OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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ragvir.fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

lovely...

do continue it after this

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Gayathri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

My heart is just constricting!

My heart is bleeding for this innocent soul!

Your OS never fails to make me cry sunara.

Such beautiful words. And i feel like slapping arnav.Bas!

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

The last quote ! 👏

Keep updating.. its really nice..

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SURABRAD

@SURABRAD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

All i can say after reading the above post is...the author has done a brilliant job about capturing the essence of what is happening in IPKKND minus the realization on Arnav's part. . She has a way with words and it's indeed heart wrenching. Anybody reading it could emphathise with Khushi and dread/ anticipate what's going to come her way...would love to read anything published by this author , going by the sensitivity she is portraying in her writing. I wish her all the success in her future endeavours.

Infact i just decided to become a member of IF so that i can read what she wrote...as i was curious after reading the replies from other members. And I"M GLAD I DID.

Edited by SURABRAD - 12 years ago

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

OMG, you actually made me cry. Its beautifully written...but I cried :'( Excellent job.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

wow all the three OSs were super awesome - dying to read a continuation OS - thx for ur pm dear

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Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Well written! I loved it!! It showed that Arnav felt something wasn't right and was trying to talk to Khushi! This is what lacks in the show! Your version showed more heart and soul with the characters therefore connecting more with the readers! What I didn't like about the show was that Arnav was really clueless as to how Khushi was feeling. I was thinking to myself, who is this Arnav? What happend to the man who was so in tune with his wife several weeks ago?

A job well done!! 👍🏼 👏 Please continue soon!

Edited by Katelyn - 12 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

very heart breaking...beautifuly written continue soon

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anarshi

@anarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

awesome update...eagarly waiting for next one...

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

OMG! Poor Kushi! But the cad did not even bother with her, did he? He didn't even ask her any of the things that happened in your OS. Or even think about her. Oh if you are please PM me the rest. Poor poor Kushi. She really deserves the best and instead she gets the worse.

Thank God I stopped watching the serial. The CVs have really ruined it.