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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: pup03
AWESOME !!! both chapters were high voltage of emotions dear... i was crying for khushi at same time feeling bad for arnav... so beautifully written chapters... hats off to you dear.. 👏 love this SS it is highly emotional SS.. thanks for pm... will be waiting eagerly to know what happens next..

THANK YOU!!! YOUR COMMENTS AND SUPPORT MEAN SO MUCH TO ME!! THANK YOU!! 😳

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: dumas
heartbreaking update it true the past has come back to ruin his present and khushi leaving him was right yet wrong at the same time yeas she left him because of what he did but she forgot how much he has change and he change because of her and she just pushed him back in to the darkness it better they solve it together than leave each other to face the unknow pain of separation understood how she felt thinking she could have become another sheetal but even at asr worse and he has been the worse he would never cross that line she forgot he is not that asr any more because of her ,nani is really the backbone of the family glad she decide not to judge him and just came to comfort him knowing anjali and khushi would leave him khushi leaving him felt so final awesome update beautifully done thanks for the pm and enjoy the season

FIRSTLY PICTURE PERFECT AS ALWAYS!!! THANK YOU...THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE SCENES...BARUN JUST EMOTES INTENSITY SO WELL!!

n secondly i get you, about understanding why khushi leaves, and appreciating it as the right thing but at the same time hating it, n thinking but may be they should be together, as together will solve the problems rather then separate...that was my take too, i was like should i do this or should i not, n me n shariqa even discussed it n then finally decided its the right thing to do...you will see y...or hopefully you will when i finally write my next few chapters...

n OMG THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! FOR WRITING THAT YOU UNDERSTOOD HER FIXATION ON THE FACT THAT SHE FELT THAT SHE COULD HAVE BEEN A SHEETAL TOO, WHILE ARNAV IS THINKING THAT WOULD NEVER BE POSSIBLE, BECAUSE HE LOVES HER N HE HAS CHANGED... i say thank you, because when i was writing that part in i edited it like a gazillion times so that it would make sense as to why she was saying she felt like she could have been another sheetal...because it made sense in my head but everytime i wrote it, it felt like khushi was talking about something completely random...but im glad it finally came out in such a way that made sense as to why she thought she could have been a one night stand...while at the same time we can see how wrong she is because khushi could and would never be just a one night stand for Arnav...but she doesn't see this yet...so yeah...but thank you for confirming to me that that actually came across...🤗

n finally about nani...yes nani is my favourite person, not only because she is the backbone of the family, but because she is a true adult, who is wise, smart, witty, and sensible, who can use her experience of years to make the right judgement for her children, while they make the wrong ones, and what i love most is that she lets them make those mistakes because she knows the best way to learn from mistakes, is by making them yourself instead of being told that this is wrong don't do it...hai im in love with her character...there is such warmth, such wit, such wisdom in her air...n most importantly an infinite amount of love...😊

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: pakpearl
Abeer,d last updates are simply heart wrenching...I hated Arnav 4 what he'd done 2 Sheetal..I literally cried on her death...My heart ached over Anjali's pain ...but Khushi's plight has shattered my whole being... u've depicted emotions of sheer pain n agony so masterfully that i m still unable to get out of it...we all need time 2 cope with it as Khushi rightly need space ... Nani was always there 4 Anjali n Arnav but Arnav never reciprocated her love n affection..kudos 2 this lady of strength ..who is still composed 2 lessen d agony of his grandson...sssuch people r actually d binding force behind happy family life...
Abeer,i owe you an apology,sweetie...this's not first time that I show my anger n displeasure so openly n loudly...but remember one thing...we always complain 2 those only who r d closest 2 our heart...u r an amazing writer n a great human being😛😛😛 ... n I think u even daserve an award 4 bearing with me..i m sending u lot of hugs n kisses as d token of appreciation 4rm ME !!!!😉

Firstly no need to apologise my sweet fauzi, like i have always said i have never minded your complaints...in fact i appreciate them, because we only learn to better when we are faced with criticisms, because if no one criticises us then we never find out our mistakes, or when we do, its too late...n besides like you say on those closest to you, n who trully care for you criticise you as they want what is best for you therefore tell you were you go wrong...

so complain away when you don't like something, i wont mind...i swear...plus i know when you complain its not me that your angry with but my story n characters...so its all good...

'but Khushi's plight has shattered my whole being... u've depicted emotions of sheer pain n agony so masterfully that i m still unable to get out of it...we all need time 2 cope with it as Khushi rightly need space'

thank you so much for these words...you don't know how much i appreciate them...they...they seriously touch my heart...because when i was penning Khushi's plight it was so difficult for me, one because as you say its sheer agony...n two it was so hard for me to write in the correct manner, im still not sure if i did, because i mean i had it in my head, my heart, i knew how she felt and why she thought n felt what she did but to try n explain that with words was sooo difficult, but im glad i managed to do it ...o r am lead to believe that i did as most of you aren't bashing khushi, but are telling me you are crying and feel for khushi, as well as arnav...so i guess i did something write in the end...

