SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Woww woww u finally updated !!!!!!!! Yayyy i am sooo happy u r continuing ur ff...i knw u won't blv the whole day i was thinking bout ur ff n was deciding to pm u...before that i got ur pm...thank u so much 4 writting again🤗

the update was very beautiful...aww i m loving devi maiya plan...she is trying hard for them...kushi is really crazyy and the car scene was so cute...please update soon can't wait for the next update😊

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Parsha

@Parsha

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

there was nothing on her lips...right???😉 ...

yeh yeh yeh...it was worth the wait...!!👏⭐️

aur yeh Simran kaun hai ...hai rey devi maiya!!!😕

Update sooonnn!!!

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Farah...glad you updated... will come back & comment...fursaat se.

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Tanumon

@Tanumon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

wow, after 1 month finally another update...

what more can i say about lemons & limes? it's just awesome & the best part of your writing is i can visualize Arnav & khushi,the whole scenario while reading it,which somehow soothe the empty feeling i m having for last 1 week.

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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

finally u updated...I'm so happy...
this was the best no the bestest chapter...👏 👏 👏 👏
In this chapter every small things were perfect...
I still don't know whom i liked the most in this chapter arnav, khushi or devi maiyya ...everyone rocked...
& yeah the dialogues were PERFECT...
It was like I was watching IPKKND episode...
Your profile pics is simply awesome...I was just starring at the pics for 10 mins......actually i don't have that pic of him...
thanx u r continuing this SS & will be waiting for the next part...

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

First of all hugs to u...for the month we had...we dont mind the delay yaar...when i read ur update..my heart just expands lik a baloon n starts dancing to rabbaveyyy...
U have magic farha...u create chemistry... <3 the update dammit...
N lol ur kkg is so adorable...n arnav naughtyyy..His PS came back...aw no

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KushiArnav

@KushiArnav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

I really love the Devi Maiya perspective you have added ... it is cute.I love it.

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MizJ139

@MizJ139

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

I just LOVE the way you write! Please continue writing...I absolutely adore Khushi's lines in this story.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Heiyya..Simran is back. And Devi Maiyya is out of plans:(

May be the two love birds will get restless without each other around and find a way...

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Most awaited update 🤗tanx so much. Khushi feeding Arnav Balle balle!! their conversation in the car was hilarious, he was curious to know what she was mumbling about him. Arnav realising that he needs her around him. Devi maiyya has to keep these two together and for that she has to do something for Simran to leave again and this time for good. Awaiting more rabba ve's in next update 😉