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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

I want more!!!!!

And what is it with this Amar?! Is he gay? He doesn call for months?? That doesn happen in the normal sane side of the world He must be either from the mafia- I don't know I jus don't know tht part of the world so assume they're weird enough to not call fam for months, gay as I suggested above, amnesiac, dying (suffering frm life threatening illness where he's too sick to care), his mother's or father's dying wish to 'settle down' which made him secretly get engaged to K... no scratch tht It doesn make sense

Okay spill the beans M!

I like his subtle not-too-pushy flirty style =D Well done inspiration guy! Or you M for mellowing your actual too flirty inspiration I really do like ths portion of flirty (=

I want moorre!!

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

ahh the craziness between them continues! Love it!! Again I cant wait when they actually get together.. its going to be EPIC!!!

Ohh I wonder will finally make an appearance back.. now that khushi is giving him a taste of his own medicine!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

The best of this story is the Diary talks..

These two are just adorable...

What is with Amar..even though he has not come fully into picture I already find him annoying..

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eyesonme

@eyesonme

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Love this FF

I love this cheeky Arnav 😃

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

I have gone bas*ard. 😆

Amazing update... its just full of fun and flirty Arnav...

cant handle this extremely flirty ASR!!! too much for me... But i want More... 😳

cant wait for next!!

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

OMG IM DEAD i just loved the update

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Omg they both r so cute and adorable... Arnav at his flirtatious best and Khushi well Khushi is Khushi ... God even I had butterflies fluttering in my stomach when he was being so flirty with her... A fantabulous update.

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Shrutee

@Shrutee7

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

masam kinsella!! ahha so i just read all your chapters in one go on my blackberry and i dont know why i cant type in capslock right now but wowowowowowow i'm loving the story and i feel like im reading a next level sophie kinsella book whenever the story is from khushi's point of view. i'm probably toally off but when it comes to amar i am reminded of the movie kismet connection, where vidya balan's fiancee in the beginning is always out and about for work and we find out he's having an affair with the boss' blondie gf. i like to picture faces of the characters i'm reading so i picture him as amar :p love arnav in this he's just so ahhh lindtt chocolate melting hooot. oe how you are so..little moments descriptive. anyways loved chapter 8 it gt too hot in my room when they were in the conference room together..I need sme chocolate for myself now and wll "daydream" of nanaaav mere..not hai but aashiq.

PS am sending you a buddy request tink that's how it works to receive a pm for the coming chapters.

Xoxoxo

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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

OMG Arnav doing all that to Khushi feels like its happening to me...

LOL I found this funny.. While she was facebooking and checking Amar his "fiance" message. Arnav was behind him and stole a kiss..

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Wow. Why do I feel like I have also gone bas*ard with them?! AHHH!

Perhaps it is because I read this entire story that youve weaved at once...8 chapters in one-go with just one skinny latte...and now, I WANT MOREEE! ALOT MORE!

Your probably thinking who is this random girl going nuts about my writing, and commenting for the first time lol I happened to stumble upon your FF when I was supposed to start my Philosophy essay, and its been 2 hrs and my word document in blank since Ive immersed myself into this world of these two in seattle, where this is wit, flirting, teasing, diaries, and lots of caramel...YUMMM!

You have definitely weaved a tale that is different, raw and so unique from what we perceive of Arnav and Khushi in the show, and thats what I love!! The characters, be it the protaganists or the side characters, including Chloe, Payal, Aman, Aditing, Garima and Avani...everything is done with perfection, and when a reader reads all this, you can just tell...infact, feel it.

Special mention to the UNEXPECTEDness of the storyline even if it inspired by a couple you are very close to. When they first met at Starbucks, and then, the lunch, afterwhich, the club...and then, khushis apartment, her bedroom, him on the ground and her on the bed...and if that was not enough, the next morning brings in the parents...I WAS HOOOKED! I love surprises and your writing has given just that, with lots of wit and sophistication! And, now the flirtaciousness has just begin with the ring off the ring finger...wooohooo more stolen kisses? I cant wait!

Before I ramble out of this universe...I just want to end it with I AM LOVIN' this...and I am definitely excited to read so much more...Ive got this bookmarked, but if you do pm's...dont forget me :) Thank you!

Also took a look at your index, will read your one-shots and your FF that I think is removed from here to a blog...is there a way I could read it...ofcourse after finishing off my midterms?

Gluck for your viva's...Im just at my MCAT level so no where close to where you are lol

Keep up the great workk!!

P.s Also, why do I feel that Amar will only make an entry at the climax? Just when things get really serious for Arnav and Khushi? Hmmm...

- Dee

Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago