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Posted: 12 years ago
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I LOVE my sister for resing for me 🤗🤗

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Four: 😲 😲 😲 If she had not dropped the letter in DM's temple she would have never landed in AR office, she would never have gotten the job, would never have lighted a diya for DM, thereby would never have met ASR, wouldn't have challenged each other, the guest house, the resig, teaching La, the pre-diwali, diwali, post-diwali nothing would have happened! Nahiii! As juvenile as it might sound I want to tear apart your part 4!

Five:He couldn't allow anyone to rule his heart. She would never have taken interest in a heartless rich business tycoon. But it happened! Thank God on the show she didn't return to Lucknow and he was troubled by his thoughts of her leaving!

nayika probably that's what love stories are. Fate makes you meet. For some people meeting once is enough. For others meeting over a period of time is required. But fate/ God must have a hand in making you meet your soulmate. Considering the population of the world... No wonder it is said Jodiya aasmaan se bankar aati hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am gonna unres all tonight!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Who is the best on this page?

nayika 🤗



Just for you! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tres bien!


Lol baaack! Right I read it all in one go and I loved it Shue! The difference in perspective the setting the play on the scene's perfectly crafted excitingly original!

Mwah!


Edited by Nmyra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like the 'nayika touch'. Very suitable ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago




You are the bestestestestestestest 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww... thy wer soo perfect... i liked arnav's parts wher hes always thinking tht he incomplete n something is missing in his life..! lovely work nayika...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Manitaa

I like the 'nayika touch'. Very suitable ending.



Enlighten me! What is the 'nayika touch' ?? :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Who is the best on this page?

nayika 🤗


Five

I knew that they will not meet even in FIve because that is what this story is about. So I am not disappointed 😊


He is actually thinking about his Di's words rather than silently mocking them or brushing them aside :)

But the conclusion is that he couldn't


Khushi on the other hand is still waiting for her rajkumar who might be in Lucknow and not in Delhi standing next to his plants :)



If they had not met at the show, how we would have spent a gazillion hours on them? I am glad they met there 😃


When will I meet my perfect one? I think I should turn around often, he might be just behind me so that he can get after me :P


These past 2 weeks have been quite enjoyable for me because I got to read so much from you plus I am not a silent member anymore hence I can try to appreciate your excellent work :)



I know some people were hoping that they would meet but not to be unfortunately.

And I skipped over the time at Arnav's house because they actually didn't meet that time which I remember I found surprising at the time! :O

Glad I could entertain you and hopefully will do so in the future too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! I never thought they would never meet but what a great way to show a story. I love the imagination that you put in. I liked the concept and great writing. And I loved the message at the end. It does make you wonder doesn't it? But I think that your soulmate will meet you because that's the only way you can be complete. I believe two people are made for each other and they will meet. Just leave it to destiny.
Thank you for the pm.
This was a pleasure to read.

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