FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122

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VasantiLad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Wow Smita- Khushi's speech was amazing

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Nazibah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

I heard my heart crack while reading Khushi's speech (figuratively) but still my heart broke...ohh what she said was true though...loved the update!

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minnuma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

you are such a great way with words to bring out the raw emotions and feelings...am loving it Smitzy

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Ouch that hurt poor arnav bitwa but awesome khushi this is needed

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purplelove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Regarding 14.2:
Loved Khushi's emotional and verbal explosion. 👏 Well written.

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Actually, smitzy, I think you've outdone yourself! I expected a fist fight, a noisy reprimand to the hilt, but what I got instead was the final tone of hell!. FAN.TAS.TIC!!!!!

The final QUIET words she imparted as she walked away, wow! surely hammered the last nail in the coffin.

I hope it's not over though. I hope this is not the last of what she'll say to him. He realizes, but I feel the finale is yet to come, nah?

Now? Now I feel sooo bad for poor Arnav. But Kushi? Oh! I'm so confused! You are a hell of a writer, smitzy! To make your readers feel empathy for the wronged, but sympathy for the wrong-doer! Ah! MashAllah!

Now I am impatient to know the rest. What is the next step? I still hope she does not forgive him so easily. Even though he is dying in his heart, right now...

Ooof! Cannot wait for the next update, as usual!

Thanks for the PM.😃

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amita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

awsome update

plz continue soon

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

oh my god that was an emotional update...someone needed to mak arnav realise the extent of his mistakes and the hurt he caused khushi and who better than khushi herself...but damm i felt sorry for arnav...i just love him too much...anyways brilliant update dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm hun...

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: kbtr
Actually, smitzy, I think you've outdone yourself! I expected a fist fight, a noisy reprimand to the hilt, but what I got instead was the final tone of hell!. FAN.TAS.TIC!!!!!
The final QUIET words she imparted as she walked away, wow! surely hammered the last nail in the coffin.
I hope it's not over though. I hope this is not the last of what she'll say to him. He realizes, but I feel the finale is yet to come, nah?
Now? Now I feel sooo bad for poor Arnav. But Kushi? Oh! I'm so confused! You are a hell of a writer, smitzy! To make your readers feel empathy for the wronged, but sympathy for the wrong-doer! Ah! MashAllah!
Now I am impatient to know the rest. What is the next step? I still hope she does not forgive him so easily. Even though he is dying in his heart, right now...
Ooof! Cannot wait for the next update, as usual!
Thanks for the PM.😃

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thanks dear! I knew you'd respond this way hahaha You know when I was writing I kept thinking they aren't fighting dammit! I promised fireworks not damp squibs.. but then by the end of it, the last lines came out and I was.. satisfied hahaha geez I'm becoming such a sadist I tell you

Ahh.. you want Khushi to hurt Arnav even more? hehehe well for now let Arnav get his mind right.. but ya now, things are going to happen which are beyond either Khushi's or Arnav's control.. but it will help them in a way.. but that will happen in the next chapter... confused? ya that is good 😛

cheers sweetheart for your comment! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Khushi is absolutelt rite, it is not easy for her to forgive Arnav tat easily.

You know may u can take 1 year leap, this would make Arnav suffer and realize that wat mistake he had actually commited by leaving her alone at the alter.

Maybe u should potray Khushi's character more strong!

Thanks for your comment!

Leap is a good idea definitely. That would give them longer time to figure out their feelings. But I'm actually going through the IPK timeline.. 1 year gap means giving the Shyam creep another year to succeed in his plans.. plus I have plans for Anjali as well.. and moreover, I can't bear to keep them apart for so long .. so all in its good time.. 😊

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