New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

LOvely update...romantic to the core!

i loved the ARIYA scene...wo waali harkat?? woh kya??? humhe bhi toh samjhaavo?

then the dance...which is this song?? very funny!!!
cont soon!

Radha Teri Chunri frm Student Of D Year.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Radha Teri Chunri frm Student Of D Year.

Thx dear 😊
Glad tht u like it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lets see how Arjun ll tackle the King ...awesome ..loved the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
so riya and sameers dad entery in the next update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear :) loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update di..love thw way Arjun rathod & meera riya making jealous to one another..great part..hope Rathod's father doesnt mess between them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally i read it..
uhmmm firstly i wana say it was romatic update aww ariya superb..
sersly riya kitna tapar tapar karti he uff love ariya 😳..
meera n sameer awww so cutee..
n n n bg music dance was juz superbbb
sum girls r kissing rathod awww 😛
n ariya no need to say abt dem my eva tym fav couple they r jus superb..
omg riya's father i hope ariya ,sameer n meera ko seperate na karee
superb loved it dear
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Posted: 12 years ago


ohh nice update...
ArIya was awosme...
SammerMeera was awsome too...
exited to know what happened next...
so update soon dear..waiting for your update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 30
Maharani's gaze fell on him & she shivers. He silently look at all & goes to upstairs , nobody in party sees him , Rathod's mother(maharani ) followed him. He enter room , Maharani followed him & silently standing there. She sees he silently look at her , Maharani understands & offer him water , he drinks water while looking at her , she shivers again , because she knew that gaze , his gaze is full of angryness , his red eyes . He put the glass on table & start to unbutton his shrwani.
Maharani knows she have to clear some things.
Maharani : Ji vo hume...(he just look at her his one look means shut up , maharani's voice vanished in thin air)
Bt she have to talk today.
Maharaj: Hum kuch der akle rehena chahte hai .
Maharani : Ji vo ... hame bachho ki khushi ... hamara matlab hai hum kuch nahi jante the , par hamare bachho ki khushi ke liye hame maan jana chaiye... ( she complete her sentence in one breath)
Maharaj : (just look at her calmly and says) Lagta hai insaan ko bhasha aap ko samaz nahi aati .
Maharani : ( she silently goes from there.)
Here in party after dance all seating together & enjyng there dinner. Expect Sharuya who is busy with some VIP persons.
Samrat : Va Bhai sa cha gaye aap to , kya dance kiya hai..
Samar : Thx , vaise tu to janta hai ki mujhe itna acha dance nahi aata .
Suddenely someone try stole one bowl frm Rathod's plate , Rathod sensed it & immedatly hold that hand in mid-way.He turn his neck & see Meera looking at him with pleading look in his eyes.
Rathod : Ye kya kar rahi thi tum?
Meera : Vo bowl mai apne haath mai rakh rahi thi.
Rathod : Kyu , mere plate mai bahut saari jagah hai.
Meera : Ha... ( sadly ) par maine socha ki thoda taste kar ke dekh lu.
Rathod : Ha ab kaise sach bol diya ha..Tum kyu nahi khana khaa rahi ho?
Meera : Ummm , mujhe nahi vo daal-chawal ya vo pizza , kabab nahi khane..
Rathod : Acha ji , to phir kya khana hai aap ko...
Meera : Ummm ( think for sometime ) haa , mujhe vo fruit punch peena hai , ice-cream khana hai aur samosa , dahi-vada , dhokla aur sev-puri , paani - puri. (She happily informed him, her eyes shining with sparkle)
