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Hi naina;
That was beautiful. I loved this episode.
I loved that he came back for her, I loved that he has admitted (OK only to himself, why not her??) that he loves her, I love that he cooked for her, and I definitely loved,loved, loooved that he was (is????!!!!😃) losing control!!!
I just hope that he doesn't retract his feelings for whatever reasons. Why do I feel a MU coming up? (Or has the reel thing forever scarred me?!)
I also love the fact that you use their monologues to show the real emotions they have for each other.
OK, I can't wait for the next update.
Are they going to have hot night? Or is it that now he has real feelings for her, he doesn't want to hurt her and wants to do right by her? I read your notes, too. So does that mean he's going to start being in control, again? Drat!
Please update quickly. Thanks for sharing. Loving your story!😃
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