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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dips098

yeah ...will unres it in sometime 😊

unres 😊
Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dips098

Hey dear 'awesome update '...loved sharon's confession through sms ...and our majnu boy read the message'.WOW'...he is planning to propose her...'I m loving ananya's character '...she is so sweet and supportive'.s...haron is confused ...i just hope she can see the clear picture...'.can't wait for Swayam's proposal'...plz update soon... 'I m loving this FF'

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thanks 😊 already updated the next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW...the proposal part was just mind blowing...loved it ...the honesty is his proposal was touching...the way he cleared aakanksha's case...that was sweet yet mature...loved sharon...her confusions melted ...it was AWESOME dear...loved it 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have updated the chapter too!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 11(B)

Swayam was not willing to let go off Sharon..He wanted to stay like that forever..Sharon on the other hand was trying to control her tears. She was a very emotional girl who could not manage her emotions properly. For her, every single emotion was prominent, whether it was an outburst or a feeling of happiness. She used to show it.

They finally broke apart when Swayam uttered something.

Sw:Sharon, I cant tell you how happy I am..

Sharon didn't say anything. She was busy controlling her tears.

Sw:Sharon??

Sharon finally responded..

Sh:Yeah?

Sw:Why are your eyes wet??Is everything ok?Are you crying?

Sh:No..why will I cry on such an occasion Swayam??Something went into my eyes..Its aching..

Sw:Go and wash it with water..

Sh:Yeah.

She managed a smile on her face and went to the washroom.

As soon as she closed the room, she let it all loose and silent tears began trickling from her eyes..She was crying.She knew she could not go like that to him..She opened the tap and washed her face thoroughly with water and tried to make her heart believe that everything was normal..

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Swayam was waiting for her in the living room. When she came, he spoke.

Sw: Sharon, is it okay??Are you fine??

Sh:Yeah..I am completely fine..

SwThats better.

The bell rang. Swayam noticed that it was 5..Everyone was supposed to come by then.

Rey and Kriya were the first to come.

R:Hey Swayam..Sharon what are you doing here?

Sw: Actually Rey, Sharon forgot the actual time.. She came here at 4.30 itself.

R: She came early?Or did you call her?

Sw:Oh please Rey..

K:Guys..stop talking all this stuff and lets concentrate on what we want to...The skit?Sharon have you thought about it?

Sharon was not in a mood to say anything. She kept quite .

K: Sharon??

No response..

Sw: Sharon??

Sharon finally responded.

Sh:Yeah?

K:I asked you if you thought about something??

Sh:No..I totally forgot about it..

K:Ok I guess these boys are not interested..Anyways..decide on something..I'll think about it too..and then text me your ideas ok?

Sh:Yeah..ok..

R:One minute, we are very much interested in all this..We will start right now..But what about Rinni??

K:She said that she couldn't come today.

R:Ok ..Sharon..??What happened??Where are you lost?

Sharon seemed to constantly think about something.She was responding in a monosyllabic way..

Swayam sensed Sharon's insecurity and covered up for her.

Sw: Rey..I guess we should end the discussion here..How about tomorrow?All of us will think about some ideas and discuss them tomorrow..What say?

R:Yeah ok.

Sharon looked at Swayam. She was glad that he knew her so well..

K:Ok fine..Bye guys..

Rey whispered to Swayam..

R:Did you ask her??

Sw:Yeah..I did..

Swayam saw Sharon going. He decided to talk to her..

R:What was her reply?

Sw:Rey..I'll talk to you later..Promise..Not now..

Swayam followed Sharon. He was calling out to her but to no avail. After two or three failed attempts, she finally heard his voice and turned to face him.

Sh: Swayam, no need to drop me...I'll go by myself..

Sw:No Sharon..I know you will..But I wanted to ask you if everything is fine.

Sh:Yeah..I am..What has happened to me Swayam?Nothing at all..Everything is fine..

Sw: If you say..then ..ok..

Sh: Bye Swayam..

Sw:Bye.

He gave her a smile and after she was gone, he muttered to himself.

Sw:I don't understand Sharon..are you lying to me??Or to yourself??I know you were crying Sharon..You are bad at lying..At least you cant lie to me..If you want to keep your problem to yourself, I wont force you..But I need to talk to you and figure out if you have a problem with this relationship.

Edited by swaron29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here was the next part!!Cant tell when the next update will be!!But I'll try and update asap!!Hope you all liked it!!Please do leave your likes and comments!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear...loved this part...sharon crying can not be tolerated by swayam ...but why she is crying ...is there any problem...i hope not...loved the gang masti as well...rey teasing sharon n swayam...plz plz update soon...can't wait
Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update mihika.
loved it..
swayam knows sharon so well
waiting to read the next part
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update !!
swayam knows sharon so well , i wish swayam talks to sharon and make her trust him and share her problems with him :)
hope sharon can let go of her insecurities abt the relationship soon..
will be waiting for the next chapter , update soon..
thanks for the PM.

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