Rathod : (Smile at her) Itna saara... ( he amusedly ask her)
Meera : Itna saara ... kyu kuch kam tha( thinkng again , and suddenely her face lit up) are ha mai Pastry bhool hi gayi , vo bhi Black Forest.
Riya : Kya pastry woow , (She turn around & says to Arjun ) jaao meri liye pastry leker aayo..
Arjun who silently eat his food , look at Riya weridly , he look here & there) Tum mujhse baat kar rahi thi?
Riya : Kyu , aur kis se kahungi , plz na( she talking like child)
Arjun : Excuse me , tumhe khani hai , tum jake laao , ek to meri hi plate kab se khana khaa rahi ho , mujhe to jyda kuch khane to nahi mila aur to aur uper se Pastry laau.( he scarscamily informed her)
Riya : (Angrily ) zooth aise kaise kuch nahi khaaya , Salad khaya , Papad khaya ...
Arjun : To , baki ka tum ti khaye jaa rahi ho , 5 baar 'Gulab-Jamun ' laa chuka hue .
Shree : ( who just cominh there wit his filled plate) Kya 5 baar , Sir aapne aur Chotu ne kya race lagayi hai ki kon kitna khayega? ( he ask Arjun amusedly)
Samrat : Are va Arjun tumne ne to hame bata ya bhi nahi.
Arjun : Ye race shyad Riya aur Chotu ke beech mai lagi hogi , mere aur Chotu ke beech mai nahi.
Here Meera stole Papad from Rathod's plate & munching it on. Rathod just murmued 'Iska kuch nahi ho sakta.'
Chotu comes there with his plate. His plate filled with sweets , papads , rotis & sabiz. Riya swttely calle him.
Chotu : Ha Riya kuch chiye tha ...
Riya : ( amusdly ask him) tumhe kaise pta.
Shree & Chotu : Jab tumhe kuch chaiye hota hai na , tabhi itne pyar bahri aawaz mai hame bulati ho.
Riya : (Embrassed) while Arjun , Rathod & Samrat burst into laughter.
Riya : Chotu tumne pastry laayi . ( Riya look at his plate)
Chotu : Kya pastry , nahi to vaha mujhe nahi mili.
Samarat : Thi hi nahi to kaha se milegi...
Riya & Chotu : matlab???
Samrat & Shree : matlb menu mai thi hi nahi to kaha se aayegi.
Meera : Par mujhe khani hai ( she says Rathod )
Riya : Mujhe bhi..
Rathod : Are itni raat mai kaha se pastry laau? ( he ask them confusedly)
Meera : kahi se bhi...
Rathod helplessly nodding his head & call servant , tell him to bring Pastries.
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Here Maharaj Seats on his resting chair and furiously swayed chair to & fro rembering flshbacks. He rest his head on headrest & closes his eyes.
"Nahi ... nahi Ba ba sa ... ( one girl cried & pleading infront of him)
"Chod dijiya na unhe Baba sa mat... mat kariye aisa , unhe mat maariye na maafi dejiye hume... " ( same girl sat on her knees & pleaded him while crying)
"Aaa nahi... " ( she scream infront of him , when they killed him )
she look lost , her voice vainshes , she sat on floor helplessly .
"aap ne use to maar diya , ab mujhje bhi maar daliye " ( she screamed loudly)
" Mai bhi chali jaaungi , lekin vada karti hue aap kabhi khush nahi rahoge , mai to mit jaaungi , par pyar nahi , vahi pyar ek din aap ko hara dega , aur aap sirf dekhte rehenge . Ye log bhi kuch kaam nhi aaynge , aap ka tamasha jarur banega , vada karti hue mai aap se apne pyar ko jaaya nahi jane dungi , meri baduaa jarur lagegi aap ko ye saara ghamnd , ahnkar isiliye na ki aap raja hai , ye raj-paath hi nahi rehega. Is ghar mai kabhi khushiya nahi aayegi , aap ko kabhi kabhi aap ka bachho ko pyar nahi milega. Viraan hojayega ye ghar virran... " ( she screamed out of lungs)
"aaa...aaa Vikra... (she screamed & die , bt her eyes are open )
He still feel her eyes on her. Bt she make her words true , after her death her curses starts to effect there beautiful life. His joyful family turn into nightmare , his two childrens left his house , her wife hates him from core of the her heart. He still feels she look at him & smile loudly.

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