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Posted: 12 years ago
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PartT 6::::

Rey thinks...maf kar diya???aise kaise maf kar diya..

Rey: r u sure tumne mge maf kr diya.

Taani: ha apko maf kar diya
Rey: m ni manta...proove it..
Taanni..: ???

Rey:ya ..i mean chalo fir se ek walk lete h nd smiles..

Taani: 😳😳

Dey r goin on dere way wid silence but smile on both faces...

Sum1 cum to dem running..taani se takrata or taani rey se...den dey both rolling on Grass...dey stops ..and starts laughing..😆😆laughed alot...alot..den silence

Look Hawa( bg tune)

Taani stands up nd rey ko hath deti h uthane k liye but our NauGhtY REY😉😉..pulls her down...again dey fall nd start laughing :-* ? ?👏❤️
Rey's cute smile nd both gets up..
Rey Notice a small cut on Taani's Finger..dat was bleeding..😲
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he shouts:Taani tumhe chot lagi h
Tani:Rey kuch ni chota sa cut h...

Rey:shut up Tani..nd takes her finger btwn his LiPs.☺️.(Sensuous..?)
Taani shock.😲.blush.☺️.smiles...(bg tune:Ishq wala LoVe)

Rey is lost in her pain..kahi dkh hi ni rha wo to..but tani cntnsly looking at him.🤗.nw dere eye MeetS.⭐️⭐️...Taani gave a big big SmiLe and ran Frm dere...wd a smily Face...nd rey too smiling..Blushng awww☺️
(bg tune:kuch to huwa h)

Rey apna hath balo me ferta h in dat innocent style..(loveR)👏👏

Nd slowly goes fwd taani ko smile krte dkhta h khud bi krta h..❤️❤️👍🏼.




(written by---Nidhi jain)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
part 7---

enters shivam..both shivam and Rey wanted to accompany taani to her room in dance camp...
R-- (mobile vibrates...) huh...call hai..😳
T- its okk ap dekh lo

enters shivam

Rey was attending a call...in mean while...
S- hey taani yahan ...tum???
T-(confused what 2 say)...haan wo...
(s interupting)

S- neways chalo main tume room tak chod deta hoon...
T- nahin maain chali jaaungi..
S- its okk babzz i drop u dr..

(enters Rey widh bada wala smile..😊😛..akhir every thing is sorted btwn him n taani...😆😆😆
achanak he sees shivam and taani talking to each other...he is shocked😲)

R-what was i thinking Taani is engaged y will she come wid me...but...wo shivam k saath kaise...😔
(closing his eyes a tear rolls down😭)
main use shivam k saath nahin jaane de sakta,,,,I LO..❤️...

rey stopped thinking no he sudnt Taani kisi aur ki hai...

meanwhile...taani notice karti hai,,,rey is dr...Taani thinking...

T-(in mind)...ab mujhe rey ko sab bata dena chahiye,,,mujhe ab kisi ek ko chunna hoga... and i know mujhe kaun chahiye...

Taani apna haat Rey k taraf badhati hai..👍🏼..but Rey wapas mudh jata hai...😲

cing dis Taani is all heartbroken...💔.

T-rey ne aisa kyun kiya...kya wo mera saath nahin chahte,,,,kyun mera haath nahin thama...kyun kyun...
(aur wo rone lagti hai...😭😭😭




(written by me(piya.7565...or simply pritha)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my God this is so cutee <3 Who is this Shishar? Dude whoever you are you are epic :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 8-----

Rey wid tears n gussa in his eyes.😡😭... aapne room k taraf jane lagta hai...kuch dur jaake ruk jaata hai...sochta hai...
R-mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha...wo kuch bolna chahti thi..😕..
mujhe uske paaas jaana hoga......

Taani started crying...she cudnt beleive Rey had rejected her d 2nd time..😭.
shivam -- taani taani tum ro kyun rahi ho...plss chup ho jao...taani plss...main hoon na tumahare saath......
shivam started to hug her .🤗...care her...console her...
tabhi Rey aa jata hai...
Rey -(thinking)...firse Taani firse...y kyun tum hamesha shivam k sath yy???...y do u always hurt me..💔😡😭

rey turns back goes to his room n nevr turns back...

alongside...shivam sochta hai "yehi mauka hai..😉..Taani ko apne side laane ka..)
he holds her face...aage badta hai to kiss her...

taani suddenly realizes shivam kya karna chahta hai
she pushes him back...

T-ye aap kya kar rahen hain???
S-main to bas...
shivam firse karreb aana ki koshish karta hai...
(stupid despo)🐷


Taani slap him in his face (jor ka thappad🤢)


T-how dare u...apni had me rahi ye...
aapne socha bhi kaise???
S-but taani tum meri gf ho...
T- sirf fake...but ajke k baad ye bhu nahin...
main aapko apna acha dost manti thi...how cud u...

Taani wahan se chali jaati hai...rote rote...
S- taaani meri baat to suno taani taani listen...

LOCATION--
Rey inboys room nd Taani in girls rooms...
dono crying and hurt...

T- ya maine kya kiya...maine shivam ko apne itne paas aane kaise diya...
rey ko pata chal gaya to wo mujhse aur nafrat karenge...kyun kyun kiya maine aisa...
(she falls on the floor...aur bas roye ja rahi thi...)

R-taani aur shivam ek saath bahon me hugging aur shayad kiss bhi kiya hoga...
main kyun ita irritated huun??? kyun mujhe bura lag raha hai???kyun ?? y taani???
tum aur shivam nain,,ye nahin ho sakta...
( saying dis he bangs his hand to d cupboard...pura kaanch toot jata hai...and rey k hath se khoon nikalta hai..he turns to the mirror...wahan taani aur shivam ka image dekta hai...usse saha nahin jata wo fir se apna haath mirror pe punch karte hai...now he is bleeding completely...uska pura haath ghayal ho jata hai...)

awaz sunke swayam jaidi se aata hai...he is stunned to c rey in dis condition..😲..

how will he react,,,,and rey use kya explanation dega,,to be continued...



(written by me...)
Edited by piya.7565 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
you guys are amazing!! thank u fr this🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
just amazing... do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome job dear👏...please do continue😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
amaing story dear plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
@piya.7565 never saw u before welcome 🤗
WOW YAAR 👏 IT IS ACTUALLY QUITE AMAZING!!! HOPE WE GET SOME WAT LYK THIS AS I WANT ALOT OF TAAREY HOPING FOR SUM THING GREAT 😳waiting for the UPDATE 😃 plz do pm me when u update k
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyss thank you so much,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ur appreciation means a lot... 😊👍🏼❤️

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