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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Nahiiin! While reading the first few paras, i thought it was Arnav and he and Khushi had divorced/she had left him/died. Then I realized it was NK. Why B? Why? Make him fall in love with La in the next OS. Please :) I was still heartbroken over the other OS and you do this to me. 😭

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Aww! That was so sad. He actually fell in love with her. I hope he finds someone who he will love more than Khushi!

I started reading thinking it was Arnav but it was NK!

Awesome writing !

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

you give a depth to NK that the show doesn't convey...please give him a soul mate so he starts to get over Khushi.

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

welll that was real sad seeing arnav -khushi to be so happy on one side and NK so sad😔

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I'm one of those horrible silent readers, I'm afraid.

I've been reading your stories and one-shots for months now, and I've been meaning to comment as well, but I rarely feel that I'll be able to do justice to your beautiful words and so I invariably end up leaving without saying anything.

But recently, I started writing myself. And I realised how much a comment left in my inbox means to me, no matter how short. It's impossible for me to cover the entire body of your work in one comment. All I will say is that you etch out characters so beautifully that I believe in them. I care about them. And your eye for detail is fantastic. You convey a scene, an outfit, or even an emotion in just a few strokes so effectively, it's commendable.

It's what made me bookmark your index and keep coming back to it, hoping for updates.

And I'll keep coming back. =)

P.S. Won't you bring Lavanya back for NK? Pretty please? His bitter resignation and carefully concealed heartbreak break MY heart!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

It's was beautiful! Lovely :)

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sri_ffn

@sri_ffn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I read this OS like thrice, I loved it alright, and then I scroll down and read everyone's comments about NK's heartbreak and I'm thinking, why is NK's heart breaking? isn't he supposed to be happy that he's married to khushi?

then I read someone explaining how this is NK POV and not Arnav's story and I'm like

But then I got happy that it WASN'T Arnav like I originally thought, though his personality suited the character description more, I'm a sucker for Arshi and I'm shameless about it!

Very well-written darling.