SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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afsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Arnav😲😲😲

Even i was shocked lik Aman

Felt bad for Khushi

Lets c what he does to get her

Hope he dosent hurt her

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Wow. New and Interesting Story, Smita.

And of course, As usual, beautifully written.

I'm intrigued! Looking forward to more!

Cheers!

G <3

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

wow Smita exploring a different territory away from the happy and blissful ones.. Very investing n interesting dear. This Arnav is very much different and I am already loving his obsession about Khushi.. Hope he wins his Khushi soon. Poor Khushi is so pure n naive, but i m sure she is also attracted to Arnav.. Thank u for the pm dear. U are my 1 of the most favorite writers in IF.. :-)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

very nyc part...

y arnav is hell bent to make her his mistress???????

khushi very simple girl...

waiting fr next part...

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suma0119

@suma0119

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

looking forward to more updates...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Is this a dark SS?? 😲 Arnav's words and actions are scaring me off.. How can he be so heartless...🥺 Poor Khushi...

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please6

@please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

love it so what's arnavs mind cooking up in its mind anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Damn it, I have to wander like a lost soul, until you write the next part ... dammit, dammit, dammit!!

Wow, seee?!?!?! I told you there was something else brewing in that head of yours, but this is different from anything you've ever written, and definitely darker, but hell, I'm drowning in it, the amazement, the absolute brilliance of where this is going

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: mishti_17
Is this a dark SS?? 😲 Arnav's words and actions are scaring me off.. How can he be so heartless...🥺 Poor Khushi...

No darl, it is not a dark SS. I am genetically programmed to write only pleasant SSs & OSs.😆

Arnav can threaten Khushi, but she need not give in.😆 If he thinks that he has the right to force her into something, then she has the right to say NO.

Soon, Bitwaa is going to eat his words.

Smita