#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11 - Page 13

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aap toh raat ko update karnewal thi...hehe demand complete toh update bhi jaldi jaldi de diya

thankgod i just came here and had a glance...agar raat tak rukti toh hojata mera...

Awesomeee update khushi

as i told before am liking smriti's character in this story unlike...argh


the song selection was perfect

perfectly described...

Really liked the swaron part...sharon liking that swayam was ther that nite with her, swayam being swayam still cares for her the same way...evn though he is hurt...

Can,t see Reyaansh like this...true no one is with him to console or to care...neither his frnds(as they are going through the same...footloose loss)
Nor his Baatcutter...

Now i really wanna read that letter...what she wrote for HIM in that?

waiting 4 friday...lolz
always a signature line...

Awesome Update Yet again :)

Luvd it !

I loved it...
Ur narrative style is jus awsome...
Yes.. Thr r a loads of changes in ur d3 n m actually likin dem..
Vishakha alrdy knows d truth!!
Sharon is trying to understand swayam for once in her life...
N smriti.. She is thinkin about rey's feelings too.. Miracle!!
All r broken inside.. Swaron kriyaansh...
N kria.. Thank god she replied bk..not sayin dat its a rite thing bt she has evry rights to know d truth..!
Hmm.. now d LETTER... I wonder.. Wht wud b written in it..
Rey tk letter pahunchega kya???
Chlo.. Lets c
Waitin:)

awsome update...
Nice song selection...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

amazing i hope something thing would happen same in d3 miss kriyaansh a lot