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Mahi

@Mahi1219

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I love strong Khushi! But this OS was sad! Great job though!

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sunshine23

@sunshine23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow! Jeez, that escalated fast..I think I liked it ;)
Great one shot Ghausia!
Thanks for the PM!

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Desiree Benoit

@crazyforsanaya

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

BRILLIANT! I wish something like this happens!

Of course, you are going to continue to write and eventually get them together, right? Because after all, they cannot live without each other. But first, of course, he must realize what he has done. He needs to go through as much, if not more, pain as she has gone through. Brilliant OS. Please continue and PM me if you are. tfs😃

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

YOUR MONOLOGUE ADDS STRENGTH TO YOUR STORY

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautifully writtennn...

But quite a sad ending really!

Great work...

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

It does seem like it's over, doesn't it?? *sighs!!*

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LilaUK

@LilaUK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautiful ! I can see this happening but Khushi in the show isn't strong enough!

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW Awesome OS 👏
Loved It 😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

hope this doesnt happen
but might just do
man lets be positive right

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: diva.deluxe
Girl your language is so fluent! Your description of the moments, of ArHi and their dialogues gives me goosebumps. Now I really wish I lived in an english speaking country, so that I could write english as well as you do!😊 This OS is very sad and heartbreaking, but still very captivating👍🏼

Ghausia...is this a way to get the readers attention away from "tantalising touch"?😛
Buying some time, huh?😆 Just kidding. I've even started reading a SS on IF, in the wait for the next part of your FF.

Thank you so much hun! 😳

Oh, my grasp of the English language was completely due to the number of books I used to read in my summer holidays - school doesn't teach you much with regards to language!

Haha you caught me yaar 😛

I've posted a teaser for part 18 for you, and the full thing should be out by tomorrow!

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