An ArHi Fairy Tale: Completed

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Jessica

@jessicad

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

res :))

-Unres-

Saiyuuu! Aw aww awww awww awww!! Thats all I've been doing right from the time I started reading the update!

My wife sleeps the best in my arms! --> has to be one of the best dialogues ever! *blush blush*

Khushi had been quite confused initially but by the end she could have flown with insane happiness

Imagine my happiness?

She decided to not tell Arnav about her riding skills anymore.

*Nodding head furiously* 😃

Saiyu, can I say how much I love you for bringing a prophecy into picture! What's a fairytale without a prophecy? :D

What what Arnav has a twin? Omg new twist! Thats such a shocker! I wonder how the twin would be. And I need to know the Khushi mystery! I'm so so curious!

And Ooo the goblin part was soo intriguing! I wonder who sent them!? 🤔

The fairies have gotta be the cutest component of the entire update! Love your imagination and creativity my lovee! 😳 It makes everything so WHOLE in perspective and imagination!

Goosebumps erupt on my skin whenever these two are close! ☺️ and these goosebumps wanna make an appearance again! Would you please to do so? 😳😆

So Im gonna leave this comment here because I need to hurry to give my next comment before I procrastinate again! :P

I just died when he said "My Khush" 😳😳😳

Edited by jessicad - 12 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

OMG Saiyu

I'm totally in love with this chapter

so there is a prophecy!!

She is his already

what type of sacrifice!!!

girl you got me hooked

off to the next chapter!!

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

My wife sleeps the best in my arms

She was possessive and he played along to make her happy :D

OMG Saiyu...Here comes the twist ! The prophecy ... 😲

Arnav has a twin ? 😲

He has a curse ?? What curse??

Khushi will belong to him and she should be sacrificed for the curse to lift 😲

When he mentioned, it may be a "it" and Khushi again stressed "she".. didn't Arnav read into it??

Goblins😲 Slave trade😲 There are so many shockers in this update ... But everything fitting an awesome Fairy tale ! What are fairy tales wiithout curses, goblins, fairies ... to trouble and help the love birds :D

And the last part was just awww... I have animated graphics of Arnav and Khushi, the color coded fairies (loved their conversation btw), the goblins everything playing the parts in my imagination... I'm watching this fairy tale unfold infront of me like all those animated movies I have watched .. !! Oh this can't get any better for me !!

It's so beautiful :D So Dreamy

ANd there was a forehead kiss in this update... Love it :)

He watched her ride a horse and both aren't mentioning...He's gonna put two and two together soon...He answered the questions she asked him...will she answer when he asks her?? They slept in each others arms again !

What does future have in store for them ??

Whatever it may be she belongs to him ! They belong to each other !! He said my Khushi

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Fantastic update
thankz for the pm

Edited by precious-pie - 12 years ago

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Res

Chapter 4-- wow that was awesome... I loved that.. khushi is possessive haha..
I can imagine the whole scene unravel infront of me..
Loved the way they slept together..:)..

Chapter 5-- hmm now this is truly a fairytale... the fairies and goblins..
Brilliant.. they are soo comfortable with one another..
It's getting more interesting..so he has a twin.. wow!!! She's the fix of the curse... And sge belongs to him...eeekk ...
Hmm.. I wonder how this will go.. now ill be thinking a lot...p.s again can you send this arnav over..I want his ARM around my waist..;) Hahaha.. but then again I don't wanna mess with khushi haha..
😆

Sorry for unresing late. x

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

How beautifully fairy taleish can this get??😳

I'm loving the progression in this story...the way slowly certain things which Khushi had hid from Arnav are coming to the forefront, how various details about Arnav's past is being revealed!!

Salt n Pepper! You go Khushi!!!

Awww...they are made for each other!!!

Can't wait for Arnav's perspective in this !!!😳

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Enjoyed the update Saiyu. So Arnav has a twin who is presently suffering from a curse. He is in search of something/someone called/named Khushi, that should belong to him. Khushi would then be sacrificed in order to ward of the curse. Since the princess eloped, according to him she is no longer his. Little does he realise that the connect between their hearts will make them belong to one another. There is a sacrifice awaiting, wonder in what sense.

Hey the fairies seem to represent the colour of their clothing; like the red one talks and defends the feeling of love, the white one represents purity, the green one spoke out of jealousy, while the orange and yellow ones were happy for the two. We now have a prince charming, a princess, a Devil, a prophecy, a curse, goblins and the fairies have now made an entry; now waiting for the undying, sacrificing love.

Edited by svj2 - 12 years ago