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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I would love to read more its just that I'm confused about the story & the characters. I could not figure out what is happening 2 Khushi I know she is drugged but who is beating her??? & the million question is where is Arnav??? If u can clear some doubts in ur next update will be nice but I still love the way u write with lots of suspense.

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Alright...this mystery is getting mysterious. Wish I could read all chapters in one go...as am left hanging..guessing...confused..u name it.

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

i agree dat its a dark ff..bt stil i wud luvv u to cont wid it..
4 me..like i said b4..its nt easy to understnd xctly wats gng on..i knw after a few updates it vil def becum clear..:)
i realyyy wana knw...who d caller is..n where xctly is arnv...wat happned n y he broke all contacts wid khushi...??
cont sooon..:))

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rimaema

@rimaema

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

love your updates even though I don't really understand what is happenning lol

but anyway hope things will change for Khushi and we iwill know where Arnav is and what's happenning

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

wow man it was intersting.!

though i didn't quiet understood many

of the things but i guess soon those things

will be soon sort out as the story will proceed.!

so m loving the story .! do continue it soon..

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

What do I say, its amazing!

Its a dark story, not the kind of writing you do,

but still I want you to continue...

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Please do go on this story is gripping and very mysterious. Want to know what has happened to arnav and how in god's name Khushi ended up in the situation she is in and who it Tania, Aliya, daniel and the mystery caller.

Edited by rashika - 13 years ago