FF:Unexpectedly Expected;Thd 8 Pt 44+epilogue154 - Page 23

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

243.9k

Users

479

Likes

3.7k

Frequent Posters

nadiaben thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
one word : BRILLIANT 👏
tree words : PLEASE UPDATE SOON ( i m making a puppy face and i m not eating pop corn but chocolate sirup)
Dalmuthuya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
So I will tell you my own story. *Ahem I was working on my History paper, which was sucking my blood slowly. Then I decided to take a break by watching cat videos; it was all cool, until I realized I am going down a dangerous route with too much cat videos... ( Be forever alone, cat lady, yeah we don't want that) Then I decided to check my mail, and I saw that you have updated your chapter. I smiled wide, and read the chapter. Then I decided to comment, which I am doing right now... and I wanted to say; OMFG THIS CHAPTER. THE EPICNESS IN THIS. EEPE FINALLY BOTH OF THOSE CEMENT PILES REALIZED. And I just now realized, if Khushi marries Arnav, then she will be Mrs. Cement Pile. L.O.L . Okay this comment of unwanted and wanted information is done.
please6 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
omg love it so fly airplane-airplane is being played huh anyways loved it and plzzz update soon
TabbyJ. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
ok sabi ill start with my para to para "liking" no no "loving" comment 😛


Clad in denim jeans and a white shirt, the first time she saw him dressed thus, Arnav walked towards the group, his face not giving away any emotion, doing total justice to the cement pile title which had been bestowed upon him..

i sooo want to see him in white shirt and denims!! we only got to see him "once" and that too with trouser pants!!!
cement pile will get himself in deep shit, its time to put some expressions on baby!!!


Bhai would be back for Di..

Arnav wouldn't..


my heart just clenched at that!!! poor thing, going through hell of a torture... (thought u know, i OBVIOUSLY dont know about such a feeling... but i do know how hard it is to let a loved one go)



"Arnav..I..want to tell you..rather warn you about something.." she smiled a forced smile at him..


"hm..?"


"The..the next time you..see a journalist running up to your office building gate and stopping you..don't listen..they just,stick with you in an impossible manner..you..you wouldn't want another..rum-...rumour..to spread like wild fire again right? You were lucky this time.."


she laughed..hoping against hope, that the gesture would help the lump inside her throat to melt away..but since she was absolutely failing at it she turned around and proceeded towards the check in..


"Khushi!" Arnav called from behind..


She turned around and looked into his eyes..


"if a businessman comes running to save you sometime, and if it makes it in the papers...don't ask him how to break-up, just rubbish it straight away in the media..you were lucky this time..."


They looked deep into each other's eyes for a long while and then a mutual smile spread across their faces..


Khushi stepped forward and as if already anticipating it he reciprocated her hug as she tightened her arms around him momentarily..then slowly pulled back..


"all the best" Arnav spoke gently.. "And don't drive cars yourself"


"I know how to drive cars!"


"No you don't! I remember what you did with the S-"


"SUV! I know! I was plain flustered that time. That's it"


"Whatever. You can't walk a step without tripping, and drive a mile, without crashing"


"as if you are perfect!"


"I am"


"Oh puhleese" she laughed a mocking laugh..



MY FAVORITE PART OF THE UPDATE!!

IT BRING BACK SO MANY MEMORIES!!! THE BEGINNING WHEN THEY USED TO HATE EACH OTHER TO DEATH!!

KHUSHI CONFIDENCE, THE TOD EXPERIENCE, THE BLAST AND HOW ARNAV CAME RUSHING TO HELP HER, THE NEWS, THE TIME WEN THEY SNEAKED OUT TO BUY A PRESENT FOR ANJALI AND CROSS AND ZERO 😆, AND THE FIRST UNSUCCESSFUL BREAK UP... *i can go on and on bcoz i remember it ALL*

damn u khushi wake up woman, he is indirectly telling u that u r clumsy and he is afraid of it= means he cares.. uff thick brain!!!


the arnav-nihaal bonding over sisters was very cute.. although nihaal wudve have said something funny but i guess seeing the situation it was better for him to stay within the mask of a normal guy 😛


"I guess that's yours"


and rushed away yet again..


