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Sunday!!! No No No yaar not Sunday.
I will go to bed by 10. Monday ko meeting hai or mera dhiyan is taraf laga rahe ga.☢️
Or ab tu morning main bhi time nahi milta read krne ko.😭
SAT night ko kr do Plzz agr ho ske tu.
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I haven't rply to any of u reason I m hell tired and not feeling well.. n as I m not even sure abt Sunday so got sumtime now so thought of posting it…..somewhere I felt it hasn't came the way I wanted to.. hope u like it..

thanks Anu for Posting n Pms.. thanks a lot

lov ya fiza

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Chapter: 27

Gunjan: nupur mayank kaha hai

Nupur: office chala gaya..

Gunjan: bina nashtay k..

Nupur: hmm.. us ko kuch kam tha

Tai jaan can ready her expression things aren't the same between them, so mayank didn't trusted her words.. tht nupur didn't did it… great.. thts exactly wht she wants… she went to her study knowing pretty well… nupur may will try to find how its possible… and tht exactly wht happen.. next she have nupur standing there with papers in her hand…

Nupur: ami yeah kya hai…. Ap ny asa kyun kiya

Tai jaan: kyun yeahi thik hai…. Nupur hosh se kam lo samjhi tum

Nupur: yeah thik hai… ap mjhy aur mayank k alag kerna chahti hain… aur kahti hai yeah thik hai

Tai jaan: haan tu is mein masala kya hai… tumhain buhat arams khola mil jay gi us se… …. Nupur.. us se talluq lo… humain jo us se chaiy tha mil gaya.. us ny tumhain apni kam wali se zadya samjha hi kya hai…

Nupur: ap asa ksay kah sakti hoo…

Tai jaan: mein asa hi kah rahi hoo..kyun k yeah thik hai… dekha hai khabi woh tum ko kis tarah se treat kerta hai.. aur tumhara koi status ..koi value.. koi class hai… ksi asy insaan se shadi kero jo tumhin yeah sab day.. tumhari koi value ho.. jab parties mein bahar nilklo tu door se tumhain log pechny.. yaha tu tum ko maaynk ki biwi k naam se pechanta hi nhi hia… kyun k woh yeah chata hi nhi hai..

Nupur: asa kuch nhi hai ami.. mein us k sath rehna chahti hoo

Tai jaan: mein ny tum se pocha nhi hia .. jitni jadli hosaky tum is baat ko man lo.. samjhi… tumhain rishto ki koi kami nhi hia.. aj bhi MRs waris ready hai apny beray k liya… aur tum janti hoo nah..un k status…. Mayank tu kuch dino mein sardak per any wala hai…. Tu tum kyun us k sath katora lay ker sardak per bhaito gi… talluq lo us se aur apna kam kero…

Nupur: ap itna gira hua soch bhi kasay sakti hain akhir.. ap meri maa hoi hi nhi sakti.. kitni gahtiya soch hai apki

Tai jaan: NUPUR… zaban per lagam doo.. agar zayda hi shoor ki mohabbat jag rahi hai nah.. tu yeah baat sunlo…. Aagr tum ny mayank se talluq na li tu meray pass dosray rasty bhi hain samjhi tum…

Daafa hojao yaha se…

Nupur: per ap asa chahti kyun hai… akhir kiya kya hai hum ny

Tai jaan: kuch ni.. aur mein kyun kam kasay kay chati hoo… yeah mein janti hoo samjhi…

Nupur went to her room carrying her heart out… how can I mother be such.. such tht she can separate her own daughter from the person she love the most..

On the other hand tai jaan can see her planning getting perfect grip.. she has nothing to do with nupur.. getting divorce with mayank she will make her marry other man.. who is of high status class and is like there level not like mayank…

Tai jaan hates mayank.. to core.. he is the only person who has the power n ability to shut her, to make things against her.. he always always beats her.. and empower his rights on everyone.. Either its nupur, or this house.. or business.. Suddenly mayank has strted to take every detail of evry department .. and the way she is looking mayank soon will take over the business. .. if he would have his shares n nupurs shares.. he wil kick them out…

At personal life… her children never regard her as anything, seeking support, advice, love, fun or anything they both will go to mayank or shilpa… mostly to mayank… and mayank will behave as if she is nothing of them and he is the only owner of them..

