FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 68

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzy !!!!!!

First ...take a bow ..again !!!👏 Romance Queen, sahi naam diya maine ..and you've lived up to it, aur abhi tak Gutter khola bhi nahi hai LOL🤣

Next ...pehle socks, phir shoes ...ab aage kya kya ?😆

On a serious note, this is what I call proper grovelling, it really is !!! Pehle A for effort, A+ for sorry, aur ab A+++ for grovelling ...I love him !!!!😛

Oh the shatir dimag was hiding and observing her ...Hey Bhagwan !!! The way her breathing hikes up when you are close to her, the way she forgets everything when you look in her eyes, the way she returned your ring only because she thought you returned it first, NOT because you left her stranded at the mandap ...aur kya spell out karna hai Arnav bitwa ...Bas apna faith reinstate karo and lage raho, she needs to be handled really carefully and nurtured, after what you've done to both of you ...

I am very happy with the way this "Saali tu maani nahi, kabhi toh maanegi " phase is being done, rather than have him kneel down and plead again and again ...that would have been unreal, difficult to digest !!!

Ulti slipper ? ...I can actually imagine the scene ...awesome !!! Shatir dimag again hain na ? I so love him all over again !!!!! Awww 😉

Choomna ?!!! I jumped when he said that 🤣, oh I loved NK and Mami today, right balance to the awesome Rabba Veys !!!!⭐️

Love the way use use all the characters ...feels like old IPK where everyone had a role to play ...the whole family sitting together, making plans, pulling each other's legs coupled with Mami's expert remarks always brings out a warm feeling, makes me nostalgic ...so much at home !!!

Well done !!!👏

Waiting for the Hazratganj shopping and Kulfi ...slurp slurp !!!!😛

PS - still visualising the once-mighty-now-loverboy ASR kneeling down, holding her slippers in his hand, waiting for her to slide her foot in ...Too good !!!! Haai !!!!

PPS - Swethaaa !!!! I know, Ramanchi na ...purani GF ko see kiya phir PR bana diya ...Rangila past , I tell you !!! Haaawww !!!😲😆

Originally posted by: smitzy

hehehee Romance queen eh? 😳 well more to come from where this came from hahahaa.. guttar khola nahin hai HAHAHAHA 😆 yeah you are right.. jab guttar khulega to kya hoga janab -e-ali 😉 I've a feeling gutter wapis aane ke liye abhi time hai

Ya this stalkerish way of manao-ing Khushi seems more realistic and more ASR-ish than the pleading sorry right? We'll see the teasing, the chemistry of Payash sangeet/mehndi days in this FF too. Only thing is Khushi will be more guarded now.. I see one more intense emotional scene in the future.

oooh the shopping is going to fun, I promise hehehe

muaaah cheers darling for such a lovely comment 🤗

Okay then !!!!

Intense emotional scene ? Bring it on...the sadist in me and Swetha toh would die for those any day, pakka !!! and with your style of writing ...double pakka !!!!😃

Originally posted by: januable_sammy

RES! I'll update after getting home from college.

Okay, so I honestly don't know whether I even deserve this spot on the first page following one of your beautiful updates. I realize that I have not ever commented before & you're probably sitting there like who's this new chic reserving? Well, this chic is one of your most devoted readers of this fanfiction. I have been religiously following it since update one. I know it may be hard to believe considering the fact that I made no attempt to express my gratitude to you for gifting us with such masterpieces, almost every day! Before I talk about your writing (& I have A LOT to say) I have a little story to tell you. Some two weeks back, over the weekend, I checked the ff for updates like any other day and I was highly bummed out when I realized that there were none. But then I thought, hey the girl needs a break. So the next day I checked again' and no update. & it went like that for two weeks. I thought that maybe you had created a new thread so I checked the first page of your second thread for a link (stupid me, doesn't know how fanfictions work. I was doubtful about the third thread because I thought writers made new threads after 150 pages. I am enlightened now). Needless to say, I found no link. & I got really worried that maybe I had jinxed you for giving regular updates, or worse you had put the ff on hold. I felt really guilty for not commenting & continued to check the second thread every day. & then today, while I had some time off in college, naturally I checked the second thread' again. & I had an epiphany of sorts so I typed in the name of your ff on google search and LO & BEHOLD, THE THIRD THREAD CAME UP, WITH 9 READY SCENES WAITING IN ALL THEIR GLORY. I cannot possibly tell you how happy and relieved I was seeing that you were still updating.

So that was my sad tale' with a happy ending(: Now coming to your writing'.

OK I had to break up your comment into two parts because of it's sheer size.

I.AM.BLOWN.AWAY.

seriously woman! I've read and reread your comment like 5 times already and all I can say is that I am completely FLOORED!! 🤗 thank you for your lovely words!

and I apologize that you had to spend two agonizing weeks waiting for the third thread.. I believe I'm to blame as I didn't update the Thread2 with the new link of Thread3 when I started it.. but you went to the pains of checking it everyday and then googling it too? OMG! I adore you for that! Truly.

And I can't believe I've made a commentator out of you (you admitting to being a silent reader so far) and I DEMAND a comment from you going forwards hehehehe 😊 No seriously though, I would love to hear from you as and when you read the scenes. Your inputs as readers and your support means a lot to an amateur writer like me.

