KriYaansh FF: You Are My World!! - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Sejuu... Dekha promise pura kiya..
Aaj hi pg 7 complete..
Aab page 9 pe pohoch gaya hai.. :P
abhi update jaldi chaiye ha... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
It is Superb 👏...
Awesome concept 😃...
Loving it ❤️...
Do continue soon 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Interesting concept.. Loved it..

Thank god RDX, Nichole and karan s gonna b thr instead of that evil vp..

Continue soon and thanx 4 the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haan u must continue it..
Seems the stroy i9s taking a big turn..Continue soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

marr gayi!!!! i know what you all were excited about! other reason for her departure!!

but i am so so so sorry, maine likha tha but i thought usse kriyaansh ke beech sab awkward aur different ho jaayega and it wont be so good. so i deleted it!! :(

maaf kar do!


Love you all who liked and commented my previous post!!!! Muahhh!!!!

specially hets, kuhu and preetu! thank you guys!!!

sorry sabko reply nahi kar paayi! was busy with some personal work but aaj hi doosra update de rahi hoon so be happy!! aur maaf kar do!

Silent readers, plz comment or I won't be posting any updates!!!! :P

Just kidding! ;) ofcourse I will!!!

Alright, moving on to the update'.

Answering some questions of the precap in this update! Kriya's mystery exit revealed, and in front of rey!!!! Excited to write about it, hope it comes out as good as it has in my mind!

Enogh bakwaas now, let's go towards the update:

Chapter 2 :

Special 1 Hour Episode!! - Saturday!!

Kriya: sir, it all started when''

FLASHBACK

(I don't wanna write the scene which already took place in the show so imagine it up to the time when rey enters fooling kriy's mom; smriti, as chhabilal and kriya breaks his heart pretending to be mean and saying that she used him. his chain tangles with the table and hangs there but he got no idea as he was so heartbroken and he leaves but from the window not from the door as shown in the show.)

She dropped down on the floor crying the hell out of her. Her mom had overheard the whole conversation and had peeked throughout realizing on the way only that this was a prank call only. She couldn't stand to see kriya in this state and ran away from there in her room and wrote in her diary.

Next day, smriti and kriya (who was right now as if a body without it's soul.) boarded flights back to dehradune. It was a silent flight as smriti won't listen to anything kriya said, and kiya could not help but just break down as she remembered st.louise, dance and rey. Smriti saw her from the corner of the eye all the time and tried to hold back her tears with her back towards kriya.

They reached dehradune and kriya remained soulless for many days which was minute-by-minute affecting smriti. Kriya behaved like a robot, expressionless but almost ll the time tears escaping from her eyes. She had never loved anyone so much as she loved rey. He was her life now and would always remain.

After 2 weeks of their arrival, smriti couldn't take it anymore. She called kriya to her room and wrapped her in a tight hug as if it was her last time and held her for a long time. Kriya was stunned at this and didn't know how to react.

Smriti broke the hug and cupped kriya's face in her hands and kissed her forehead, tears streaming down her eyes as she spoke, "I am sorry jaan! So sorry!! Ho sakta ho toh mujhe maaf kar dena! But, what I want now, is that you go back; to Mumbai, to your dream and most importantly, to your rey."

And with this she kissed her cheecks, gave kriya her diary and left from the room and up the stairs. Kriya was so confused that she went after her but a BIT late.

Who knew, the time she reached the terrace, it would have been TOO late''

"MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

And with this jump, smriti ghai's life came to an end.

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3 weeks passed by and smriti's all death rituals were complete, kriya had gone through everything all alone. It made her heart weaker, sensitive and fragile.

She was sitting in her mom's room, changed into coloured clothes for the first time and was looking at her mom's portrait, crying hard.

"aap mujhe kyun chhodkar gayi maa? KYUN?? Bina kuch bole, bina kuch bataye bas chall diye! Kyun!? Uss din- (she remembers that day, that moment)- aapne mujhe bulaaya aur---"

Then it stricked to her! She ran out her mom's rrom and into her's. opening drawers, looking in shelfs, making the room a hell place; then she finally found it!...the diary!

She went back to the room where she felt in her mother's embrace and started reading'''''''''..

Diary reading

Kriya, tum st.louise mein aakar bhi dance karti rahi kyunki yeh tum karna chahti ho, banna chahti ho, par mujhe manzoor nahi! Main tumhe tumhaare pitaa Jaise nahi banne de sakti! Aaj main tumhe sab sach batati hoon'''''

First thing that you should have known long ago is that your father is alive. Maine tumse jhoot bola, mujhe ispar koi sharam nahi kyunki agar tum aaj apne papa ke saath hoti toh yeh kriya ghai nahi hoti!

Your father was a dancer; famous, star, a celebrity! But fame is a game, sweetheart. Dice mein bhi 3 baar 6 aata hain toh baari khatam ho jaati hain aur ekk hi pal mein saari khushiyaan tabha ho jaati hain! Tumharepapa ki life mein bhi yeh hi hua aur use meri life khatam ho gayi''..

SMRITI'S FLASHBACK

"Arnav!!! Tum kaha ho??? Raat ke 3 baj rahe hain aur tum gaayab!!"

A young smriti was talking on phone to her husband. It was 3 in the night and arnav as many previous days had not returned home. She was worried sick now and was sitting on her bed having the convo. With him.

