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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

omg are ya kidding me she sure gave him a bloddy heart attack
now she does wanna be pregnant
man whats wrong with her
god you are good just like the others before you
how did ya think of this man this will be fun
he was pulling her leg huh that was mean but then its gotten backfired on him huh
bechara wont even know what hit him now
and ppl la is there as well we sure didnt notice her huh
cheers for pm
waiting for the next bit now

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

omg...i absolutely loved it very much dear...omg arnav had fun teasing her...lol...hehehehe...did she just say she wanted to be pregnant and slapped him???lol i was laughing...la heard their convo...nice...please continue soon n thnx 4da pm dear...

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dva2vra

@dva2vra

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

pregnant thi to problem nahi hai to problem. uff

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Laughing my head off just imagining the whe thing.
Fab update!!
Cannot wait to see their reactions... Both
Lavanya and Arnav

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Honestly, in my opinion, this one was the best part after the 1st one for me!!!👏

Loved ArShi's conversation about the apple of Arnav's eye & Khushi as the tree!🤣

& the whole part after they start chatting on the phone was simply awesome!!As I was reading, I kept wondering how good it really really was!!Great work done!👍🏼

Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

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What an index,I am very impressed by the way you introduced this ss. Samiya,I am both happy and proud for the fact that you are an intimidating lady with tenacious claws😆,otherwise how would we have been able to read such amazing collaborative work.Well done Rasgulla_sp(sorry,I don't know your name).This part was very well written and I was grinning and laughing throughout while reading this ff and I dare say this update was the best of all the updates of this ff.Waey..Khushi wants to be a mother"I wanted our baby",Khushi although I loved you before you uttered this dialogue,but now I absolutely adore you.

Edited by lovelyangel - 12 years ago

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

my god,,, this update totally cracked me up🤣.. first tht apple n tree part,, these both r nuts,,, n thn khushi slapping him n saying tht she wanted d baby,,, u writers are fantastic,,

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BlueMystique
LOL forever!

Okay, Sayieda! I knew he would have to reveal the truth to her, but dang! She wanted the baby? Bahahahahaha!

Oh, Arnav to gaya kaam se! :')

I loved the phone calls, and tell me he DID NOT call Darcy a buffon! #Blasphemy!

I loved the teasing! So cute! But now he's going to payyy ;)

And Lavanya knows! Oh shit's going down! Can't wait!

Li! Go on! Make me proud! :')

PS: Loved the index, and that is NOT a joke! Pfff! Sami is a slave driver!

The bold part

Write my slaves write

whips them again and again

hu ha ha ha