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drooler

@drooler

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

thanks di for updating it

I wonder will we ever get the original khushi back???????😭

Loved the way you wrote about khushi's POV

continue soon

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

khushi is akin to a lifeless human being...her past life is in stark contrast with her present miserable state...even though he regrets his actions, arnav is has a long way to go...khushi's pain aches my heart...she has every right to be happy again...do update soon...& thanks a tonne for the pm...😊

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sonia jangotra

@abraxos

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

arnav is working hard to become khushi's rajkumar😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

Thanks for the amazing update, however it was really sad and i feel so sorry for Khushi, I don't know how Arnav is going to make it better for her. Thanks for the PM, Cant wait to read more xxx

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

well well first time we see khushis's pov i was wondering what was going on in her head
its about time we know what she has been through right
i guess this is where her mind is stuck at after all that our dear ASR has done to her
she is frightened of it all and well who can blame her
guess she sees herself locked in a golden prison you couls say and is trying to find a way out
can arnav help her or push her further into the abyss
so it was his photo her saw and it said her rajkumar even though he had become a rakshash for her
and he needs to get the same khushi who used to be livelly happy and carefree from what she has become now
man the flashback when she describes what her rajkumar would do was so heartening naa
cheers for pm
hope she will be okay and soon can be good this state right

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garlic

@garlic

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

super awesome update...I loved khushi POV...perfect...door made up of gold and diamonds means marrying rich man ASR...door closed behind her, Arnav imprisoned her in his home to torture her and there was no knob in this side of door means she cannot go back to her parents as ASR imprisoned her .PERFECT👍🏼

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

zehra, beautiful update dear

regarding the style of writing, i prefer ur existing style, but i will leave it to you to decide - the way u right now is so perfect -

oh iam so touched to know that it was arnav's photograph - superb going

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#498

A Fabulous update...Actually loved to read Khushi's POV through her dreams eventhough it implied sadness...Khushi doesn't have much dialogues or monologues in the story...so was very happy when you started with Khushi's dream...Arnav is taking baby steps in his relationship with Khushi...Thanks for the PM

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Mayil

@Mayil

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#499

hope u will update soon..tks for the pm

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#500

I can't believe I actually cried after reading the last bit.. Oh, god Arnav what have u done to this innocent girl... Thank u for the beautiful beautiful update Zehra... This is amazing...