Arhi FF[Complete] - Running From The Truth THREAD2 link pg 142

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Emma,

This is quite intense and very well written, I can totally empathize with Khushi. Poor girl torn between the past and present. For some reason Arnav is just not ringing true - such emotion with no follow through is not making sense. But I am sure you know what your characters are upto.

Wonder what NK's reaction will be.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: panck
Emma,
This is quite intense and very well written, I can totally empathize with Khushi. Poor girl torn between the past and present. For some reason Arnav is just not ringing true - such emotion with no follow through is not making sense. But I am sure you know what your characters are upto.
Wonder what NK's reaction will be.

Thanks for the wonderful feedback! Yess I know how you feel, Arnav is a bit of a strange character. He doesn't quite know how to make things right and the only thing he's sure of is Khushi. Some may call him a coward, and others may sympathize with him but it's all up to how you feel. You'll gradually find out more about him as the story unfolds :)

-Emma <3