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Cascade wonderful OS dear
i loved ur style of writing this OS
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and wobhiin this amazing way-hats off tou janu
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HEY GUYS

Starting a new ss, almost humor.. after pretty long I m going back to this area…

Dedicated to faru who asked Eidi from me and wrote it as an Os but than change plan and now its an SS.. almost of 6-7 parts..

Hope u enjoy it…

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Part : 1

Nupur: hello

Gunjan: hello sweetheart… tum mjhy lunch per mil rahi ho..

Nupur: nhi..buhat kam hai

Gunjan: ullu ek din kam nhi kero gi tu kya hoga.. mjhy milna hai nah…ajana meri jaan plish..mera bacha..

Nupur: gunjan…tum head of department ko bacha bola rahi hoo…

Gunjan: tu kya kero.. tu hai na mera bachao..muahh..ajo nah

Nupur: gee… stop behaving liko lesbo… thik hai per meray office k pass okay…

Bol kya hai…kyun bolaya hai

Gunjan: yaar mein ny ek aur larka reject kerna hai..

Nupur: daa… gunjan tu ek larka pasand kyun nhi kerlati hum sab ki jaan chotay gi…

Gunjan: koi ek acha lay ao mein kero lo gi

Nupur: aur ab is mein kya borai hai…

Gunjan: koi nhi… per is mein koi achi baat bhi nhi hai

Nupur: WHAT..tum picture dekh ker batao gi

Gunjan: haan tu… dekh.. is ko dekh..she placed the picture in front of her…

Nupur: is ko kya hua…acha khasa handsome hai…shakal se sharif aur parha lihka bhi lag raha hai…

Gunjan: han hai ..extra parha likha… pata nhi kuch oxford se ker k aya hai fasool

Nupur: FASOOOL… oxford… mein tu isi point per flat hojao aur tu…

Gunjan: aray yarr agay tu sun.. woh kisi stupid se company mein finance dekhta hai…ab tu soch woh kitna knjoos hoga… company k budget control kerty kerty mera bhi keray ga…

Nupur: wah..logic ti rejection ki dekho… ullu.. bewaquf… mein bhi tu budget dekhti hoo…aur tum meri mehanat ki kami apny is stupid burger mein ura dayti hai… aur ke larka muft mein reject hojata hai… yeah bulkily fasool point hai…

Gunjan: aur is ko dekh tu… na achi body hai.. na hi koi stud wala look hai….kitna simple hai yeah..

Nupur: shukar ker nhi hia…warna zindagi bhar us ko larkyion se bachati rahti..gunjan its is serious… ap isko dekh rahi hai…mein kal hi anty se bolo gi…k woh teri baat bulkily na sunay..

Gunjan: tu meri dost hai ya us ki

Nupur: teri hoon islyn kah rahi hoo…har bar teri madat ki hai but this time he seems to be nice..so no arguments….and bye mera lunch break kahtam….aur mein sach kah rahi hoon no troubles gunjan..samjhi…yeah bikar ki childish batein nhi chaly gi

Gunjan: mein ny kaha na mein shaidi nhi kero gi is se…I m telling u….

………

Nupur was sitting in her office ..it was almost over..she was thinking what to do..gunjan is to stubborn.. the information she has gotten is the boy is very nice and she remember once she meet him, and he was very nice…so she wont let her ruined her life… what to do..the only person who can help is..the person she donot want to call… ya khud us larky ko handle kerna… try kerty hain…

Oh god yeah larka hai k larki unknow call nhi utha raha… aur mein is se gunjan k liyan madad mang rahi hoo… ya tu mjhy maddad ki zaroroat hai…

Text kero..

"phone utho mayank mein gunjan ki frnd ho its emergency"

Ab uthy ga adhi bell per bewaquf..

Mayank: hello..kya hua gunjan ko

Nupur: kuch nhi hua..phone nhi utha rahy tu krna para

Mayank: dekhiya..mjhy yeah acha nhi lagta k behan ki dosto se asay baatein kero…

Nupur: aur mein tu mar rahi hoon tum se baat kern y k liyan..she said dramatically

Mayank: amm…a..dekhain..yeah acha tareqa nhi hota baat kerny ka… galat baat hai..

Nupur control her laugh and thought not to drag it as knowing him she knew he will cut the call n will never pick the phone again..he is kinda scared of girls flirting from always..being senior in skool and gunjan's brother she knew him to wel.. always trouble him a lot…

Nupur: mayank mein nupur baat ker rahi hoon.aur mjhy tum se milna hai

Mayank: KYUN…

Nupur: ek larki tum ko date k liyan poch rahi hai aur tum mana ker rahy hoo..

Mayank: nupur yeah bekar ki baatein maat kiya kero mjhy se…yeah

Nupur: han han pata hai galata hai..khuda jana kya kya galta hai….mjhy tum se kam hai half n hr mein apny office k pass wali coffe shop per milo….

Mayank: tumhain kasay pata meray offcie k pass coffee shop..

Nupur: nazar rekh rekhi hai akhir khabi tu zaroorat parni hi thi nah…she was suppressing her laugh and mayank's eyes were going wide n wider.. he can believe she is flirting with him the thing he is to scared to handle he just cant….and when it cumes to nupur he actually cant handle anything.. …

Nupur: oho itni tension maat lo..ajao

Mayank: mein akley larkiyon se nhi milta

Nupur: mein tumhara rape nhi kerlo gi…. Mard bano..

Mayank: woh mein ho…

Nupur: kasay pata..

Mayank: chi tum kitni ajeeb batein kerti ho..no way..

Nupur: its important mayank gunjan k baray mein hai….she said seriously..

No matter what he know this tone…and knows if its about gunjan she must be very serious…

Mayank: thik hai..in an hr… mein kam ker raha hoon..

