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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: damonzlady

Arnav's really sweet,Khushi's reaction was
really funny!


So glad you enjoyed it - thank you :D

Originally posted by: -kitzdoll-

wow awsuuum job hun...simply amazing...


Happy you liked it :D Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: vks11

I love this story. Please update.


Thank you :) I hope to update soon!

Originally posted by: Samyxx

beautiful update...


Thank you :) Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maazia

Awesome. Love the chemistry, the thought processes, and all the emotions. You are a great writer.


That means a lot to me, thank you so much! I'm really happy you've enjoyed the chapter! :D

Originally posted by: rabid52

Really enjoying he journey you have taken us through. Thanks for the lovely ff. will look out or updates.


So happy you've enjoyed the journey of this story :) :) Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts! Hope you'll like future chapters too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LittlePrincess8

oh god i luv this story..i read the all chapters in two days and cant tell you how much happy I am after reading this..this is so beautiful ...feelings written so beautifully that I can feel them completely ...honestly I dont have words to praise you..only say its awesome and hope that you will continue soon.


Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this FF so much and very moved by your thoughts :) Huge thank you for reading this and for sharing your thoughts!! I hope you'll enjoy future chapters just as much, and I'm grateful to you for taking the time to read this and letting me know your thoughts :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Hehehe...Arnav is sooo naughty!!!

Who would've thought the man who never even gave Khushi a second glance would trap her within his arms against a white jeep and try to convince her that its perfectly proper for a husband to kiss his wife anytime even if they're in the middle of the street😆

Lol, Arnav in love is a force to be reckoned with :P


I totally shivered at that para where khushi shuts d open car door and moves past him towards the gate only to have Arnavji's strong hands holding her from behind in an iron grip and push her back against the car...haaawww that was something!

He can be a total Neanderthal sometimes hai na? But can't say I mind :P Super glad you don't either😆

Yes arnav is super lucky to have her... I was glad to read of his own realization of a necessary penance for his misdeeds against her
but Arnav had anticipated, and almost stoically prepared himself, for an endless stretch of penance and atonement, grueling and tormenting, each penalty fitting to the extent of his sins.

Lucky man, he got away almost scot free...this Khushi was so forgiving, she didn't even put him through half the agony he was anticipating. (Much is expected of the khushi in Cul De Sac!! Arnav has to really grovel somewhere!)

Yup, he did get off easily - but while Khushi might have forgiven him he is a long way from forgiving himself. It's something he's already accepted - that he'll continue to punish himself for the rest of his life for what he did.

Another thing is that I started this story before the contract marriage - so in this story, they really are married and Khushi already knows why Arnav married her. So without that enormous bulk of a royal misunderstanding between them, it was easier for them to move on :)

That's one reason I continued Cul-de-sac...Arnav reacted far worse than I had imagined and was positively bestial, so trust me when I say he'll have to suffer for his actions in Cul-de-sac :)

And how her sweet declaration of love has made her now one with him, s part of him, a part of his heart, soul and LOL even his shatir dimaag...hehe!

But more so I was happy to see how Khushi has healed so much that she too begins to see them as something meant to happen right from the beginning...That they were journeying towards togetherness from the time of their "explosive- meeting"...that its not as though they are together now because of a misunderstanding that forced arnav to marry her...Poor girl, after having dreamt so much of a "Rajkumar" and a gala wedding she got a forced temporary marriage instead where she was told by her husband that she would never be given te place of his wife. She deserves to have her dreams fulfilled...And finally that dream comes true...

I'm glad you approve and appreciate how much Khushi has healed and moved forward...again, this is to an extent because the Arnav of this story did not go to the extents that the contract-marriage wala Arnav in the show did. But yes, she was still damaged, and she deserved better, and slowly, Arnav will help her fulfill each of her dreams now that she's given him the chance :) So happy you liked it! Thank you :)

And anjali is moving on too! I'm intrigued to know what sparked this change.

And in spite of being isolated within the noiseless chamber of her lonely bedroom, Anjali did not feel alone.
Beautiful! It reminded me of a phrase I've read.."Alone but not lonely"...