At business, the way he is going .. and the new tender.. he is reaching heights.. she knew a successful project and he will setup his international business.. wch Salman want able to..courtesy her tricks.. but mayank being highly witty will do it…

So jab ghee sedhi ungli se na nikly tu ungli tari kerlni chaiy …

She has nothing to do with nupur's life… Nupur n mayank being good couple or what…. From the start the only purpose was to make him lost in all the emotional dramas… and make his attention divert form business n little detail.. he is an emotional fool, knowing nupur is in danger or anything against her wish is going to happen.. he will give his life for it.. and that exactly she used.. Nupur got married to mayank… with his shares making there.. and now tables turned completely… she is the owner of 100% shares… mayank has nothing in his hand…

Aahhh what an immense pleasure to see him torn and lost… he has always made her believe he can beat her… but now she will make sure… he has nothing in his hand… neither his family, nor his business… and the one thing tht will broke him completely… is nupur taken away from him… he is obsessed about her… she can se from always what she is to him

About nupur.. she will find a perfect man for her.. and she will live a life of princess.. and who will want to live with a man who has nothing, neither money nor power… so basically she is helping her daughter

So finally the distraction of Mayak Ahmed has started… finally

………..

Mayank: per mein ny ap se kaha tha papers dekh lay

Lawyer: dekhiy mayank sehab mein ny wohi kiya jo apny kaha.. bus.. ap mjy per ilzam nhi daal sakty.. mein ja raha hoo

Mayank: likhin..sigh… agar yeah baat lawyer ko pata thi k meray pass koi shares nhi hain nah nupur k pass…. Tu us ny yeah papers kyun banay….. oh freak… is k matlab….

He called farhan in and asked his own back details with him

Farhan: tumahry pass personal account mein taqreeban 1.5 coros hain.. aur hum ab tak 10 k loan mein se… 8.5 spend kerchukay hain… 1.5 mein ny waps kerdiayn hain… yet u know it isn't enough…

Mayank: sigh.. kuch samhj nhi araha hai… aur order ki kya position hai..

Farhan: ready hai… maagr..

Mayank: great …..magar kya…

Farhan: unhony tender cancel kerdiya hai

Mayank: KYA…per kyun

Farhan: unhain is so called loan fraud k pata chal gaya hai… aur plus.. Mrs Ahmed ny kaha hai k.. u have nothing to do with Ahmed industries.. a mere employee u r…

Mayank: CRAB…. Farhan pls leave me…

Farahan: sure

Mayank: OH god… ya khuda mein kya kero… sab saaf hai.. mjhy pata hi nhi chala aur itna bari chal jaldi unhony… great..

Mjhy jaan poch ker yeah loan sanction kerwaya gaya hai…. Itni jaldi.. so that I am completely trapped in it.. tai jaan janti thi k dead line kam hai tu mein sab pasay use kerdo ga.. bang on… im trapped … mein sab jaga se pehas gaya hoon…

N meray pass koi amount hai… ab tu tender value per loan tu kya mjhy koi kam bhi nhi day ga if this news spread.. plus maal bhi bekar jay ga…. Ya khuda mjhy kaha behasa diya apny… kuch samhj nhi araha kero tu kya kero

Sitting there lost for not know how long… he went home..and just threw himself on his couch throwing his head back… the soft touch at his shoulder made him grip her hand..

And slowly he made his way to her lap.. holding her completely lying there…

Nupur: mayanak… tum thik ho nah..

