Swaron FF:U & Me.Back to Us.Thread 2.part-15.pg93

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BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

wow...one more beautiful FF...its amazing...thanks for the PM...

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Sowmya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: tanha29
Spamming is allowed??Is it??I didnt know o.O

Then how to get till page 35 ??? 😛

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA
Then how to get till page 35 ??? 😛

Lol..are you spamming??

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: tanha29

Lol..are you spamming??

I guess Yes 😆 .. already see that few people have already started spamming !!!

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA
I guess Yes 😆 .. already see that few people have already started spamming !!!

hehe yeah 😆

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

I loved the convo that Tanya had with her angel and how she could identify her as her mother !! That was really touching !! Also the moment when Swayam talks alone with Sharon, the way she blushes and then tells him that she remembers his eyes was really beautiful !! I can't wait to see them open up to each other more in the next update !!

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Priyambada Subudhi

@pri_tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Lovely emotional update!! Ab kya kahun...jitni tarif ki jaye kam hai!!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Beautiful update once more...the innocence of Tanya's gestures and the purity of her thoughts as she wishes her to b her mom...and the concern of the elder man as he makes sure that the girl he had been caring for as his own for 3 years now was indeed in the hands of the rightful person to answer for her ...the best part was how Sharon put Swayam at ease by saying how she recognizes his eyes and knows that he is apnaa...

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mili1987

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Beautiful update

plz update the next part soon😊

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Hey,Deeps! 🤗

I literally felt me heart arching with pain on some moments...i can never imagine that how you can describe them so purely and beautifully..it was just beyond any fairytale...i thought they does not exist but now i know the person who can get something beyond fairytale exist...I seriously feeling like salute you...i can keep going on and on...on praising you...but words are short..you keep asking for big comment i know...but for me who do not have enough words can not get you such big comment...but i hope that you can see the love and sincerity in this comment...😃

A world of togetherness and love…her,Tanya and HIS…with his thought her heart started running in faster pace….somehow her heart didn't wait for any proof and witness to accept him….unlike her mind….her heart already accepted him as hers….a heartfelt smile crept on her beautiful lips….HIS thought made her smile….she blushed to a deep shade of red….it was a new feeling for her…after three years of emptiness ..her life was now going to be full of colors…full of love….full of life….

I could have cropped this line and just add some bits but cropping it felt like insulting the emotions and love in it...you made it beyond believable deeps.😊

My heart says that…..

Ummm…

That you are my mom…..she said and jumped on her for a hug ….

Mother is a word which can melt stones and rocks...giving such effect in your update is spectacular...loved sharon's motherly side...want more on that part..with swayam!😉

Tanya buried her head in pari's chest….the place seemed so familiar to her…as if she belonged there…she felt something wet on her nape….she looked up and saw tears in her angel's eyes….

Hey Angel…please don't cry…I know u r not well…doctor uncle ne medicine diya he na…u will be better soon…she wiped her tears and gave her a sweet peck on her cheek… she smiled through her tears…

He wiped his tears….. He was watching them standing near the door…

He felt happy watching his angel and his cute princess so close to each other…finally she could feel the beautiful feeling of motherhood…and his little princess was finally blessed to get her mother's chest to rest upon….

The most beautiful and ever lasting lines of entire update...i kept them reading over and over...felt dizzy with the champaign of love and affection...Aye Aye captain deep...⭐️

Me in aakhon ko pehchanti hu…she said…looking into his eyes….his deep dark brown eyes ….she was getting lost in them….

I have seen these eyes in my dreams…every night….since last three years…I know they are related to me…they are related to my real identity...she said….tears started forming in her big beautiful greenish eyes….

Not to add another beautiful scene of update...scene to die for..i do not know about other but i can die for such scene...DEEP! DEEP! DEEP! DEEP! you make hell difficult for us in your every update...👏

I was short of words but phir bhi dil main jo aya sab likh dia...is baar kuch sochne ki zarorat nahi pari mujhe...my words are pure here deeps...👏

I have never seen writer like you..i bet and will never see...🤗

Love

Tanya!🤗