TAAREY OS IT'S ALL ABOUT LOVE(UPDATED ON PAGE 8) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: RitikaLoveAmar

I want lamba wala kiss and tight wala hug 😡 😆

omg abhi se yeh demands😲...nevermind i am planning something different lets see how it turns out to be😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
I wish meri demands puri ho 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Rhea itz just awesome.
Your OS brings a big big smile on my faace really i loved it...
Great job rhea.Superb 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Great job!!! loved the post.I hope this happen in d3,waiting for ur next post.thanx.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmamember

Great job!!! loved the post.I hope this happen in d3,waiting for ur next post.thanx.

thanks dear😃...glad u liked it...gonna update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

ok so hi to all my dear taareyians😃...so to lift everyone's mood after today's and yesterday's awful happenings and to celebrate ritzi's and aaishu's success i am at last updating my os...hope u all like it and don't get bored of my bakwaas writing😆

SCENE 1
(AT REY'S HOUSE)

Rey is lost in taani's thoughts recollecting all their precious memories since their first meet in the boys locker-room till now.Rey was just not able to believe that the girl who was once merely his responsibility had today become someone without whom he could not even imagine his life.

rey(to himself)-uff i am missing her...again have to wait till tomorrow to meet her...wait tomorrow toh holiday hai😲...no ways a whole day without her...this can't be...i wanna meet her now but how
then suddenly rey gives a wicked smile...takes his car keys and drives off to taayam's house

SCENE 2
(IN FRONT OF TAAYAM'S HOUSE)

Rey stops his car infront of taayam's house and very enthusiastically gets out of the car and is about to ring the bell when a sudden realisation strikes his mind.

rey(to himself)-rey tu pagal ho gaya hai...mat bhool ki yeh taani ke saath saath swayam ka bhi ghar hai and tu itni raat ko yaha kyo hai iske jawab mein tu swayam ko kya kahega...uff meri cutely weird princess bhi na akeli nahi reh sakti thi...uff but i wanna meet her right now

Saying this he starts leaving when suddenly he notices a pipe on the wall leading towards taani's room's window which to his surprise is even open with just the curtains drawn.Rey gives a mischievous smile and starts climbing the pipe but the pipe is so slippery that he falls down
rey-ouch...uff rey u have to do it tujhe apni taani se milna hai na toh then deri kaisi

saying this he takes a deep breathe,closes his eyes,thinks of his taani and starts climbing again and this time he successfully reaches her room's window and jumps into her room...but as soon as he jumps into the room he sees taani coming out of the bathroom so he hides behind the curtains

taani who has just come out after taking a shower wearing a pink sleeveless top and white haram pants is not able to notice rey...she comes out drying her hair with a towel
rey looks at her from his hiding place and is totally mesmerised by her beauty

rey(to himself)-she looks...she looks hot

then taani starts coming towards rey's hiding place still drying her hair but stops before the curtains and turns back so that her back faces rey...she is still busy drying her hair with the towel and rey is still busy admiring her beauty...then suddenly rey comes out of his dreamworld...and turns back immediately to leave


rey(to himself)-rey tu kya kar raha hai...stop...control...i should leave now(but his heart does not let him leave so he turns back again and peeps out of his hiding place only to find that taani has already fallen asleep)

rey-nooo...taani toh so gayi...but sote ue bhi kitni cute lagti hai
saying this and without realising he comes out of his hiding place and starts going towards taani when suddenly he slips due to the water spread on the floor coz of taani's wet hair...he's about to fall over taani but he stops himself by placing both his hands on the bed with taani locked in between his arms...rey keeps staring at the sleeping beauty in front of him..he feels mesmerised

rey(in his mind)-she's so beautiful

suddenly taani opens her eyes and finds rey in front of her...she smiles dreamily

taani-oh toh aaj aap phir se mere sapne mein aa gaye

rey(smiling)-but taani main toh sach mein hoon yaha😆

taani-achcha really main kaise manoo

to this rey gives a gentle kiss on her forehead

taani(shocked and gets up from the bed pushing rey aside)-aap sach mein yaha hai😲