'Nani was always there 4 Anjali n Arnav but Arnav never reciprocated her love n affection..kudos 2 this lady of strength ..who is still composed 2 lessen d agony of his grandson...sssuch people r actually d binding force behind happy family life...'

n thank you again...for these words...n this is pretty what i was just saying to dumas...that i love her character...she is the ideal Nani, Dadi...sensible, sweet, strong and loving...n it is these qualities plus a gazillion more that make her the binding strength of the family, n ensure that come rain or snow her family will remain happy,...n most importantly she know exactly what her child needs, and becomes that person for them, like she knew aranv would need a shoulder right now so she gave him one...she knew khushi and anjali needed space so she allowed them to take it, didn't say whether it ws the right thing or not...she is the real mother of these children who trully cares for them, not like dadi, who says she does, n probly does in her twisted way, but she doesn't know how to read her children or be there for them...while nani does...n more importantly nani gives them room to fall and get hurt, for she knows that is the only way they will learn how to get up and strengthen themselves so that next the same thing does not make them fall again...while dadi would just say don't do that you will fall, she doesn't give them a chance to make mistakes...therefore they rebel n don't learn...while nani lets them make mistakes so they do learn...she is never condescending to them, she will scold when she knows her child needs it but at the same time will give them so much love that they won't be afraid of her...thereby as you said keeping her family bound by love...

oki i will stop writing now, i have written n essay, n i could go on writing its these characters they are just so wonderful that i could just keep on disecting each of their traits n never get tired...😛

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Yay! So happy to see you update. What a great chapter. Good to see a stronger Arnav who is trying his best to right his wrong. Loved seeing the support Nani is giving him. So sad that him and Khushi haven't spoken or seen each other for a month. He deserves it but poor Khushi.

Can't wait for the next chapter, Khushi is calling him!!

LOL im so happy to see your the first to comment...as i hope that means you were the first to read...i say this because i felt so bad when i finally came on to update that you had been checking everyday since jan had started...so sorry once again for keeping you waiting...n am glad to see that you enjoyed this chapter...n the next chapter is on its way...you will link waiting in you inbox soonish...if all goes to plan...😛

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pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Abeer,u might've written an OS out of this reply..😉😆

Happy to c u again😊..after so looong..but where is d update ????

sorry sweetie,Ijust found d update😳..love u !!!

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: dumas
heart breaking update poor arnav i know he what he did was wrong but he is trying so hard to fix it khushi and anjali both left him with out support that was so bad glad nani was there for him emotional update loved how you describe his feeling and his wants and his hurt awesome khushi calling him hope fully she is ready to talk thanks for the pm

hmmm my fav arnav look, short, crisp hair and n the lightest of bristles...haiye...how i miss this look...

oh wait you wrote some words too...*sigh*

*coming out of my big pool of drool*

😉

yup its fixing things time for arnav...i love this about his character, he never wastes time...he doesn't sit idol, whenever he has a prob he figures out his goal, finds a solution that will lead him in the best manner to that goal n then works towards it...haiy love him...😛

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Brilliant update :)

I'm glad that Arnav actually turned into a new leaf and is actually satisfied just by Anjali's encouraging or sort of soothing words for him :)

Awww loved the relation shared by Nani and Arnav ... It's so good to see him actually sharing his heart's feelings with his Nani ...

N yes my Arshi's part ... Arnav makes me tooo emotional when it comes to his Khushi ...

N OMG she's actually calling him ?!?!
I'm just too excited to read the next part ... Hopefully she'll not give Arnav and all of us some sad news ... :)

AWW IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS UPDATE...N YUP I LOVE NANI N HIS RELATIONSHIP...I JUST LOVE NANI N ALL THE RELATIONSHIPS SHE SHARES WITH EVERYONE...SHE IS JUST...TOO GOOD...LOVE HER!!! 😊

N hehehe i think arshi just make all of us tooo emotional, n now even more cuz we don't get to see them...😔

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: kethgauthami1
When i opened mt inbox when there is a pm from you i thought i was hallucinating until i read ur whole chapter...so so long u took for update girl...

Anyways update is really emotional and superbly written..u have some extraordinary skills yaar u can make sad,happy by reading ur one update
only...but my request is update frequently gaayab math hona for 1 to 2 months

Hallucinating!!!! 🤣🤣🤣

lol...sorry don't mean to be rude...just made me laugh at myself more then you...at how evil i am to you all, you wait so much for me, n i go missing every now n then...but be assured i plan to stay put from now on, or atleast i haven't finished this ss...i won't leave you all in a lurch again...n believe you me, i did feel really bad to make you all wait for a month, but family does n should always come first...😊

nyway like i said I am back, n you should all get regular updates...well as regular as they can be...what i mean by that, it depends on me having a chapter bank which i am trying to create so that i can update, once or may be twice a week...but at the moment i have no bank, i write a chap, i update that then move onto the next one...so yeah...but i am nearly done with ch 9 so you should get a link for that soonish...😊

n you humble my dear friend on the compliments towards my writing n I am touched...n extrememly moved by how my writing manages to move you...it means so much to know that ones writing can bring about so many emotions in another person...but most importantly brings a smile to their face...that is my main objective to make ppl smile...n so thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing that me 😳

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ACTywm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here
Welcome back Abeer! Another rocking update. When I thought of the plot, it was at a very small scale but you have really used your creativity had progressed really well. Love the way its flowing and more than that your style of writing.
Can't wait for Khushi to be back with Arnav again😛