Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 - Page 23

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Firstly id like to thank SHREE buddy u jus were too sweet to pm me this story!! If not for u i wud have missed sumtyn very big!! Cheers Shree! :)

ANd to the author f this amazing wonderful mind-blowing breathtaking story!! Jus Wonderful!!! How cud u pen down such a wonderful though i guessed the Her right that she was his wife n lakash was his son n khushi n asha were out of his life!! And then when he got to knw he was betrayed by the two women of his life i jus cudnt control my tears if that was not enuf when i found him all alone on d stairs n Asha comforting him the tears that tried holdin bak jus poured out i cudn stop myself!! I m cryin lik mad even when im writin dis down!! ANd if that was not enuf the drawing n what drawings were u talkin bout sweetheart n when she drew him exactly wid such minute perfections such as bluetooth! i was speechless n d rate at which my tears poured down jus increased!! and not to forget the last paragraph!! La filed a divorce khushi is adamant nt to get bak n Lakash isn't Arnav's kid?? I m jus not able to rationally think how cud u write such wonderful meaning n exact emotions depictin work!!

I have to applaud u for ur immense talent on that!! GO buddy!!

Cheers for the pm Shree :) mwaah!! owe u der n i have sent a buddy request to EvilMindedME

Ps pls lemme knw ur name n buddy if u dnt mind can i suggest sumtyn?? hopin u wudnt, ur work is too precious hence try cuttin d length down n makin it more updates u knw that wud really grab eyeballs as it wud give us d hunger to want more :) :D