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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Really nice update and thanks for the pm :-)

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Krisha to bhaag gyi . . . . 😉
sharon ko ghar me koi pyar nhi karta? 😲
swayam aur rey bhi bhaag gaye . . . . . . . Sabki shaadi ki hi problem lagti hai 🤣
omg . . . . Rey accidentally kissed kriya ☺️
jab swaron ne kriya ko dekh liya na . . . . . Fir hoga drama 🤣
Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Phele toh me bahut naraz hu...

Aapne batya nahi ki aapne new ff start kiya hai..

But its ok...

Coming back to update...

Really loved it..

Swaron married.. Shhoo cuutteee...

Is sharon there real sister.. I mean jaise uske dad behave kar rahe the toh mujhe laga..

Kriyaansh getting late ... Kabhi nahi sudhrege.. Hehe

there kiss.. Woh bhi suddenly.. Hayee

i never thought but still loved it...

They really are best couple...

Update soon the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

yar it was super intro to be clear it was like dramtic entry

and lots of twist and turns wish it is 4 good 😉😉
thanks 4 the pm my frd😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
it's not fair
are itne romentic se time pe part ko chod dena goodnai he jii
so plz do next update soon & PMme
Thanx for PM😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
wow
wow
wow
wow
luved it..
charo bhag gaye..👏

kriyaansh kiss..😳

swaron marriage...

aur jaldi se update karo..
riya is soo cute...
jaldi se update..
bt demand bhi toh complete karni padegi...
kuch nahi hota karte hain na...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
aise unexpected incidents Kriyaansh ke saath hi kyun hote hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
😃
nice one
thanx for PM & plz abb jaldi update karo😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
swayam;-kiss

sharon;- vo vo

swayam;-kya

sharon;-va ha dekkiye aap ...ur right their good couple right

swayam;-not good

sharon;-vat😲

swayam;-the best couple like us

sharon;-haa😳

swayam;-😃

sharon;- swayam swayammm

sw;-haa

sharon;-swayam i vant to see my parents kriya and riya really missng thm

swayam;-hey dnt worry sab teek hoga

sharon;-kab ...kab yesab teek hoga

swayam;-chotie sharon aney kebadh

sharon;-kyaaa ☺️

swayam;-haa mujey ek chotiii sharon

sharon;-nahi mujey ek chottiii swayam chahiye

sw;-no

sharo;-yes

sw;-no

shrn;-yes

sw;-yes

shrn;-😃😆

rey;-sorry kriya vo i slip thats y i kissd u really sorry

kriya;-😳 hmmm mmm its okk

rey;-hey if u dnt mind v can share my hous

kriya;-no thanks

rey;-ok then did u gt any rooms or lik thet

kriya;-nooo

rey;-thn y not u can v can share

kriya;-vat??😉

rey;-room 😉

they both were spentng time by talkng each other finally they all reached their room at near beach...yes swaron is cmftbl vth their room and yes kriyansh rooom is next to that..they tooo gt the room vth one cndtn that kriyansh r couple

kriya;- univer jiii ek room or rey me ek bed sharing nooo way or v also lied to the owner that v r couple so v shud behav as a couple how i plz help karna

rey;-god mujey help me ...

kriya;-i am gnna take shwr so c u later ...

rey;-kriyaaa

kriya;-haaa

rey;-can i say smthng

kriya;-ya u can

rey;-wen i vas 3 years old i had a friend named kriys she s so cute and all actually not friend i loved her but i never saw her after that ...i really miss her

kriya;-ab mey bolu

rey;-haa

kriya;-i tooo had a hot cute frnd not friend i tooo liked him his name is reyansh singaniya after his fathers transfer v never seen each other

rey;-reyansh singaniya😲

kriya;-i vil be back

rey;-(in mind) kya vo reyansh singaniya mey tho nahi na

...

...

...

...

kriya;-rey can u giv my towl from my bag

rey;-ya sure

rey opens the bag of her took a old pic of her famly from ther got shokd yes he s correct the gal who he loved kriya..he was so happy... he gav towl to her ...she wore the towl around body and came out side and sat beside mirror...while rubbing her soft skin she s watchng rey through mirrr ...he s havng no reaction...it makes her angry ...he took the towl ang get inside of washroom..after sm time rey came out side ... kriya was shokd to see him in ths look and dress 😲...he moved forward to her she turn towards mirror due to the suddenstep of him..still she s wearng a towel...he moved so close her heart beat started to incrs...he toucher soft skin slowly

rey;-kriyaaa

kriya;-hmmm

rey;-idhar dekko

kriya;-kyuuu hmmm

rey coverd her waist vth his muscular arms and tightend the grip...she closed her eyes ..dnt worry i vnt do anythng kriya u can trust me...par ek bar tum mijey dekko...she turn towards him ...yes she felt smthng splz in his eyes...suddenly both feels smone s vatchng them they thought it vud be the owner of that room so they started to behave like a newly married couple ...but actually its none other than swayam is behind them nad vatch all he can see only the back side of rey...rey started to kissing her wet shoulders ...she started to reactng toward his reaction ...she puts her both handrs toward his nech ...now her pain is drvng him more crazy he started to bite his cute pink cheekz fianlly he met vth s glowng lips ..he gav a slight kiss but she move him toward her and filld the gap vth both their body now both r one...he put hist tongue towards her nd she too ..she s gvng sudden reactng so rey s so happy vth her respond neighter feelng embarrzd or nthng

sharon;-swayam vat r u dng

swayam;-sharon look there

sharon;-😲🥱 swayam

swayam;-ye dhono kya karahahey

sharon;- u vil came 2 no at night

swayam;-night ...eysa kya hey

sharon ;-swayam chup lpz chup ...she closed the room door slowly vth out disturbng

sharon;-swayam u no

swayam;-vat

sharon;- ur a dumbo



Edited by karthikasekhar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
👏awiee...luv it...par maine pm se phle hi padh liya...apne exitement bada di thi bol ke hi...hayee kya scene tha...luv it...mei toh pagal ho rhi hoon...😛

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