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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#741

That was awesome...

Thanx for Arnav's POV bcoz I had same questions in my mind if Arnav has any doubt about Khushi being princess or not...

I don't want to see Arnav's trust broken & I don't want Khushi to sacrifice either.. It's gonna be tough..

What I know is that I want them to be together and happy.😊

As for the next chapter wedding bells sounds melodious.. Happy G is nice too but I really dnt understand what do you mean by G here.. so for me wedding bells but you know better -don't you😉

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

updated on pg 109😃 i made a teeny tiny si request, do discard if u don't have that in mind😳

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

The battle between his mind and heart wer written so beautifully😃😃

So bth of them are confused...wat to do next...😕

Even am waiting to kno wat happens next...😃

Thanks for the pm😉

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Thank youu for Arnavs POV!!
It really gave an idea abt what he thought during the whole meeting Khushi,,,,,,till now!

Woaah, he does have doubts whether she is the princess or not!! He does look at everything and everyone carefully.
I really want to knw more abt the curse and sacrifice!! :/

Really liked how they sleep together!

Though i hope Khushi just tells him, even aftr knwing everythung, she nt telling him, will break his heart!!

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Wedding bells? Is the story ending?? Nahiii...

It shud be happyG...More hope of the story continuing for some more time..

Loved the chapter...whether arnav is a shrewd businessman or an imminent heir to the throne...he is always super intelligent with an analytical mind...loved the way you wrote abt his pov...brought out the intelligence of a good ruler as well as the emotions of a young man in love...wonderful!!

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

nice chapter! Good to see things in Arnav's perspective! I hope khushi will open herself enough to tell him the truth!

I wonder what the curse.. and that khushi needs to sacrificed!!

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Awesome update...loved it!!

I really wanted to know Arnav's views on Khushi...he observed many things about her..

and I love how he don't want her to be Khushi because he don't want to lose her..

looking forward to read more..

do continue soon...thanks for the pm!!

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

love it, its interesting so arnav and khushi are in a dilemma about khushi's life anyways loved it and thanks for pm

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#749

arnav is having doubts about khushi identity, while khushi is in love with arnav & all she is alright for sacrifice for arnav's sake... thanks for pm... please update soon...😊

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#750

Ah!

Rasgulla!

You updated !

Thank you!

I marveled at how you brought the dilemma here for Arnav! Sacrificing. K over his sister! Is it fair, would he ask her, would she choose that! And could he choose that? What kind of a choice is this?

And setting the stage for later... When he does know she is the princess... Would he accept her reasons for not telling him? He has mentioned sacrifice to her, hasn't he? I seem to remember that. I could be wrong.

But she is running away from a situation where she was being offered up as a sacrifice to the devil already. What a conundrum!

Brilliant!

Thank you for the PM!