Arnav opened his palm and his heart constricted within his chest..


as the diamond of a golden band shimmered before him...



my reaction! SHE.DID.NOT.JUST.DO.THAT...

and damn u ASR this is the time u stop a girl and say "i love u dammit" but no... thicker brain!!!

the good bye was harsh.. poor things, both of them, khushis hope got broken 😭



"That's because I never game him a chance to! From the moment he came to know about this whole mess, it's all been about my dreams, my future, my wish. I even told him that I didn't consider informing him about it till now since we would break-up anyway! Bhai, he has no idea! I am quite sure he doesn't love me, it's one-sided. FINE! But I need to tell him. And tell him, I will! Yes! I am going to tell him! Today!"


Unexpectedly expected bhai.." she chuckled..Nihaal shook his head..


at this point i was like


her thick brain WORKED!!!! and THIS IS MY SABI WITH HER FREAKISHLY AWSOME WRITING AND HER CRAZY TACTICS TO PUT ME ON EDGE IN THE ENTIRE UPDATE!! AND WOW SHE DID IT ONCE AGAIN IN A "UE" WAY!! 🤗


Taking the ring out, he smiled at it...as for the first time in years, a rush of joy of such intensity coursed through him...


Going to Delhi back, are you Khushi?


HAHAHA so ASR hass planned something bcoz he called aman, and calling aman alwayss means something good!!

i loved the anjali part where she hugged the lamp 😆 *srsly woman only u can make her do that*


the love and fate talk was so new... i never thought "love" was the main cupid and "fate" was somehow shyam 😛


in short (WELL THIS WASNT SHORT BUT HEY IM HAPPY)

i loved the update!!! even afte being crazy busy i just had to give u a BIG comment and show how much a loved it!


tabby!



soniachammu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I love u hehe lattu going back to cement pile and the cement pile doing the same is too cute
Yeah I know I expected a very old airport scene and I planted ideas and pestered u but saucy wat maazaa without troubling you to think differently
Unexpectedly expected u gave us a superb chapter wat else can I expect of course err... Ihoped against hope u put the airport singing heheh er.. okaya
:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
summaiyasayed thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb upt

luv it

it was cute and fuuny she said that she wants to go back and then nihal reply to her

poor couple feeling sad she is coming back and he is going to new york hope they met eachother soon

last pt was sweet cute and funny about luv and fate conversation

thanks for pm

updt soon
ash.candy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Its awwssuuummm!!!!!!...
Hahaha..nihaal is awsuummm...wen he tells her jump off n go swimming!!!!!...haha...lolz

Poor secretary!!!!...
Hope they meet soon!!!!!...
I jz love ur updates...it refreshes my mind!!!!!!...
Uodate soon!!!!...:):):):):):):):)...
N thnks a lot for the pm...
N congrats for the new thread!!!!!!!!...
Hpe v vil hav lot more to cum...
SUKMUK thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
UNEXPECTEDLY EXPECTED ... Superb
Dont know what to say , just enjoyed every bit of it and ofcourse conversation between Fate and Love was as ussual superb and unique ...
Loved it . 👏

sdfghjkl thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, I love you!! Yay, they're gonna confess their love to each other!! Good for them. I swear I had tears in my eyes during the airport scene, but then, everything else was just so perfect. You made everything so unique; it was not at all a cliche. The part where Aman was musing about Arnav's sanity and desire to play airplane-airplane was amazingly funny. But then again, your updates always have something in them that makes me smile. Well, I can't wait for the next update. I know it's gonna be superb 😃
emistry thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
yOu literally had my mouth dropping with signature khushi 'O".. when they both took flights to come see each other.. then it was a smack forehead... why.. cause this is so like them!!!

ahhh Loved this chapter! Thank you for not being ekta kapoor on us.. giving a leap!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".