*Completed* TH#1 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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Curiousmind

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Just read destroyed and chapter 1 of this story and I loved both. Please pm me the next part. Thanks

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MissAsian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Loved it
wow what a redemption track - continue soon!

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thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

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First if all thanks Aman. You know what I keep thinking of, the other girl. I mean Arnav only feels bad for doing this to Khushi because he knows that she was innocent. But what about the other girl who actually had a thing with Shyam? Would he still not have felt anything for doing this to her.

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gauri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

nice update...i guess khushi wl be back to normal very soon...

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natalie12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

gr8 updt
pls pm me and keep me updated with the story

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laddoo598

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

My heart broke seeing Khushi's state. Please bring her back soon! =(

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Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Poor Khushi she has been through so much because of a misunderstanding.

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sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Yay sequel 😊 I knew it was comin but still yay yay yay yay, ok ill stop now

Ur probably goin to get this said a lot in this update but I love Aman, wat a decent, stand up guy. so redemption starts, I hope its painful 😈 and prolonged! I'm happy 4Khushi that she is still pregnant and decision is now hers, l. don't think u can ever b the same ever again after goin thru wat she has but lets c wat he tries to do to get her back andrepent.

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Arina Raizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

First off, I edited my RES for the last chapter of Destoryed on Pg. 108!😊

And Yayy! Definitely not dark and hopefully it stays that way!😊

Is this going to stay true to the short updates for can we hope for longer ones?

Anyways we'll see about then when the time comes! Until then I'll tell you how much I loved your first chapter of Unconditional!

I don't think I've ever liked any apology made by ASR/Arnav more than this one. I know it was nothing much, practically nothing, but it touched me on a whole different level.

Of course after what's Khushi's been through I don't WANT, let alone expect her to even acknowledge him! Being in her place I'd remained the lifeless piece of limbs she is now, but from another, outside view the way ASR/Arnav apologized was...I can't think/find a word for it! *huffs in frustration*

The sorry, the zipping up of her dress, the crying in her lap, the carrying her, the feeding her, the Gol Gappes, the lulling her to sleep, everything. And the whole timehe didn't expect her to react, sure he wanted her to, but he knew he didn't deserve areaction from her.

And I don't know about others I'm enjoying the flashbacks, they bring forth new information even if it's just a flashback from a previous chapter. I hope what I just said made sense 😊

I'll be waiting for see the double meaning you bring to Unconditional, like you did with Destoryed, can't wait! (Double meaning, meaning we all think of it one way and then you just throw it at us in a completely different way!)

P.S - Hopefully this comment was better than the one for Destoryed 😛

P.P.S - I EFFING LOVE AMAN IN THIS SS!!!!! EPP!! LOL😆

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Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Oh god...I don't think I have loved Aman as much as I have loved him today! He's god sent! I think in my excitement to read the sequel, I might have forgotten to leave a feedback for the last update of 'Destroyed'! LOL! :D I finally feel good about this...:) SO YAY!!! Make Arnav's redemption count! :)

Thank you for the PM! :) I think this is the first time I'm saying this for something related to 'Destroyed', but I CAN NOT WAIT TO READ MORE!!