Originally posted by: januable_sammy

I honestly don't know where to begin, what to say, how to describe your fanfiction. It has truly rendered me speechless countless times. It is perfect by all means, but that mediocre expression doesn't fully have the impact I was looking for. As you see, all of us aren't best friends with words. I for one do not have the talent to weave words so that they yield skillfully written pieces, as you do. So please, bear with me as I make an attempt, a futile one for sure, at expressing why I love your ff so much. I know you certainly don't need me to tell you that you are gifted' that one is a given (someone explain to me why you aren't part of the creative head team of IPKKND?!) Anywhoo, here we go. First of all, I just absolutely LOVE the pace of this ff. It is perfect in the way that nothing stretches, we are satisfied, AND we can enjoy the little scenes while not losing focus of the bigger issue. So, give yourself a pat on the back because I personally know, having taken creative writing, that that is no small feat. Secondly (I realize that I'm sound really methodical but I have no other way to organize my thoughts), the small stories within the bigger storyline (such as the engagement ring MU, her dad's operation, nosy media fiasco)' I have no words.. again. IT'S SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I love how everything ' I emphasize, everything you include ' are intricate threads of the storyline. Everything comes full circle (Unlike the show, where the CV's often suffer from partial amnesia. Sorry I couldn't help myself. It gets really frustrating sometimes). & when I pick out the details when reading the ff and go off in tangents imagining possible scenes that could result, IT'S SUCH A GRAND SATISFACTION when you gift the readers with updates that relate to previous scenes. I don't understand how exactly you do that, but I notice it every time so KUDOS TO YOU. & lastly, the biggest compliment I can give you is that every time I read your update, the scene is playing in my mind with Sanaya and Barun. You have kept the spirit alive of the show and you have stayed true to their characters in all your updates' girl, they don't even do that on the actual show. & it's so satisfying to read your ff knowing that these people really are Arnav & Khushi.. no variations, no changes. They are the characters we fell in love with in the show & that's precisely why I fell in love with your ff. It is not a fanfiction to me anymore. Your ff is almost like an alternate episode of IPKKND I get every day.

I know I haven't done justice in conveying how truly amazing (excuse me while I kick myself for using suchhh a mediocre word yet again) your writing is but I also know that there is no way possible I can do that. But like I said before, you don't and you shouldn't need anyone to tell you that.

Reading my comment, I realize that I didn't talk about the content of the ff AT ALL. I'm sorry, but it's sort of impossible considering the fact that discussing content means discussing 50 scenes. But I think I can sum up my thoughts by saying that never have I loved Arnav and Khushi more in a fanfiction. They are both portrayed so perfectly and in character. Arnav has redeemed himself in my eyes and Khushi is also equally right in not giving in yet. I find myself understanding them both & I really love how you and Arnav, both, are slowly cracking the shell of protection that Khushi has taken refugee under. Kudos to you again.

Once again, just in case I didn't make myself clear before, this is by far my favorite fanfiction and please keep writing. You brighten up so many lives<3

Love,

Jazzy

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

I send a hug for giving us two cute rabba ves🤗 Awesomewa!
I was laughing at NK, bechara! Luckily he had Akash to clarify but it seem even he was in the mood to tease NK about Nandini😆 Now you need to fill us in on what actually happened between these two...did NK find her? Meet her?

Getting to best scene, Khushi running expecting Arnav to chase while the latter in glowing in happiness over what just happened. And aww, he kept Khushi's ring with his mother's payal...so sweet na! 👍🏼
Love the way he kept looking at Khushi and tried to show his ring hand in front of her. Good, Anjali noticed their reactions and planned a shopping trip. She's the best di ⭐️...cupke si sab kuch kerna.

Last scene with Arnav making Khushi wear her slippers was oh so damn cute! As he unfolded the paper I thought maybe he'd show the ring as he was so casual. And Khushi wore it incorrectly! 🤣

Originally posted by: asr13

Okay then !!!! 👏

Looking forward to your version of manao-ing, its just so cute...yup you are right, reminded me of Payash sangeet, and the havan ...uff with all that flirting, teasing, kya farq padta hai wale scenes ...can't wait now !!!!!😃

One thing ...guarded or not, Khushi ka sara guard wholely and solely goes for a toss when she is with him ...and thats the best part about their chemistry !!!!!

Intense emotional scene ? Bring it on...the sadist in me and Swetha toh would die for those any day, pakka !!! 😛and with your style of writing ...double pakka !!!!😃

bada wala hug🤗

Bas !😉

Originally posted by: panck

Thanks for the PM

Now did he do that deliberately just because he could confuse her...

Cannot wait to read more..

Originally posted by: smitzy

Hey dear! 🤗

I didn't realise I had written two Rabba Ves hehehee now that is highly unusual eh? romantic movie nai dekha yaar.. but I was watching the sangeet scenes followed by the havan and holi scenes.. so mood mein aa gayi thi hehehee 😉

I absolutely LOVE NK and Mami's character yaar, I really wish I could have used them more in the previous scenes but not to worry they'll make up for it now.. NK-Nandini scene is just getting started you see.. ya ya he was stalking her, but whether they met up or not you'll find out soon 😉

Aradhna was an ex-gf! holy Jesus! I didn't watch that episode so I had no clue hahaha that was really not intentional but just to think I hit bulls eye with the name hehehe..

cheers darling! muah! 😊

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Okay, if u had watched those scenes obviusly u were bound to incorporate Rabba Ves!

I know...i just love Nk, Mami.These are the characters who somehow just put a big smile on my face..and i just adore them!
And im really thankful that now we will be able to see more of NK! Especially him romancing!😉

Hahaha...yea she was! yup u hit the bull eye on that one!

Originally posted by: asr13

Ye lo !!! Ab iski aur Arnav ki telepahy bhi shuru ho gayee 😲🤣...kaahe ka bulls eye !!!!😉