NC 17/Arhi SS: Finally Married- Honeymoon:Complete - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏thanks...fantastic👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loving their bonding and love...so romantic ! Thanks for the pm, glad mami is giving me updates in Shyam, and sure arnav had spoke to Aman to tell him something abt the money ! Brilliant !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃Aww! So cute. He's thinking about her and putting her desires before his. So sightseeing tomorrow? The Tower? Shopping on the Champs Elysee? Seine River Dinner Cruise? A romantic one, I hope? (Mmm... transporting me back...) I cannot wait! Thanks for the PM.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...that was so swt of him..he is cmplt man..he cares fo hs wife..he luks afta hs famly so well..he z jus perfect!! i love dis innocent khushi! thy way c speaks is so adorable!! awesome update!!!!thanx fo da PM n upate sun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...Read all the 4 parts at a stretch...Arnav is a thorough romantic...Romance in Paris...Loved Mrs jamesbond Mamiji...Thanks for the PM
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Thanks everyone for liking the story so far. Shall update today.
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Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Hi dear thnks for pm
and reallt hatts off to u dear in 1 day u complete 4 parts greattt dear,,,brillent job,,
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The reason being I don't like leaving my readers hanging. So, I try my best to complete what I start, quickly. I should admit the next one is taking a bit of time. But wont be long.😉
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Originally posted by: Afya

The reason being I don't like leaving my readers hanging. So, I try my best to complete what I start, quickly. I should admit the next one is taking a bit of time. But wont be long.😉




Srsly It was lovely!!

Loved it!!
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Here's part 5. Hope you enjoy it. Share your thoughts.😊 Feel free to share what you liked and what you didn't like.

Part 5:

Arnav woke up to see a bustling Khushi. He sheepishly half opened his eyes to see his dear wife pacing the room back and forth, with the tooth brush in her mouth, a towel in her hand and above all, she was talking to herself.

''Poori pagal hai'' (She is totally crazy) Arnav smiled.

Khushi stopped, as she noticed Arnav had woken up.

''Arnavji, Uthiye'' (Arnavji, Wake up) khushi insisted.

''Kya hua, Khushi?'' (What's the matter, Khushi?) Arnav said sitting up. He realised it was 5 in the morning, as he glanced at the clock. ''Tum itni subah kya kar rahi ho?(What are you doing this early?) Arnav enquired

''Hum? ...Hum sab aaj ghoom ne jaa rahein na, ... Isliye uthgaye''. (Me? We are going sightseeing today, R'nt we? So I got up early. ) said an excited Khushi. ''Humein tho neend hi nayi aayi''. (To be honest, I was unable to sleep as I was excited)

''Why wasn't he surprised'', thought Arnav. ''She was a classic piece''

''Arnav ji, Hum kya pehne aaj?'' (Arnavji, which one shall I wear today? ) asked Khushi pointing to a pale blue saree in one hand and an olive green salwar suit in the other. He was the one who had gifted them both. ''Kaunsa achha lage ga hum pe?'' (Which one will look good on me? ) enquired Khushi


''Tum mujh se pooch rahi ho, khushi?'' (Are you really asking me what looks good on you? ) Arnav smirked

''Haan, tho? Aur kaun hai, yahan pooch ne ke liya? Kahiye na, Arnav ji'' (Ofcourse. Who else is here for me to ask? Comeon, Arnavji, Help me please ) Khushi said

''Tum sab se Zyada... '' (You look the most...) Arnav thought loudly, Arnav slid out of the bed and whispered ''achhi apne birthday suit me lagthi ho'', (pretty in your birthday suit) Arnav grinned. Khushi blushed as she very well knew what he meant. ''Arnav ji'', she hit him softly on his chest as her face grew all red and shy.


He smiled and pointed to the saree, 'Yeh' he said as he walked to the bathroom. He knew he couldn't have her in her birthday suit now. Not yet. He had promised to show her the city of Paris. And he will. But only he knew how difficult it was gonna be to keep his eyes off her when she was gonna wear that beautiful saree. He consoled himself thinking he would take the pleasure in removing it tonight.

All the four of them relaxed as they had breakfast in a cafe. It was a nice little place with hustle and bustle. Arnav was looking at the street, when he felt Khushi's nudge on his arms.

