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Heyo Nisha my wonderful sis 🤗 🤗 🤗 you actually dedicated this part to your friends and I was pleasently surprised to see my name there...thank you so very much for the dedication...
Now now i know i am super late in commenting on this one...I can surely beg an appology for that but i will beg that in your other FF because i am super late there also...Now comming back to the update for a change part started with Rey's POV and it was fab to read it as swayam was pissed of the with sharon's pressence there or say he was not liking the fact that sharon was taken by someone else...your mr. casanova is falling for sharon now and he is not able to resist her wow wow... and that sameer move was hillarious super hillarious i enjoyed it... it had come so accidently yet it brought this 480 watts of smile on my face...
Swayam's Pov was equally fab reading as realistations down time was hiting Mr. Casanova... he was realising that he behaved very strange and made fool out of himself there...and he was also realising the fact that he wasn't really liking this sharon being taken by some other...but still he is not able to find a reason why it is like that...super awesome description...
Loved this update to core...All the best for exam...nail it with you best efforts...and thank you very much again for dedicating the part to me along with your our other friends...
Thanks for the PM...do comeback soon and update...
Pratik...
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