Mayank : hmm

Nupur: ami ny nhi bataya asa kyun kiya… bus woh kahti hai… k mjhy tumahry sath nhi hona chaiy…

Mayank: hmm

He has nothing to say or hear..the warmth the scent the fear was driving him crazy… I wont let her go noway … I will make her mine..nobody will be able to take her away…. Kya bol raha hai mayank.. its unfair.. u know were ur…even than…u cant be so selfish..

He abruptly moved away from her and went to shower..he needs to calm his nerves maybe cold water can do so.. yet she left a complete dumb struck nupur… she just cant figure out is he angry with her, is tense, or what…. Somewhere today she cant just read him.. and that was scary hell scary…

Lazily cuming out of the shower he sat on the bed..and she went near him with the fear of rejection sumhwere..with that she lost her strength to ask anything… she just went and hold his arm and placed her head on his shoulder… he closed his eyes… his fears are empowering him and here she is making things more difficult… he donot want to take her to the level where there is no way back… and here he himself is getting drown..he wont loss his sense, all that is on his head is making him die with frustration and suffocations.. he is feeling slowly the walls being raised around him and now they are nearing him… and with this all the only thing tht he can find peace his getting lost in her…

Mayank: nupur tai jaan thik kah rahi hain…

She moved away n looked at him… wanting to se any sigh of joke …but he was dam serious.. just he knew how he said it… but it is practical

Mayank: its better…

Nupur: shut up mayanak… deemgh karab hogaya hai tumahra… mein kahin nhi jarahi hoon tumahray pass se samjhy tum… tum mjhy alag nhi kero a… suna tum ny…

She cupped his face and made him look at her.. and he hold her hand on his cheeks and turned towards her…

Mayank: nupur kuch dino mein meray pass sab khatam hojay ga.. I have nothing. Nothing in my hand… mjy nhi pata mery sath kya hoga… aur is sab mein tum kyun suffer kero…

Nupur: mayank yeahi tum ny hamesha kyun nhi socha.. haan.. jab meray sath diny k baray aai tu mjhy alag kyun ker rahy hoo…

Mayank: kyun im reaching to hell… sab kahtam hai sab… kuch bhi nhi hia mera pass. Na pasa..na power… na kam…. Aur kuch dino mein tu na naam na izaat…. Yeah sab tumahry liyan nhi hai.. mein tum ko ta….

She pressed her plam on his mouth ….

Nupur: khana bhi maat.. mein sach kah rahi hoo.. sach kah rahi hoo mayank… jaan day do gi.. tears tht she was trying to control from so long made there way

Mayank: NUPURR… he pulled her towards him and crashed her tight.. socha bhi nhi… please never..

Nupur: tum kasay soch sakty ho itni bari baat… tumhain meri koi zarroat hi nhi hai tu bolo

Mayank: he snuggled more closed to her… I need u… I so need u… mjhy pass chiayo tum.. sab se pass… but yeah galat hai… I know tht

Nupur: kuch galat nhi hai… she planted a kiss on his shoulder and he crashed her more…. Mein biwi hon tumhari… mjhy in sab se alag maat kero…. Khud se alag maat kero… I want to be urs…

Mayank: sirf khuda hi janta hai how much I want u… my love is turning selfish… he kissed her side of her neck.. and gave trail of kiss till her ear..

Nupur: no it isn't… is waqt agar tumahin sirf mein chaiy tu is se zayda aur mein kuch mang bhi nhi sakti… agar tumhain apni zindagi k is mor per sirf mjhy sukkon milta hai tu….. thts all I can ask for…. Let me embrace u…. please…

Her words were cuming displaced under the effect of the passion of his she was..yet her last plead..pulled away all the barrier holding him…

He moved a bit away, cuped her face in her hand he kissed her passionately.. have the passion return…

It was there feelings desire or fear of losing the other.. that passion and desire complete empowered them and made them went the other..so desperately and completely…

Kissing her eyes moving down lazily to her cheeks…He slided his hand in her hairs and arched her head…gave her trail of kisses on her neck line to shoulder.. she completely let him take her ..where so ever he wants to..basking in the passion n love of his…

Ruffling his hairs she kissed her as he took her to the verge of ecstasy… letting him drown in herself… having the peace he was seeking for so long…

Somewhere in the middle of night when he was still rubbing his lips on her shoulder…embracing her completely in him.. he was thinking were he has taken her with him…. He can't let her go now…. He knew he cant… its isn't about now because they have reached the most bliss point of there relationship… yet he can't let her go.. he is incomplete without her..