Thank you! Anjali has the potential to be a strong, impactful character and I'm trying my best to tap that potential, so I'm really glad you liked her here! What brought about this change will gradually come out in future chapters and I'm hoping you'll like it!

Thanks so very much for reading, and for sharing your thoughts :) :)

Thanks for the PM😊
Please update soon...both MDJND and Cul De Sac!!

Will try my best :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you :) :)


I'll try to do so soon!

Originally posted by: Sniggy24

I love this FF. I already read it twice... Awesome !


I'm touched that you found it good enough to reread - thank you so much :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah...its true that this arnav is far better than d actual asr on d show...he was ruthless! But I must commend the foresight u had...To show arnav and Khushi married coz of a misunderstanding even before the show brought up that track!!! Thats some foresight u have there!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Yeah...its true that this arnav is far better than d actual asr on d show...he was ruthless! But I must commend the foresight u had...To show arnav and Khushi married coz of a misunderstanding even before the show brought up that track!!! Thats some foresight u have there!!


Lol, not really...this was started after that epi when Arnav catches Shyam-Khushi on the terrace and that promo of them coming home married...I completely freaked out, and started this because I was expecting the worst and didn't think I could bear to watch it :s Unfortunately my estimation of the 'worst' turned out to be too tame and I hadn't expected a contract marriage or half the things Arnav did...safe to say I hated him at that point in the show. Hence Cul-de-sac and my sadistic plans of torture :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

Lol, not really...this was started after that epi when Arnav catches Shyam-Khushi on the terrace and that promo of them coming home married...I completely freaked out, and started this because I was expecting the worst and didn't think I could bear to watch it :s Unfortunately my estimation of the 'worst' turned out to be too tame and I hadn't expected a contract marriage or half the things Arnav did...safe to say I hated him at that point in the show. Hence Cul-de-sac and my sadistic plans of torture :P



Oh i'm waiting for a Cul De Sac update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Just got back to IF after a break grading lit essays - yes, for my sins I teach :).
Thanks for taking the time to respond to my post.
This is probably the best aspect of this medium - being able to interact with the writers of these wonderful versions of IPK, and getting to know other povs a little more...
Your enthusiasm for what you do shines through.
Again, may you always have an interestng story to tell and may you enjoy the craft of story-telling...

PS
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello again doe eyes,

Again, thank you. IPK from the very beginning crafted a host of intriguing characters with so much potential - for instance Shashi Gupta. I was seriously hoping he would recover in the show, and spill the beans on Shyam - I don't know whether the CVs forgot about him, but that question just went unanswered in the show. So I'm very relieved and reassured you enjoyed the different character developments here!
Wanted to pick up on this comment of yours on Shashi Gupta. First off completely agree with you. Waited long for the CVs to re introduce SG into the narrative. It could have been woven so beautifully into the 'redemption track'. And he is a good actor, so the role of 'father' to not just Khushi and Payal but also Arnav would have been so natural for him to portray. It would have made Arnav's understanding of the situation and his seeking support from an older and wiser man very authentic as well. Waited in vain as usual.
Also waited for Anjali's character to grow a spine. There was every indication of this possibility, but nothing came of it. So thank you for creating the scenario where Anjali is heading in the direction of facing up to her reality and seeking support. Who better than Shashi Gupta, the father figure she misses in her life. A natural connection.

And she says its poetry for her!! 😊
"What oft was thought, but ne'er so well expressed!" It warms the cockles of my heart to know that there are still people in this world who are touched by poetry. To stumble upon such souls in the wasteland of tweets -140 characters - what is that??? - SMS abbreviations, pathetically limited 'likes' and other jargon of the world of social media networking ( nothing against networking, except the way it mauls the language)...is a delight!
So thanks again...

Lookng forward to reading more updates. Read in one of your posts that you were considering a blog. Seems like a great way to go. Do let me know if this happens. Shall hope for access and a continuation of your stories...

Saludos,
PS


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