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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Loved it!!!

even I loved lavanya's monologue...especially the part where she described arhi's love for each other !!! so i think lavanya is here to stay but hopefully khusi won't leave arnav!!!

though i missed arhi towards the end i know you will make up for it in the coming updates!!!

now we are getting a little idea of what must have happened!!! so was it a one sided love from arnav's side or arjun forced himself on lavanya???

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

tht was simply awesome one..

simply loved it

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

I am in love wid Lavanya ! Wat a nice girl she is ! Khushi's and Arnav's scenes r nice ! Waiting for more ArHi's scene

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

"Six years! Six years you went through all these sh**s just to die now? Just to die now, like this? That's it?" he asked her in disbelief. "Before taking those pills, just for once, did you think about the people who love you? Why you people can't understand that this life of yours belongs to people around you as much as it belongs to you! Effect of suicide is not just a death, Lavanya. It affects every life around you. That's why it is termed as a sin." He explained her in much controlled voice.

I loved your view on suicide... That was brilliant...👏

I think There no need to change your writing style...The story is perfect as the way it is...Btw great update...😳

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

awesome update. Loved it. I feel so bad for lavanya. Arnav created a huge mess around himself. And now he has to deal with it!

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MJ_K2

@MJ_K2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

thanx for the pm. nice update

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

so is lavanya going to play a cupid now between arhi???????

loved the update...khushi n la both sorry for each other...but arnav n khushi have a lot of things to mend...especially arnav :)

thanks for update and pm

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

This is the one scene where, even though, the focus was not on Arshi, I still truly enjoyed reading it :)

I truly felt sorry for Lavanya, no one is wrong in this situation, its just that the situation itself is wrong.

I loved everything about this chapter :)

And P.S. I dont mind late updates if they are as awesome as this one lol ;)

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guyinoblivion

@guyinoblivion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

so mature of lavanya to think like that without going thru a messy breakup..it would be better if khushi left Arnav, because She thinks Arnav has married her only for the baby not for her.

If khushi leaves Arnav now it would make this story spicier and better for Arnav to remove the act and pour out his emotions in front of her.