Wao what a day… his one of the ugliest day of his life ending so beautiful… there best moment came when they are not even in there best state of mind… but than this what make them belong to eachother.. having each other beside .. they can make the night mare off.. They can win the wars n the battles too… but this war is tough.. maybe they have lost already…. Yet they never can loss one thing and that's each other love…. And that will make them win the battle…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Awesome update API...😳
loved it lodsss..
Beautifully written.⭐️⭐️⭐️
loved it to d coreee 😳
bt firstly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can i kill someone plzzz
nowadays i feel like kashhh Katal karna agar jayaz reasons ki wajah se hoon toh maff hota kash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a BIG KASH!!!!!!!!!!! then main kuch aurton ka sach mein katal kar deti srsly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ufff!!!!!!!!
she is such a witch, a kamini, dayan, ghatiya, begairat kisam ki aurat i hate her to d coreee...😡😡😡
asi aurton ko ALLAH aulad hi kyun dete hain...jab unko apne bachon ki fikar hi nhi hain bass apne fayde n apne likings ke bare mein hi sochte hain...i sooo hate that witch!!!!!!!!!! arhhh
mera mann toh kar raha hain uska gala daba kar usko mar dalu den woh jaye sare shares le kar kabar mein...GA kahin ki :P 🤢😡
ufff!!!!!!!! kash Nupur usko ek thappar marti...arhhh
plzzz han end mein chahe yeh aurat mar bhi kyun na jaye MN kabhi isko maaf na kare kabhi bhi nhi!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
she knew he loves her daughter still kitniii ghatiya aurat hain...ufff!!!!!!
i can't blv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
woh kya business karne ayi hain jalil aurat apne beti ko bass har jagah shadi karwani hain isko kamini kahin ki :P
end of Witch's praises...😳 marey woh GA! 🤢 ALLAH asi aurton par azab nazil karein...huh!

Awww...i felt like hugging Mayank here...sigh!!!!!
kya halat ho gayi hain uski...
koi rasta hi nhi hain bechare ke paas...sigh!!

Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i sooo loved d way he was feeling desparate to do anything than letting her go away from himself!!!!!!!! Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was the best!!!!!!!!!!!
i sooo loved MN to d coreee
it was heavenly part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i sooo damn loved it a lottt
His every words his desparation his helplessness everything was written sooo Beautifully!!!!!! MA!
aur ap keh rahi thi its not upto ur marks...sigh!!!
han han aj kal perfectionist pasand ane laga hain kya 😉 😆
i loved it to d coreee
the last lines were sooo utterly Beautiful n Heavenly!!! Sigh!!!!!!! MA!
loved it to BITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MA!
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

ps: Get Well super soon API ji 🤗🤗🤗 n han u r not welcome as yeh mera farz tha apne api ke liye itna toh main kar hi sakti hoon nhi?

pps: """"A BIG SORRY""" to Everyone Whomever i have Missed to send PM...m really SORRY! as i hv only sent pm to ppl who where in my buddy list so a BIG Sorry! n m glad still u guys read it n commented too Thank u 😳
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Beautiful part
loved the way they felt desperate to cross all the boundaries between them,loved it
continue soon..
BTW i couldn't understand why did you post pic when i read first lol and i read that again and understood the reason..
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beautifully written fiza
anila thanks for pm
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That was so awsome part..
Fiza Di.
So Awsome..
I am just speechless...

Please take care of urself...
get wel soon

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