MayUr FF: Parichey Thrd#2 last part pg 43 7/11 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
mayank ko toh adhiraj ko maar hi dena chahiye tha...
n yeh tai jaan uff rassi jal gyi lekin bal nhi gya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

thanxxx a zillion for updating my most fav ff
will comment after reading next aprt


meri pichle comment ka reply kaha hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally finally Mayu rocked kya band bajai hian tai jaan aurr adhiraaj ki amazing amazng
fiza jst awsm abb kya btau abhi update padha and i dont have wrds amazng..
Pyarr ki jeet hui :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow...I just love this update...
Tai Jaan..you Gone!!!😆😆😆

fantastic update...di aapne toh Mayank ko hero bna diya...action
scene..lol..loved it totally.
continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Argh...😡 yeh tai badi hi koi kamini aurat hai.Itni beizatti hone k baad bhi abhi tk tikki hoi hai.Hye kitna maza aya jb oos ko 2 laggi wo bhi os k husband k haton.Aj to is ka yeh hasher dekh kr thaand pr gaye.Faraz should give her divorce.Itna kuch kiya is kamini ne os ki beti k saat or os ne ose abhi bhi rakh hai.

I having mix emotions.I m happy b coz this was what I wanted.Tai t get punish for her deeds and Mayur to b together forever.Their relationa is very very beautiful.The transition from friends to Husband and wife was very beautiful.Bt I m also sad that its coming to its end yaar.I will miss it.
My ka tu end ho gaya and is ka bhi jldi hone wala hai.

Tum Mayur k bachey kb pedha krwao gi yaar?😕
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited both my cmnts here...😳
now update soon API 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update... What are you waiting for??? Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API🤗

loved ti lodsss
loved it to d coreee
Gosh! the 1st part made me smile like hell...
awww...Mayank was so cute..bt i loved d way he covered his his embarrassment showing ignorance lolzzz 🤣 🤣
n OMG!!!! iss dafa toh Nupur made too more than shocked
Shilpa aunty ke Samne she talked like that!!!😲😲😲 ☺️ 🤣🤣🤣

thanks alot dear..lol..
mayank n his harktein were missing so he needs to be back after the chios.. n after all she is ms mayank tu kuch tu asar aay ga na..phir gunjna bhi tu dekho nah bechari k har waqt bechy rahti hai

i was literally laughing like hell...even jab uss din parha tab bhi n aj jab cmnt edit kar rahi thi tab bhi n guess wht!!! wahi purana masla MA came into my room n asked why r laughing no actually with whom u r laughing!!! dekho kya haal ho gaya... sigh!!! 🤣🤣🤣

anty se mjhy baat kerni hi paray gi...lol... warna asa na hua.. woh uncle se kahy ..mjhy lagta hai bachi kuch thik nhi hai .. si ki shadi kerado... khabi screen k samny hasti hai khabi muskurati hai.. khabi piloow marti hai aur khabi khabi tu asay blush kerti hai k by god... bus.. larka dhondy bachi hath se nikal rahi hai 😆

bt then!!! God!!! it was like a shock!! that jerk again came back that too even try to touch her...n uski himmat kese huyi woh sab bolne ki!!!
i sooo loved when Mayank beat him!!! usko mar deta toh kjyada acch alagta bt nhi woh apna hath kyun ganda karein acche hain uski acche se dhulai ki!!! 😡
uff!! srsly!! even i wan to ask to Samrat ke usne yeh sab kyun notice nhi kiya usko karna tha na i know he was too torn for that talaq thing bt still issiliye toh usko aur dhyan rakhna tha...
han so tu hai us ki himat tai jaan per gai hai...
and mayank us ko chorta kya... filmi hero hai woh pora... tu climaz mein ek fight sequence tu banta hai nah boss
bt kher...Sigh!
i sooo sooo sooo loved Mayank of this ff the way he care n love Nupur is the BEST...love him lodsss
n Gosh!! even i was badly wanting that GA to come back n hayee i was soo can imagine her Defeated disgusting face...😈
n dekho toh ek toh chori upar se sina jori...iss jalil,girihuyi aurat ko toh main!!!😡
God!!! i sooo love Mayank again for him sooo much intelligence...wah!!! sahi mayine mein unka Damad hain woh!! hayeee sare proofs ke sath ready tha woh...
n hayeee...kitnaaa...KITNAAA INTEZAR ke baad meri Muraad puri ho gayi...hayeee uss GA ko Thappar Laga hayeee...mera Dil khush ho gaya...🥳
i sooo loved Taya Jaan for this...hayee thank u unko from my side...😆
uff!!! yeh aurat deffo pagal ho gayi hain hayeee...then toh aur accha same as "Humsafar" show wali saas 😆🤣🤣 i wish ke asa hi ho 😉😆🤣
yaar yeah humsafar mein ny kyun nhi dekha... khir ..abhi kuch asa hi hony wala hai
mayank hai bolna hero hai..
sab perfect .. mjhy yeah part likhty hua actually hasi arahi thi .. k yeah tu filmi bhi nhi lagraha hai.. kisis daily soap jasa hai .. mayank style
han yeah do tapar tum logo ki wjaha se dalin hain ..ek dala tha tu Ragni kahti hai long slap dalo... ab batao zara...
tum logo k hawaly kiya hota tu kya kerty

n god!!! after all these intense moments...i was totally Aweeeddd with Mayank again...
The way he made the situation light with his humor...n that hidden camera wala line toh 🤣🤣🤣
They r d Best!!!!!

thanks dear for liking and loving and beautiful comments
Awesomeee Update!!!!!!
Hatsss Off to u API...👏👏👏
u Rocked it!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️🤗⭐️
loved it sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it lodsss
love U lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗




will cont soon with the last part...
wasy tu i m done writing it but just reviewing it...
cant say today late or 2mroow maybe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
finally tai jaan deeds are before every one..i wanted same reaction from mayank when he knows about Adhiraj ..waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

yes it was pay back time and cuming more...
he did gave reaction... if ur talking abt towards nupur.. it will cum... surly...

thanks dear


Originally posted by: Maria.

Awesom part

loved it
continue soon



thanks alot dear


Originally posted by: kirti123

wow

amazing part
loved it
😊



thanks alot dear


Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome blossom update..

Yayee, finally Tai jaan got exposed.
Update soon.




thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

yes finally



thanks alot




thanku




thanks


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

That was the awsome part...


I couldn't beileve Tai jaan could stoop so low...


Well It was definately
shock for
everyone..
when Mayank reveal her reality...

It will certainly took time..
but How much
they themselves
don't know...

well...
Tai jaan... still planning for something...
God...
Is she a woman or not...



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
ya she did so
ya true it isnt easy to take it all like this

thanks fro liking it dear


Originally posted by: Faria.


meri pichle comment ka reply kaha hai




thanksa lot dear
mein ny kya tha nah update k neechy n last per mein ny ksis ko nhi rply kiya


Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

WOW!!!!!finally tai jaan acts r infront of every1...soo gud




yup
fianlly
thanks alot



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