'Swaron SS: A Fairy Tale' - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

104

Views

11.8k

Users

29

Likes

210

Frequent Posters

Karen_sharon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: crazysky

hey its awesome

loved it
plz m sorry 4 not commenting b4
is taani is in ur ff...??
if yes plz dont pm me...
n the concept is awesome n ch-1 is awesome

are i think u skipped the intro..i had clearly mentioned in dat der is no TAANI stuff in this FF only Swaron and some Kriyansh stuff! so I am goin to pm u rite??
crazysky thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

are i think u skipped the intro..i had clearly mentioned in dat der is no TAANI stuff in this FF only Swaron and some Kriyansh stuff! so I am goin to pm u rite??

yup pm me
Karen_sharon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#53
k dear.. i will surely!
Swaron17 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awww poor sharon...
n oh my gosh 3 kids already...
bt a very nyce post..loved it
Karen_sharon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Swaron17

awww poor sharon...
n oh my gosh 3 kids already...
bt a very nyce post..loved it

Thank u SOoo much melli dear...luvd the comment
shaani2209 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#56
cute start...
nice concept,,..
Holy lord!!! 3 kids😲 like for real????
do pm when u update...

Karen_sharon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Heya guys I am back with Part 2 it's a bit small as iske bad Swaron SS bhi update karna hai so plz understand yaron..! Now hope u like this part. (Enjoy)

PART 2

Sharon was left shocked she broke down'she cried bitterly..she couldn't belive..what she had heard was true.Swayam the guy who cud go crazy for her..now doesn't recognize her!

Sharon (To Rey) : Rey..tum plz use bolo..use sab kuch yad dilane ki koshish karo'plz.!

Rey: Sharon I know its difficult..but see..mein tumhe uske sath rehne dunga..he'll slowly realize his love and be normal.

Swayam enters his room not knowing that there was a Trio inside.

Swayam enters the room with a glass of juice in his hand.

He opens the door and

Trio: BHOO!

Swayam:aaa'mera juice and alas the juice was spilled all over his body!

Shreni: OMG! Yeh uncle toh ek dam hamare dad jaise dikhte hai!

Swayam always had an attachement with Kids..so instead of getting angry he knelt down in front of the three musketeers and said

Swayam:Aap kaun ho beta???

Shreya: Yeh Shreya ki behen hai..!

Swayam: Shreya..woh kaun hai!

Samir: Ooo..yeh uncle Shreya ko nahi jante..uncle Shreya yeh hai meri behen hai..yeh humesha dance solo mein First ati hai!

Shreni: Uncle apko pataa hai'aap ekdum hamare papa ki tarah dikthe ho!

Shreya:Ha..uncle..apko pata hai humare papa..mumma kehti hai he was the cutest person on this earth.

Swayam: beta..apke papa abhi kahan hai?

Samir: Uncle 15 saal pehle ek Plane crash mein papa kho gaye..us plane mein hamare ma bhi thi'unhone wahan papa ko bohot dhunda..par who kabhi unhe dhund nahi paye.

Shreya:Uncle..aap Mujhe dato nahin toh mein apse kuch poochon??

Swayam: ha princess..poochon na!

Shreya: uncle kya mein apko papa bula sakti hoon!

Samir and Shreni: Ha uncle hum bhi apse yahi poochna jate the!

Swayam: haan mere three musketeers..bilkool bula sakte ho!

Trio: Yeh'!

Shreya and Shreni kiss Swayam on his cheeks..and hug him tightly.

Samir hugs all three of them from behind.

Sharon was quietly staring them from behind.A tear escaped from her eyes as she saw Swayam so cutely playing with Shreya,Shreni and Samir.

Swayam: Mere three musketeers tum Mujhe apni maa se milaoge?

Tri: haan..wo rahi mom..Ma aao na!

Sharon walks slowly towards them.

Swayam: tum..toh tum sach keh rahi thi!

Sharon: haan Swayam..plz Mujhe galat mat samjho!

Samir: oo..toh ma ap inhe jante ho.

Sharon: ha beta..yeh tumhare dad he!

Swayam: hey mere musketeers tum log rey uncle se bahar jakar milo..hum ate hai.

Shreya: k..ever1 follow Sherya in a line..no talking in line..I am the monitor!

Samir and Shreni: Yes monitor!

Swayam: Sharon..can we plz sit and talk?

Sharon: ya Swayam sure..chalo lets sit on the bed!

Swayam: ya come..

They sit on the bed

Swayam holds sharon's hand and says

Swayam: Look Sharon I understand ur condition..but can u plz help me in something..ya Swayam bolo na!

------------------------END OF PART 2-------------------------

So guys here I end Part 2..I'll be updating My Swaron SS in a while..so stay online..!

And ya consider the same precap as in Part 1!

Edited by Karen_sharon - 12 years ago
Karen_sharon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: shaani2209

cute start...

nice concept,,..
Holy lord!!! 3 kids😲 like for real????
do pm when u update...

Thanx dear..I've updated the next part!
pooja123456 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#59
hey...do update soon!!
thanks for the pm and do continue to do so!
nature2 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#60
cuteee threee miscritear 😉😉😉

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7 Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Nush_Rat

1 years ago

A Tale As Old As Time

Author's Note Hello my dear readers! Back in 2020, right after Nazar had ended, I along with my dear friend Nikita wrote a short story on our...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".