has pain...

No pain...in that age they can't realize true pain.

They needs to unfold those to each other...
In friendship nothing can be hidden...

1 has no connection with other.

Everything can be told.
No matter how rude is truth...

Nothing was left there...

Friendship needs unconditional love,care,support, affection, attention and trust with due respect...
These are the important aspects...

Friends r they who make a wet blossom bloom😳

May these friendship lust till our death..
With our last breath...

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

[QUOTE=DeewaniRim
May these friendship lust till our death..
With our last breath...

Death is such an apparent word
That snatches all essences of life...
But obviously for some limited time.
When the lamentation is over,
...Lamentation is a fully tricked word-
The loses caused by someone's permanent absence
Never can be fulfilled by substitutes.
Still we try...
Try is a sky-full of hope
Which gives us lean power:
That turns into true strength...
All we achieve in life...
Is nothing but a huge fascinating mirage-
Our dear respected beloved Janak Mahadev & Mata Sati-Parvati
Instantly rain us their constant light of love,affection & care,
Shadow us from the snow of wounds...

They are THE ULTIMATE INN.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

abt the poetic scene:
dude ur poetic skill is way too awsum to comment or criticize.
lovely poem...loved it yaar!!😉

will comment on further parts as well.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: sapphirose176
abt the poetic scene:
dude ur poetic skill is way too awsum to comment or criticize.
lovely poem...loved it yaar!!😉

will comment on further parts as well.

welcome back Gia🤗
u plz go thruogh other poems too by Rimi & me😳
Hope u enjoy⭐️

😊HAPPY HOLI😊

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Khub Shundor Poem-ta !! Ami Khooob Khushi !! Je, Ekhon Tumi Regular Basis-e Update Korbe !! I Missed You Sooo Much !!!

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Khub Shundor Poem-ta !! Ami Khooob Khushi !! Je, Ekhon Tumi Regular Basis-e Update Korbe !! I Missed You Sooo Much !!!

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thanks kokli dear🤗

amake anekei miss korechhe dekhchhi😳

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Khub Shundor Poem-ta !! Ami Khooob Khushi !! Je, Ekhon Tumi Regular Basis-e Update Korbe !! I Missed You Sooo Much !!!

upd dite ektu deri hobe...plz wait a little bit more😊

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago