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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow! That was one awesome episode Sayieda!

Arnav and khushi's phone conversations and his teasing everything was damn cute!

Lavanya heard it? Uh-Oh!

And he had to reveal the truth and he gets a slap and a more shocking revelation that she wanted the baby! 🤣

SHE WANTED THE BABY? What the? "Why dint you sleep with me?" ROFLMAO!

Great one! Just loved it.And the update was long too! Loved it :)

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deep5128

@deep5128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awesome update loved it!
Thnx 4 pm... Continue soon

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow...That was an Amazing update ,but the catch was the last line...Looking forward to the next chapter.Thanks for the PM

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khusharnav

@khusharnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Thanks for the pm. I loved this part. Very nicely written. I particularly enjoyed the way Arnav was teasing Khushi. Hilarious how Arnav was adding to his misery. And great way to end with that slap...

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Did she just slapped him?! 🤣🤣Oh my... Lavs she was at door rite, she heard everything!!
Oh this is funny n sweet!!!
"apple of ur eye is not falling from my tree" that is epic...🤣🤣
" why didnt u sleep with me?? I wanted our baby??" 🤣🤣🤣🤣She is crazy!! But i love her...
Update soon...

Edited by khusiarnav - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

This was absolutely brilliant, just loved it...you are an awesome writer, had a smile while reading it..it was hilarious, sweet and very romantic...could see Barun s sexy smirk through all the teasing !

Loved the end where she says why did u not...I wanted our baby...loved how he said all my apples will fall from your tree...

This one was really superb, loved the index too! Brilliant, you are so so talented !

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Loved the update, especially Khushi's reaction in the end! :D

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

o wow! and oh my god... khushis reaction just threw me off!!!

she slapped him for not sleeping with her 😲

lavanya is in and so she knows everything now?

i am loving this!

i didnt get the pm for the previous two parts so was feeling a bit disoriented! had to read from start to get a hang of it 😔

thanks for pming me for the 6th part... the index helped 👍🏼

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

OMG...awesome update...

finally khushi's doubt cleared by arnav...

thn tight slap...😆 fr didn't make her pregnant...

so she wants to be mother...

i think soon her dream going to true...

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

this was too good the last part specially the part where she says I wanted our baby...great job

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