SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 2..haha jahan khushi wahan gadbad toh hona lazmi baat hai..poor girl every morning in pouring rain soaking badly and she cursing her fate that she'll be late and her salary will be cut it..Aww I love it when he scolded himself for thinking about like this for khushi..but kya kare arnav khushi's beauty in drenched state mesmerised him to the extent that he can't able to stop himself to think about her and her beauty..& this time khushi asked him for a lift and he instantly agree to give her a lift to the office..now seems like arnav ko "kuch kuch hota hai"... Ha-ha so much frustration on khushi..actually he is frustrated on himself because khushi thoughts are hovering over his mind..seeing her almost daily drenching in the rain, her musky smell, her hazel eyes..she is distracting him, annoying him and he's unknowingly damn attracted towards her...Awesomely written..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 3...J.E.A.L.O.U.S Mr Arnav Singh Raizada the C.E.O of AR is jealous for his a insignificant employee..Khushi Kumari Gupta...seeing raj and khushi laughing his blood boil and he get jealous that's shows that how he possessive about her..and he develops feelings for her..and he himself is alien for his feelings for khushi..lovelt start..in one they came together office and this routine become customary for them without realization...they get comfortable in each other company..and even he like khushi babbling...that's really cute...and wow khushi appointed as arnav pa.now ab kya hoga khushi ka..superb chapter..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 4..yes these two days were going too long for arnav not me..haha..'Focus meethi focus

Restlesness, irritation, possessiveness..these are the feelings that arnav facing right now..

Irritation because khushi came early in the office...she didn't come with him after his outburst on khushi that day...restlessness because she started acting aloof and cold with him.possessiveness because he can't bear her aloofness with him...and he is annoyed because arnav that fiasco she doesn't address him as arnavji ...he behavior is too annoying for him.. he can't sleep eat drive properly...because the certain Ms Gupta made his world up and down..and ASR is irrevocably fallen in love with KKG..love the whole chapter..amazingly written..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 5...I never thought in a khushi way..poor khushi too feeling restlessness..she too affected from his close proximity..and she also feel uneasiness because in her life she didn't feel this way and give the answers like she gives to arnav...I totally understand khushi worries...per her antics just cracked me..she is crazy and weird..finally, anjali made her appearance...A typical sister who always tease his elder brother..I just love the last para...beautiful description that how he badly missed her in his life..''The long-practiced indifferent demeanor of Arnav Singh Raizada was not giving away at all what was brewing inside him. No one would understand from his deadpan manner that literally his heart was thumping in an unknown ecstasy right now. The tiredness & fatigue of the last few days were nowhere around. His famous anger was into hiatus. His brain cells have started jogging after loss of functioning over the last few days. His senses were hyperactive in devouring the new loose-haired look of his co-passenger. His nerves were overactive breathing through every single pores of his skin. It finally seemed perfect...His lemon was back in the car.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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and the way arnav dressed seems like he is going on the date with khushi 😉and ommmggg hilarious ..khushi is too much sometimes...her blabbering was damn hilarious..🤣..and when reality downed upon her ..her reaction ..uff devi maya yeh ham ne kya keh diya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 6 .. Hilarious🤣..O.M.G .. I just can't believe this arnav take khushi to their breakfast date..they had their morning meal together...Khuhsi's blabbering...her reaction over separate tea..🤣.her daydreaming about Salmanji..just cracked me up😆... And arnav cursed himself for telling her about his meeting with SRK and Salman Khan...and after talking with her about raj and simran ..he got relief ...like khushi I'm super big fan of DDLG😃..T.G arnav paid the bill..nahi toh khushi ko toh heart attack hi ho jana tha..So in the end arnav is back on his ASR avatar...lovely update..❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I was going through my bookmarks and found this. Yeah I'm so late.
But the first chapter has me hooked. I'm quite a sucker for office FFs. Isn't it where the RabbaVeys started? 😉😳
I loved the way it has begun and now I'm off to read more. See yaa.. Would be dropping my comments here and there. 😛
PS: I'm wondering why was Khushi so quiet by the end of their drive?
PPS: Is she afraid of his fast driving like in the show?

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arnav & Khushi both woke up early but for different reasons. Khushi to catch him on their usual meeting spot and Arnav to avoid her. But this time Devi Maiyya heard her favorite's plea. 😉
This was funny how Arnav's first thought was about giving lift to Khushi. 😆 And I so love their inner monologues... 😃
Khushi who thought he need not touch her waited for him to buckle her seatbelt!!! Errmmm.. so much change in just two drives?? 😛
PS: When his brain is coming up repeatedly with image of one girl, why is he even trying? He should date that citrus fragrance girl only. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Completed thread 1.
I was shocked to know that Arnav actually started dating Lavanya!! I mean he is so much into that citrus fragrant girl and yet. Uff... ASR!!! Nut I am happy that girl, her skin didn't leave him in peace with La. 😉😆
Jealous Arnav was fun to read. And I'm glad Khushi gave it back well. Btw that office scene reminded me of store scene and the tea scene of their first date and nostalgia hit hard.
Loved the cute moments, jealous Arnav.
Raj & Simran are hit. But Salman Khan ko kisi ki bhi hate list mein jaane mein zyaad waqt nahi lagta 😆 Poor Salman-ji...
I'm happy that Arnav Khushi are back on first name basis. But they fought again... Ab Devi Maiyya kya karengi 😛