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Originally posted by: SayaliNaksh

nice part


but plzzz thoda long part likho


itane se man nahi bharata


plzzz continue soon

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice start! so AR are already met I feel but what happened with Riddhima😕?pls cont soon

Originally posted by: teenorchid

oh so they ve already met... Wow.. Cant wait to see em falling fr each otherrr

Originally posted by: AMMY12

nice part.
Luvd it.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Originally posted by: Sammaraxx

Heyy
Lovely part n POV'S...interesing
N so i guess armaan is falling for Riddhima
Very nyc
N very dedcriptive too
Btw pls tell us wht happened to Riddhima?.
And pls ud soon
And longer likho na yaar

Cnt wait
Keep it up

Originally posted by: Such

@Moeen ahem ahem

that armaan's POV was actually moeen's pov

kyu kyu he na???? mujhe pata he tum bhi apni ridhima ke baare me aisa hi sochte ho har waqt

wow yaar u r such amazing writer and u r making me read ur ff becos its so interesting ... usually i dont read any ffs or os...

but u have done it

ye lines he na

wow isme mujhe moeen dikha raha he ahem ahem

Why cant i stop thinking about her! I should focus come on arman focus . I should do something. Aisay layta raha to lazy ho jau ga

hmmm moeen ... ab ye bhi mujhe pata he ki ye lines toh tum har roz apne mann se kehte honge these follwing lines

Wait a sec i used the word love. Oh God help me .

ohooo...

🤣

anyways very nice start i hope u continue soon... i can see u in the ff... becos i never watched dmg but i have seen their pics

very nice moeen ... pls do continue its so much interesting ..

Originally posted by: sgksg

hey moeen gr8 going laga rahe !!!!!!!!!!!!

bas riddhima ke saath saath mein todha armaan ke hunky sexyy hott personality ko bhi describe kar dena ...:)

Originally posted by: cherry_an

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i have only one complain that the length of the part was short 😛😉thats it.. but m sure as the storry progresses u wil work on that n wil give longer ones 😉

nice part...

so she had an accident.. unclose the mstry soon..

ridimas POV was realy dot on.. i mean potrayl of the character..

i always adore her n her fathers (dr. shashanks) relation.. sweet!

and armanz POV was nice..

like it when he is confused about his own feelings..

specially the love part.. wana see his rough n tough side as he is an army guy.. i love their disiplin and personality way too much..

and wow ridzi is his doc.. great wana read wat happns next..

update soon..

and nicely written part..

well done😃⭐️👏

@such- lovely comment wid monkey emoticons 😆🤣

Originally posted by: Noiiin

<font size="2">wow it was really nice 😃
I loved it even though I'm not a AR fan 😛
you write really well
update soon n pm me</font>

Originally posted by: ojaswi96

wow nice one..

</div><div>srsly loved it...

cont soon...

do PM..:)