Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120

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lovelyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

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oops,I am terribly late to update my comment,but I was so busy that to complete reading the update I read at three different times,every time reading 1/3rd of the update,so I couldn't comment.You are so intriguing writer that I read this chapter in bits(you can imagine I wasn't even finding fifteen minutes to read the update).Whenever I got the second free,I very quickly looged in and read whatever I could read.

This chapter was beautifully written as usual.Mami can't ever be something loveable to me,why is her behaviour always petty😒???.Payal has to face both petty mami and immature Akash,but it was her wish now nothing more than hoping for better developments can be done.I am happy that Khushi is aware that Shyam is definately fishy man and he is bad-eyeing her(my praise for Khushi who is very quick to observe this fact).

p.s Akash what tha f**k😡

p.s.s On the hopeful note,Arnav is angry on Khushi because she is designer and still she wore such a dress which was so difficult to unorbe☺️

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Caught up with all the updates...story is very interesting...

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Why the anger abt the boutique ? And why could it not have waited for them to finish what they started? Loved it...I hope she speaks to arnav about Shyam...given theri relationship we don't want to leave areas for MUs ...loved how he is so possessive abt her! Please do not make us wait for too long before the next update! Thanks for the pm.

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thesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Lovely update

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Confused abt the job question...

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Iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome update
y arnav ask abt job from her.

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a.vaishnavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey that was really a very good part.. Thanks for the pm.. wiating for the next part eagerly..

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laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

dear charlotte,

congrats on new thread,

awesome romantic passionate update loved it.

khushi was wise enough to share her doubt about shyam with Dr Manav, he is adorable and will stand by her whenever necessary. creep shyam will remain one for ever.

continue soon.

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Dr manav is really a nice person and hope he get his love soon .. and seeing shyam behaviour and doing... it seems poosible ... loved the update and arnav is being possessive of kushi...

awesome update and can't wait to read the next part

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amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Damn you Akash!! ;) It does lead to a new discovery for Arnav (despite his reaction) so I'll forgive him for interrupting ;)
I particularly enjoyed the passages describing Arnav and Khushi missing each other - there is something sweetly painful about it. The conversation with Manav was also important - certainly explained Arnav's reaction to finding Khushi with him in the garden. I appreciate the insight into Manav and his feelings for Anjali - I've always liked Manav, for being a friend in deed and need so it was heartening to read more about him and it makes me hopeful for Anjali's future.