Nupur: I will be waiting dear..

Mayank: NUPURRR>..

She was laughing on phone and shut it…. He knew she always do such but this makes him so uncomfortable….he was like that..a little shy , little hesitant… a very good son who will do all that mama has asked..so mama has asked to stay away from girls…and he do it…

From child hood nupur make fun of him..play pranks on him, and irritate him to core, yet she is the only girl he still do talk occasionally know her intentions are clean and she loves to irritate him, yet he cant help to be uncomfortable…he actually donot like girls doing all this… so many around him doing so, trying to seduce him, and getting close to him he hates it when she do this… he certainly donot want her to be categorize in those girls…plus this make him always alert around her..though he respect her a lot …a lot more than she think

Mayank: kya hai…

Nupur: had hai had hai…. Na hey n hello….kya hai…sham hai…aur kafi haseen sham hai..aay tashreef rekhy

Mayank: nupur if u donot stop doing this im leaving….

Nupur: fine… gunjan phir larka reject kerny k full plan mein hai

Mayank: WHT..per woh tu acha larka hai..har tarha se jasa us ko chaiy tha…

Nupur: dekho..tumahri behan unlike u kafi romantic or filmy hai… tu us ko larka jab tak wasy nhi milay ga woh koi na koi masal tu kery gi…aur uper se tum…us ki zorrarat se zayda batein mantay hoon

Mayank: han tu behan hai meri… aur mein us k sath zabardast nhi kerna chahta..woh buhat zidi hai zid mein kuch bhi ker jay gi….

Nupur: han magar is k yeah matlab nhi hai ko woh apni life barbaad ker rahi hoo aur us ko kerni di jay.. mein larky se mili ho acha hai

Mayank: obviously mein ny pasand kiya hai

Nupur: aur tum larki kab pasand ker rahy hoo… just wonder jab tum us k samny phool lay ker knees per jao gay ..tu kasay lago ga…she placed her elbow on table and lean close to him cuping her face in her hands…..By god mayank tum tu blush ker rahy hoo..cutoo..she pulled his cheek and he moved back

Mayank: nupur donot touch mein…tu kerna kya hai

Nupur: KYA…. Humain kya kerna hai..tumhara kya irada hai…

He closed his eyes in irritation and she laughed out loud..

Nupur: oky sorry..serious… gunjan aur Samrat ki ek filmi se mulaqat kerni hai

Mayank: KYA>>>> woh kasay…

Nupur: asay k jasay hum yaha hai gunjan meray sath enter hoti hai ..tum mein gunjan ko push kerti hoo Samrat us ko sambhalta hai n they have a eys lock… perfect

Mayank: how dare he touch my sister us ki shadi nhi hoi

Nupur: aay khuda…mjhy utha lay… agar tumahry tareeqo per chaly nah tu us ki shadi ho bhi nhi sakty… mayank mein kah rahi hoo sahrafat se meri baat mano…

Mayank: this is ridiculous

Nupur: is ko romantic kahty hain….

Mayank: wht so romancitc about this…

Nupur: woh mein giro gi tu tum pakarna tab pata chal hi jay ga…she flicker her lashes

Mayank: kuch aur socho… asay nhi…

Nupur: acha thik hai… on serious note humain pehly Samrat se baat kerni hogi….mein kal k party mein jarahi hoo jaha tum bhi ho..

Mayank: mein kyun…

Nupur: mayank… Sharma industries k malik… tumhain gupta's ny party mein nhi bolaya

Mayank: bolaya hai per mein nhi jao ga pls…he actually said so scaringly…

Nupur: ab woh kyun…

Mayank: bus nhi jao ga…pls…

Nupur: ek min ek mine ek min…unki beti hai nah ek…mayankkk she said with a grin and raise her eys brows mischievously… kya sense hai

Mayank: koi scene nhi hai..aur yeah kasi language use kerti hoo

Nupur: aray yaar tu mein bhi tu hogi nah waha tumhari izaat ki hifazat mein kerlo gi… agay suno… tum gunjan ko apny sath waha lao gay…waha Samrat bhi hai.. so tumhain itna kerna hai k ksis bhi tarah Samrat aur gunjan ek dosray se baat keray…

Samrat se mein khud baat kerti hoon..us ko bhi patna pary ga

Mayank: tum us ko shadi gunjan se kerrahi hoo aur pata khud rahi hoo…

Nupur: mayank pls grow up pls…. mera matlab hai us ko bhi tu razi kern paray ga nah gunjan se baat kerny k liyan.. ya choro asay woh shayd ajeeb react keray… let them be on them self ….

Mayank: oh…

Nupur: tu samhj aagi baat…yaha tak tu kero..us k aagy hum kuch sochty hain..tu gunjan ko party mein layana …ab mjhy ghar choro chalo utho…

Mayank: mein tumhain kyun choro…

Nupur: had hai yarr….chor do k tu tumhari car karab hojay gi kya fine mein akeli chali jao gi…kisi taxi waly k sath…

She pretty well new taxi waly k sath nhi jany day ga…

Mayank: fine chor do ga..

Nupur: really… she twitch her dupata… hum aur ap dono car ki front seat per…uff Allah

Mayank: god nupur cant u behave for a min..

Nupur: oky the min strts now…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update API
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved Nupur a lottt here...😆
she was damn fun to read...
n Gunjan toh 😆 itna accha ladka phir bhi reject karni hain madam ko 😆
n OMG!!! yeh touch-me-not type Mayank kaha se aya itna chui-muii lolzzz 🤣 🤣
m was laughing like hell...🤣🤣🤣
le...so yeh dono ab SG ko sath mein layenge n khud bhi sath honge 😉 accha hain
loved it lodsss
waiting for the next part
love u lodsss SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago

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