rey-haaa princess😆😉

taani(panicking)-rey aap itni raat ko yaha...kaise...aur agar bhai ne dekh liya toh...o god no no aap yaha se jaiye...aap andar aaye kaise


rey-khirki se😉

taani-what😲...aap pagal ho gaye hai kya

saying this she starts pushing rey towards the door when she suddenly slips due to the water spread on the floor and grasps rey's hand and they both fall on the bed with taani on top of rey and her hair scattered over rey's face...rey slowly pushes back the locks of her hair behind her ear


LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

both are totally lost into each other when they hear a knock on the door and realise that its swayam who's been knocking since a long time...taarey straightenup😆

taani(panicking and holding rey's arm and taking him here and there)-oh god rey aap bathroom mein chup jaiye...nahi nahi aap cupboard ke peeche chup jaiye...nahi aap yaha aaiye...nahi waha jaiye

rey keeps his finger on taani's lips

rey-taani...shhh

LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

rey-relax...u go main curtains ke peeche chupta hoon😉
rey hides behind the curtains and taani opens the door

taani-bhai aap itni raat ko🥱

swayam-ha woh maine tumhare room se kuch awaaze suni toh

taani-awaaze...nahi nahi toh bhai...achcha ha woh actually pichle kuch dino se mere room mein ek chuha ghum raha hai toh bas usi ko bhagane mein lagi thi

swayam-what...hamare ghar mein chuha...uff pest control karwana hoga...yeh battameez chuhe meri behen ko tang kar rahe hai

taani(lost in rey's thoughts)-battameez nahi bhai cute

rey(to himself)-did she just call me cute...wait she called me chuha as well

swayam-what...kya kaha

taani(coming back to her senses)-kukukuch nahi bhai...app so jaiye main manage kar loongi

swayam-ok lets do one thing main aaj yaha so jaata hoon tum mere room mein so jayo

taani-ok😃...what😲...no no bhai maine kaha na i'll manage

swayam-par...

taani-bhai lagta hai ki aap bhool gaye ki kal aapki sharon ke saath date hai...aapko nahi lagta aapko jaldi so jaana chahiye

swayam-what😲...o god i forgot...uff shaorn will kill me...i have to plan so many things...ok goodnight...u sure u'll manage na

taani-ha bhai...goodnight😃

taani closes the door lets out a sigh of relief...when she opens her eyes she finds rey standing right in front of her

taani-rey aapne toh mujhe dar hi diya tha

rey-taani...u just called me a chuha

taani-what...maine maine kab kaha aisa😲

rey(making a puppy face)-abhi toh swayam ke samne kaha

taani-rey yeh aap kya keh rahe hai...aur aap kis baat pe jhagda kar rahe hai

rey-main jhagda kar raha hoon...u were the one who called me chuha

taani(getting irritated)-rey how can i call u chuha aap toh mere prince charming hai toh...(she stops suddenly on realising what she has said)

LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

taani starts blushing and smiling but she controls herself and starts pushing rey again saying-ok ab aap jaiye yaha se ...warna agar bhai phir se aa gaye toh then problem ho jayegi...now go

rey-but taani


taani(still pushing him)-no rey aap jaiye

rey-but taani aaj rehearsal hall mein jo kaam adhoora reh gaya tha use bhi toh pura karna hai na😉

taani starts blushing on realising the real meaning behind rey's words

taani(giving a stern look)-rey nooo...and waise bhi aap jo soch rahe hai woh karna mujhe nahi aata😳😆

rey(smiling mischievously)-oh ahccha😆

taani-rey now go

rey-par

taani-rey go right now

then suddenly rey holds taani by her waist and pulls her closer to himself
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA
both stare at each other intensely...rey pushes the locks of her hair behind her ear and starts coming closer...taani closes her eyes and her heartbeat increases...rey too closes his eyes...their faces are just inches apart...within no time rey places his lips on taani's soft lips and starts kissing her gently yet passionately...taani meanwhile is just too shocked to respond...she tries responding back but since it's her first kiss and that too with rey so she just freezes...rey on realising breaks the kiss

