Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

😆😆 avantu...😉🤣 i guessed it rite...😎 im a genious...🤣

loved it loved it n loved it to the core...👏 superbly written n ur best work ever...👍🏼 loved the way arjun made her realize what was wrong n the way he consoled her n fed her the food...awww...ariya r so magical...

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

I had guessed the married and pregnant part though

But the way you potrayed it was awesome

Gr8 job

Too bad it ended

But fabulous work

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Bhaktikapasi

@Bhaktikapasi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Loved it... U portrayed all d emotions amazingly... Pls update ur other FFs n thanks for d pm.

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

wow they are married and soon to be parents😳

love the way Arjun treated her and pacified her, and the baby plot was very gud😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Okay, now that my heart has slowed down a bit, I can comment.

Fantastic update, loved it, once again I kept moving my eyes across the screen getting excited to find out the big news.

Well at least I was right about one thing, Riya was pregnant, classic signs.

One of the best Arya SS, loved it to the core.

Is there more or something new? Please write more.

Thanks for the PM.

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Great SS and lovely ending ...

just loved it

each day ur writings inspires me a lottt

arjun riya already married was fab and wow she pregnant

t was awesome

do write more

loved ur work a lot

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Awww what awesome ending.
Loved it.

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Amazing dear

loved it 👏

Thanx 4 the pm

update soon

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

wow awesome dear... loved it...

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

awesome! riya's pregnant! no wonder arjun at made her move to the research desk! very protective of his wife and child ah! very sweet... loved the whole story a lot! thank you for such a wonderful update! i loved it a lot!