''Aap kise dekh rahein hain? '' ( Who are you looking at? )enquired Khushi. She had noticed some scantily dressed women walk by. Arnav turned around to his darling wife, ''Kisi ko nahin, Khushi, Main soch raha tha'' (No one, Khushi dearest. I was just thinking. ) said Arnav to his cute possessive wife.

''Achha'' (Ok) said Khushi satisfied. She trusted him more than herself.

''Jiji, humein DM ki bahut yaad aarahi hai. Hum aaj mandir chalen?'' ( Jiji, I am missing DM very much. Shall we visit the temple today to seek her blessings? ) asked Khushi facing Payal

''Mandir? Khushi? Paris me thodi hi DM ki mandir milega tumhe'', ( Temple? In Paris?How on earth will there be DM's temple in Paris, Khushi? ) said Payal

''Haan, Jiji. Yahan tho nahin hoga, na? Humein Unki moorthi leke aana chahiye tha'',( Yeah, Jiji. You are right. There won't be one here. I should have brought her idol with me. ) Khushi said patting her head.

They stood outside '' Cathdrale de Notre Dame de Paris''.

''Arnavji, Kahan?'' (Arnavji, Where? ) khushi exclaimed.

'' Cathdrale de Notre Dame de Paris'' pointed Arnav to the majestic building in front of them.

''Tumehe mandir jaana tha, na? Yeh yahan ka bahut famous church hai'' (You wanted to visit a temple, Didn't you? This is one of the largest churches here. ) said Arnav. Khushi looked at him in disbelief. She had not realised that Arnav was listening to her conversation earlier with Payal. ''How he notices such little things!'', She wondered.

They walked inside the majestic structure. Khushi was awestruck at the beauty. Arnav noticed that his wife had not spoken a word, and turned around to see if she was ok. She was not next to him. He turned around to see her standing in the middle with her wide mouth open in absolute amazement.

''Khushi, what are you doing?'' asked ARnav

''Arnav ji, It's sooo beautiful '' said khushi at the sight she saw.


Arnav smiled at Khushi. His Khushi was so adorable. He saw Akash and Payal walk past them, hand in hand.


The four of them then walked along the Seine River happily. Khushi loved the hustle and bustle of Paris. ''People seemed happy and carefree. '' She thought. She clung to Arnav especially when she saw scantily clad women on the streets, to which Arnav smiled. She loved her husband.

Arnav noticed Payal and Akash walk a few hundred meters in front of them. They looked happy. He was very glad he brought them along. He noticed how much in love they seemed. ''The honesymoon spirit had rubbed on them too'' he thought as he saw Akash sliding his hand on Payal's back.


They had walked to Champs Elyses, Arnav pointed. Khushi peeped into Arnav's map as he read out.

''The avenue runs for 1.91 km (1.18 mi) through the 8th arrondissement in northwestern Paris, from the Place de la Concorde in the east, with the Obelisk of Luxor,[3] to the Place Charles de Gaulle (formerly the Place de l'toile) in the west, location of the Arc de Triomphe. The Champs-lyses forms part of the Axe historique.

One of the principal tourist destinations in Paris, the lower part of the Champs-lyses is bordered by greenery (Carr Marigny) and by buildings such as the Thtre Marigny and the Grand Palais (containing the Palais de la Dcouverte). The lyse Palace is slightly to the north, but not on the avenue itself. Further to the west, the avenue is lined with cinemas, cafs and restaurants, and luxury specialty shops. The Champs-lyses ends at the Arc de Triomphe, built to honour the victories of Napoleon Bonaparte.''

Khushi gleamed, ''Hum yeh sab dekhenge.'' (I want to see all these places. ) said Khushi

''Sab kuch aaj hi dekh logi tum?'' (You are going to see the whole of Paris today itself, Are You?) teased Arnav

''Phir kya? Aapka koi bharosa nahin! Kya patha phir kab ghoomne le aayenge? ''(Then what? I have no trust in you. Who knows when you will take me out for sightseeing again? ) Khushi said

Arnav smiled, ''His wife had a point''

Khushi blushed as she realised that Akash and Payal had heard her again. ''Another embarrassing moment!. Guard your mouth, Khushi'' she warned herself in her thoughts.

''He was having a good time too . But it was also true that he couldn't wait to get to the cottage to spend ''alone time'' with his crazy wife'', Arnav thought.

Part 6

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mmm... nice.
I love that you have Arnav thinking about his wife before himself.
Wonder what's next?
Thanks for the PM.😃

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