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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: additive_monaya
nice update nivi

Thanks Priyanka! I am glad you liked it!

Cheers,

Nivi

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Awesome udapte

Thank you! :D

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: additive_monaya
nice update nivi

Thanks Priyanka! I am glad you liked it!

Cheers,

Nivi

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: karthikasekhar
awsm

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...
:) Nice ...

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s
nice update...

Thanks a ton guys for commenting!

I am glad you liked it!

Cheers,

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Now.

I am retiring.

Will reply to rest of the comments later tomorrow or the day after as I am hell tired due to the festivities.

Also, I would like to wish you all A Very Very Happy and prosperous Diwali..

I know I am pretty late, but they say, better late than never!

Keep commenting, and spammers, Happy Spamming! :D

Cheers,

Nivriti

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Palak Di.

:D

I am actually very happy to know you liked my update when I very much wasn't pleased with it while writing and posting! :|

And about the ViHastory.

They are one of the cutestcouples on the show, and I really did not like the way the CVs are showing them.

It absolutely puerile.

Anyhow, yes, Swayam is supposed to be one of the most logicalcharacters in the show, and I am simply trying my best to portray him at hisbest! :D

And Rey remembering Kria is supposed to be a naturalreaction of a person who actually was deeply and madly in love.

But I guess, in the show, it's mere infatuation!

Anyhow, let's not discuss it here and get ourselves bashed or in problems!😆

Thanks a ton for your lovelycomment and making my day!!

I would update very soon as the next chapter is READYbut before that, my demandneeds to be fulfilled!😉

Love,
Nivi

Ur right.. Lets nt get ourselves a warnin o somthn.. Rules!
N I wonder.. Cv's ka infatuation is more stronger thn love... Haha :p

Btw,I ws abt to ask abt d demands!
U avnt mentioned it.. So????

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
And before you throw eggs and tomatoes on me, I am going to make a run from here, because I know this one was complete shit!

Crap /Stupid / Idiotic / Raw / Badly-versed.. These are the words I am expecting you all to write, so please feel free to criticize!

And Palak Di, you are the reason why I updated, sorry if you did not like it! 😳

Adios! 🤗

-Niv 😃

Next Chapter on page Eighty! :p Spammers make your way! 😉

@Palak Di : Hope it is clear now! 😆

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

started readin it finally...read upto part 2, havent read d comments though n I GOT D HINT!!! eh...no big deal is it?

wil giv a huge comment for all 3 parts later in d evening

OKayy so am bak..wid a loong comment...i guess...😆

first things first. i hav always loved d way u write n d3 ur style is lyk a treat for all of us i guess. lyk i pm'd u (I hope u read it) i make it a point to read stuff, e1 though i may forget to lyk n comment. d schedule doesnt leave me tym re...so dis is for all ur future works also,,, e1 if i dont lyk n comment, dont stop sendin me pm's coz trust me i read it all 😃 yes, i'l try my best to comment frm now on..

D 1st part was o gud. lyk i keep sayin it, i say it again, i dont hate taani, n dis monologue of hers, was really gud.

especially wer she thinks abt her n swayam. ofcourse i can never accept her n rey so i wont say i loved it, but der also, u penned her feeling so damn well.

and sharon!! i do not know y i love her sooo much...she is d best..

and her monologue der was beautiful really.

Part 2 was splendid. kriya's entry, her convo wid her friends, especially over guys, n d way she defends sayin all guys r not lyk dat made me go awww...

n believe it or not, am jus lyk priyansha, my frnz r always behind me to wear girly stuff 😆

wen i read rishab's part in d start i was lyk plz dont make her kria's bf..plz dont 😛

but dat part also was so nice n cute.

wen kriya said how did he move on,(rey) d tears started coming out apne aap..

*snif snif*

and d 3rd part gave a nice hang of d situation in ur story. my heart went out to ViHa..i always hav a special place in my heart for dem coz dey were d 1st couple of d3, n dat too, endin d divide.

vicky wantin swayam's help was totally unexpected, n swayam's reaction was so apt..

Plz plz plz, do continue soon, coz i cant wait to read d vicky-swayam convo.

PS: if u do reply to comments, scrap me wen u reply to mine, please 😃

PPS: i hope i dint bore u wid dis coment

😕

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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@Anonymous--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Looks whose here!!😉

Ahh so I finally read Part 2 & 3 of urs😃

And I loved both of 'em!😳

The 2nd part was really cool, I kinda like Rishab 😊 He seems like a nice guy.

Though I kinda got a little confused about the names of the other boy characters and who like who but it's Kria and Rishab who matter right?😛

Poor Kria, she's still upset about the Rey fiasco. She still kinda sorta loves him😳

I would love to see more of the Kria-Rishab pairing though!😉

Coming to Part 3, it was slightly smaller😭 but I still loved it

The ViHa thing was really said, I hope Vicky gets his gal back soon😊

SwaRon❤️ The convo was really realistic. Just like the diva would have spoken to her Majnu on the phone.😆

And Rey..aww he's still affected by Kria too. Poor guy

I cant wait for the next update! Sorry for the delay!😭

But i gave a lamba comment to make up for it

Now head over tp my Tannu os and unres ur comment!😛