{ guys, I am trying to depict that in arnav's life everything happened almost same as it happened with meghna mathur (Priyanka chopra) in the movie fashion, only in dance stream and male version. He also got engaged in a sexual relationship with his company head Anita Khurana, just like Priyanka was with arbaz khan, just that arbaz was arnav (he was like that to his juniors and was in place of Priyanka with anita. Plz imagine carefully!!!) he used to party, smke and just lost his talent and soul and became a hollow person. He had a wife but didn't care now'}

"smriti, I will be right home! Just about to reach, don't worry we can still f**k in bed! That's what you wanna do, right?" arnav's reply was sounding very hypocritical.

"YOU ARE DRUNK!!!!!! GET HOME RIGHT NOW!!!!!"

She cut the call and cried bitterly. What had happened to her sweet, loving husband? This was the 5th time in a week, the other two were spent in smriti's parent's house. Today was stranger and his voice had not only sounded drunk but mischievous, naughty, pathetic and like a street pervert.

The door bell rang and she went for it and found a drunk arnav in a very dirty state. She tried to speak but arnav covered her mouth and evily grinned at her.

He came forward and while giving a dirty and cheap disgrace, smelled her neck and kissed it in a yuck, low-class pervert manner.

"arnav!!!!"

She pushed him back and gave him a disgusted look. This brought rage in him and he pulled her and touched her here and there as if gonna rape her. She was his wife not a s**t for christ's sake!!!! She tried pushing him but he was a man, strong and drunk so her attempts were not good enough.

He snatched and threw her duppatta away and opened his shirt. She started to fear and shouted but nothing helped and she was carried away to the bed room where her shouts later turned into sobs''.

END OF SMRITI'S FLASHBACK

Kriya, you are not small that you don't realize what he did to me. I ran away the very next morning and his cheaps attempts gave me the reason to live again''YOU!!!

He was wrong, but you are not! I believed that what happened with arnav would happen to you too but I was wrong! He was alone but you got your everything with you in this! Yur everything includes your dream to dance and your shirtless wonder, that Reyaansh Singhania who I know you love the most in the world from the day you both finished your rivalry and got to know each other in that college trip you guys went to. (remember?? Their first dance: hum the who thi!) live your life with him and achieve your destiny! Win footloose! This is my last wish; you go back to Mumbai and back to st.louise and back to your friends and rey'''

I know what you might be thinking: ki yeh maine tumhe jeete jee bhi bata sakti thi, marna kyun?

Kriya, I couldn't stand seeing you day by day dying because of me, it started to suffocate my life! And my soul had already died cause I have been told numerous times that arnav is now a good person and I should go back to him. he has changed and I know it, I love him even more than you love Reyaansh and I can't resist myself but it would be wrong! So wrong! Slowly and gradually I die from inside today, so no point living in a body who just breaths.

You go and meet your father, you both deserve to'.plz'.

MR. ARNAV GHAI

132, JUHU,MUMBAI. P.O. BOX NO. 3546

CONTACT NO. 022- 3645239

OCCUPATION- ARTIST

FAMOUS PAINTINGS- SMRITI, SMRINAV,KRIYA AND SMRIYANAV

EMAIL ID- smritiarnavandkriya@gmail.com

DESCRIPTION- LOVES TO PAINT ABOUT LOVE AND FAMILY

Who tumse, mujhse bahot pyaar karte hain.mujhe har hafte ekk letter bhejte, mujhe bulaate, maafi maangte par meri Kabhi unke saamne jaane ki himat nahi hui. Yeh information mujhe internet se milli, go to him and then st.louise.

Live Your Life and if possible, please forgive me''..

My last devotion.

Love,

Maa

END OF DIARY READING

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Phew!!! Finally khatam jua!!

Kaisa laga smriti ka suspence? Achcha ya bura?

Batao na! aur uske liye:

COMMENTS!!!!!! LIKES!!!!

PRECAP:

What did kriya do?

Does she hate her mom now?

did she go and meet her dad?

What is the horrible past?

Does her dad know about it?

Will rey get to know?

How will he react?

Uh-huh! Questions abhi, answers baadmain!

Aur uske liye mera fav. Ending dialogue:

Stay tuned guys!!!

Edited by kriyaanshurock - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
😃res
unres😃

me 1st me 1st me 1st yayyy
manti hun thoda late unres kar rhi hun phir v me 1st yupieee,,,,hetu me 1st 😛😛

chalo nw me update me aa jti hun
it was awsumm blossom update,,,,

i m loving it,,,,,

i luvd d y u portrayed emotins,,,👏👏
karan kriya prt was sweet,,,😃😃
n feeling really bad 4 smirit,,,,😭
concept was mindblowing i really love it,,,
so update jaldi se kar dena nxt prt nhi toh😈😈

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
kuhu, tunne hets ko jo chahiye tha woh chheen liya!!
haw!! teri best friend kaise react karegi???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Wow great
Poor smriti nd kriya
Cnt wait to see rey's response
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: kriyaanshurock

kuhu, tunne hets ko jo chahiye tha woh chheen liya!!
haw!! teri best friend kaise react karegi???


hehhehe mujhe pta hai uska reaction kese ane bala hai bt me kya karun me hun hi kamini😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Smriti ka suspense was Great 👍🏼...
Kafi emotional tha ...
Waiting to know what did Kria do...
Plz continue soon 😊.

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