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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Atleast she started reacting a little, and the way Arnav dressed her up with Saree, Jhumki, Kangan, Payal was touching...

Best part was Hamare Rajkumar...

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

oh god it was his picture he found/!!khushi's shattered dreams!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

the manner in which you've written khushi's point of view is quite apt and should be continued with... nice of arnav to promise himself to bring back the smiling girl he saw inthe photo... he sure has an uphill task and i have no problems with that!

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

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Wow! Another awesme update👏
Arnav is trying hard, but is it worth all the pain he caused to Khushi??😔

Waiting for the next update,Yaar🤗

P.S.- I loved the way u write Khushi's POV,its fabulous👍🏼

Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

this gets sadder day by day!!!!
although he is doing everything for khushi but she is so hollow now!!

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

I think the flashback style is quite fine:)
Great update!
There are some reactions from her finally!
'her rajkumar' god!!!!! Loved it!

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Really great update, your expression of Khushis feeling make us feel as if we are living through them with her ..please update soon and don't seperate them, it would be great to see Arnav make this marriage work...

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Risha J

@-Risha-

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Nah-uh! Dont change the way you write! Infact I was about to add how awesome the first paragraph was before I read your request!

And Lavanya huh? I wonder if she would be the one to get a reaction from Khushi?