Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Two - Page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago
Smitaaa, i am in super love wid your story. The way arnav loves khushi. I am stil in a shocked state. Unable to believe dat i hav read a maha maha maha update infact i hav read the baap of all the updates. This has been the longest one wich i hav read and i am sure it wil be the longest one on IF too. Finally the katra hide and seek is over. Loved the way arnav told his feelings to khushi and his in laws. Also loved the way he so nicely explained to all and specially khushi dat after marriage there are no barriers between a husband and wife. They share everything. And everything belongs to both of them including money. Loved the way the two of them solved their problem in private wid no disturbance around and den khushi all of a sudden ask him for a hug. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
finally all is well between
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the update. Yes some dharamsalas specially the cheap ones r not well maintained.I had heard tht
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaaar they are sooo cute...you wite so well..it seems i am watching an ipkknd scene in front of me...and congrats for completing 50 episodes ..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all Congratulations for completing 50 installments! Thats an achievement. Appreciate your effort.

Moreover I appreciate your effort to give us this exxxtra long part which I loved very much. It was very well thought out . The emotions of Arnav as well as Kushi have come out realistically! You have given us a top notch dialogue dear!

Thanks. Looking forward to your next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Smita,

First of all congratulations for Part 50! I loved it.. I wanted to comment it on yesterday itself. But I donno something was wrong with me yesterday .. coz I was in tears literally when I had ended the update. Now dont ask me why, I had to stop a lot and read. Yesterday I was emotionally drained and i was getting teared up for no reason. I loved how arnav explained to her about the monitory issues. His anger was so so so justified! I loved how u potrayed it. I loved that confidence in his voice. "Kya koi tumko mere se zyada pyar kar sakta hai, khayal rakh sakta hai?" that too in front of her parents. Honestly I was stumped bcoz if my partner ever asks that to me I will never have any answers but she answered it confidently and her parents too did not deny!!! The the conversation in the car was so real. He was angry on her but he he was caring for her, then his outburst was marvellous. Hats off Swati!!! I love this part and I love you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update Smita di 😊 it was cute
waiting for the nxt part... update soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
arnav was so angry and his anger is justifiable too
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so long long update...
They fought nd came closer
sindooor part is lovely.
Thanks for long update
congrats for 50th part
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Posted: 12 years ago
congggrraattss!!!! awesome update😊
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