VirMan SS/Winds of Desire- 10th chap updated! - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh what a twist... Manvi's past huh... She was gtng married to sum1 bt she has another past too interesting... Hmmm virat is acting all friendly for da tym being... He is eager to send her off 😆 anyways i'm eager to noe abt dis new prson.. Thanx for pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm very bad at baring surprises... So I will continue to chop my nails till you update the next part... 😳

I loved how Virat is supporting her if I ignore his motive... But oh motives could always change...

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsme update dear...
virman bonding,... good to see dat...
w8ing 4 virat's reaction...
tnx 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved .. Sorry yr . Ill comment it very very soon .

Coming soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWww ! caring and teasing virat at the same time are treat to watch! And manvi has started having feelings for virat (I concluded it from the jjealousy thing lolzzz!) i would love to see jealous Viruu as well!!!! will b a treat!

Thanks for the Pm!!! (T4PM- short form! abse yahi likhungi! lolzzz)
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Posted: 12 years ago
mee too wanna have update...
pm me too in ur next update..
trust me girl..ur story is truly awsm..compltly diff frm other's...intersting in its own ways..
waiting for your update...
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 8 (ii)

"You must be joking, right"? He chuckled leaning on to his seat in a relaxed manner getting himself immersed in his phone. I turned my face the other side of the car not wanting to show the tears that had been flowing continuously. A strange kind of fear replaced the confidence that I showed back there in the office. As I tried to wipe off the fresh tears sobs escaped from my mouth startling the person sitting beside me. He instantly kept his phone aside and turned me around so as to face him.

"You're crying? What is the matter Manvi"? He shook me by my shoulder trying to get an answer. His eyes held so many questions, which needed an answer, an answer which belongs to my past.

"Let's go home Virat" I replied quietly in a hoarse tone due to the crying. He cupped my cheeks, wiping away the tears from my eyelids before they could come out, "But what is the matter Manvi why aren't you telling me anything"? He questioned again. I got fed up of his endless questions. Why don't he understand that I want to be alone, I don't want to answer any questions. I kept looking blankly.

"Please Virat" I said signaling him to drive home.

The journey was filled with silence, from both of us, neither did he speak nor did I. "What the hell has happened to you Manvi, why are you so quiet? You weren't like this before from the time I've known you" he complained piercing his eyes into mine. We looked at each other; lost in each other's eyes, before I pulled the steering gaining the balance of the car before it could hit the person walking on the road.

"You must keep your eyes on the road, you could have injured the person badly" I replied sitting back tensed. "And what about the injury that my heart is suffering from because of your silence" he sighed looking at me again. I looked in the other direction not wanting to tell him anything, not particularly my past.

I got off the car as it halted in front of the the Vadera house. I took my way into the house taking my file without waiting for him. As I entered in, I found the house to be empty. I looked around in the anticipation to find anyone, at least Jeevika.

"Everyone has gone for the marriage choti bahu", Laxmi one of the helper informed me from behind. I turned around to face her.

"Did Jeevika also go"? I questioned taking in the fact how she hates attending marriages that includes family gatherings. "Yes, shall I serve lunch"? She questioned taking in my blank expression.

"No, I'll eat later" I said walking away from there, registering Virat who had just entered the house. He tried to speak to me but I ignored him walking away from him, my heart a little deranged by meeting my past again. I went into the room straightly and flung the file on the table. I collapsed on the bed revealing all the stress that I had gone through the morning. I slipped into a deep slumber as I thought about the person I met today.

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"Haven't they returned yet" I asked Laxmi who was cleaning the dust off the flower vase kept on the table. "No choti bahu they'll return tomorrow" she replied putting the vase down on the table.

"Laxmi call me Manvi from now on" I replied getting off the bed. She smiled nodding her head back at me. My heart had a pang looking at the time; it was almost evening, have I slept five hours? I hurriedly rushed into the washroom to refresh myself.

I got off the stairs swiftly going into hallway. Virat was looking into his laptop intently. I quietly made my way to the kitchen. He looked at me through the corner of his eyes and ignored me. Huh, he ignored me? How dare him! "Laxmi, what's there for the dinner? I asked looking around the kitchen if something was being cooked.

"I've made the dinner Manvi", she replied hesitantly pronouncing my name, I nodded my head smiling approving the change she took while calling me. "Laxmi, Virat had his lunch right? I asked hesitant. I didn't know if he had or not nor I could ask him myself which meant he would again ask about my behavior in the morning.

"No Manvi, he said he would have it later" she said taking the vessels to arrange them on the dining table. I creased my head in disturbance. Why is he being so stubborn? Why can't he get it? I sighed walking to the dining table. I sat beside him taking the plate and arranging it with food. He started eating his silently. I tried to have a friendly chat with him, I was extremely sorry about my morning behavior. I shouldn't have ignored him that way. He has got every right to question me; after all he is my friend, right? I cleared my throat in the anticipation to start a conversation whilst he ignored me and went away finishing his plate. I sat there dumbly making circles in my plate, I felt extremely sad about him ignoring me.

I opened the door only to find him sleeping on the bed facing the other side of the bed. I softly closed the door and sprawled onto the bed facing the yet other side of the bed opposite to him. I closed my eyes in order to get some sleep. He flashed in my memories, the very same person. I quickly got up wiping the sweat off my forehead and leaned on the headrest of the bed huffing. He grasped my movements and got my turning towards me.

"What happened? He asked placing his hand on mine. I took my hand away gaping in silence.

"What's bothering you Manvi? Why sudden change in your behavior from morning? Why don't you tell dammit! He held the corners of my fingers slowly getting my hand into a firm grip. I turned to face him, bringing myself to share my past, but I wasn't able to. I just can't tell him the way he told me about his past that day. I moved my head away defeated.

"I thought we were friends" he said frowning taking his hand away from mine.

"We still are" I said creasing my forehead in confusion about where he is getting.

"But you don't behave like one" he said shaking his head in disapproval.

"What do you mean"? I asked faking anger in a playful way stressing each word.

"Remember that day we became friends, I said we can share our secrets and past if you have one" he spoke the most divine words of the night. I sat dumbstruck looking at him, how did he get that? I sat looking puzzled at him.

"C'mon Manvi staying quiet doesn't let anyone know what you are suffering through" he sat holding my hand back, caressing it on one hand and on the other encouraging me to share my past with him.

"I...I..." I started speaking then trailed of taking deep breaths. He looked at me encouragingly.

"I've seen him again, the very same person whom Beeji and I had erased from our memory long ago" I said distressed thinking about him again.

"Who is he"? He asked further holding me tightly.

I looked at him with a perplexed face. Should I tell him or not? I looked into the dim light of the bed lamp besides thinking about the same.


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How's it? 😳 Don't forget to hit the 'like' button. I'm a little bit slow, no wait I'm complete dolt. I have replied to your comments through PM's (not yet done, will do). Earlier I used to reply on the same thread which didn't reach to many of you, how doltish of me!

Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update .After reading the update , first question was"why did u stop there"...

Now i would be all waiting . please continue soon. else i will go mad thinking what Manvi is going to say. so please to avoid a soul going mad thinking please update soon about her past


.Loved Virat more. The silent accusation in his eyes wen she refused to say anything about which bothers her in car , his concern on seeing her crying, the care he has on her , loved everything,.Love the way u explained everything.


Please please update soon.
Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowloved it.virat is feeling bad becoz manvi din't speak with him hmmm...
now who is manvi's past eagerly waiting continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update...
Virat is upset coz maanvi dont talk with him
Update soon

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