taani(opens her eyes and feels a bit nervous and shy)-rey...woh mujhe kiss karna nahi aata😳

rey(smiling at her innocence)-lets try again

taani starts blushing even more☺️

rey comes closer,takes taani's hand and keeps it on his heart

rey-it's your first kiss so i want it to be very special... so just close your eyes and feel the love...follow my heart which has now become yours...and also follow my lips😆(he says naughtily to calm her down)

this makes taani blush even more☺️...without realising both start coming closer...their heart beat increases again and both of them can now feel the passion,intensity and desires growing between them...within no-time rey again places his lips on taani's velvety soft lips and gives her a passionate kiss...taani this time responds him back with equal passion and begins to feel the love
both kiss each other passionately...their lips moving in unison...the atmosphere begins heating up even more...they break the kiss when they fall short of breathe
both open their eyes...LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA...they both then hug each other tightly...feeling safe and secure in each other's arms...feeling the deep and true love existing between them...feeling totally inseparable


two-three minutes into the hug and rey says-waise if u want toh aaj raat ko main yahi pe ruk jaata hoon😆😉

taani(breaking the hug and smiling )-no...ab aap jaiye yahan se😳

rey-ok fine man toh nahi kar raha par agar ab nahi jaounga toh kal kaise miloonga tumse 😉

saying this he starts leaving

taani-aap khirki se kaha se jaa rahe hai darwaze se jaiye

rey-achcha aur agar tumhare bhai ne dekh liya na toh mujhe bhi us shivam ki tarah satt satt ke marega😆

taani-waise aap bhi kuch kam nahi the(she says remembering how hard rey had punched shivam when he came to know about the truth)😆

rey-really tumhara thappad bhi kuch kam nahi tha and that too two two times😆😉

taani(sounding a bit dramatic)-thappad se dar nahi lagta rey pyaar se lagta hai

rey(in a teasing manner)-neha ki sangat ka asar😆

taani(angrily)-rey😡...mere friends ke baare mein kuch nahi

rey-ok sorry...goodnight my princess

taani(with a huge smile)-goodnight😃


with this rey kisses her forehead and goes out from the window
taani(smiling widely and blushing as well,in her mind)-i love u my prince charming❤️

rey(who's still looking at taani from outside the window,in his mind)-i love u too my cutely weird princess ❤️
THE END

whoosh done finally...hope u all didn't find it boring and bekaar😆 as it's a bit too long...sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes😳

do comment guys😃



Edited by pixi26angel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it , loved it, loved it😃. the most hilarious scene was when swayam told taani that he would sleep in her bedroom because of the so called "chuha"😆. i completely fell in love with the kissing scene😳, the way rey guided his taani 😉 regarding kissing was very romantic, i could actually imagine this scene on taarey😳, i just can't stop blushing☺️... i just want taarey to get united as soon as possible😃

Edited by padmaja19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
it ws so good
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg rhea darling you are amazing👏.,.,,.,,awesomee update yaar loved it⭐️ rey climbing pipe😆 chuha part was brilliant🤣 TaaRey chipku scenes☺️☺️ TaaYam scene🤗 swyam should've seen rey😆 aww,..loved the bubbly taani in this part a lot rey slipped that scene imagine karte hi marne jaa rahi hun i want all this to happen in d3😳 and their kiss 😳 d3 mein why they r nt showing all this😆😳


Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: padmaja19

loved it , loved it, loved it😃. the most hilarious scene was when swayam told taani that he would sleep in her bedroom because of the so called "chuha"😆. i completely fell in love with the kissing scene😳, the way rey guided his taani 😉 regarding kissing was very romantic, i could actually imagine this scene on taarey😳, i just can't stop blushing☺️... i just want taarey to get united as soon as possible😃

awww...thanks dear😃...taarey rocks

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