FF: LEGAL SINS THread 4 Pcp pt 21 - Page 131 - Page 74

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Posted: 13 years ago
And it feels so great to catch up!

Loving the new character- I can see the similar traits like ASR! Step sister, eh? Is there a past to be revealed too? An angle there? Loved the line -' he doesn't respect his wife and he expects me to do sI'

Loving the pace of the story! It's all going great!
Great updates! :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it.. I agree with Maya "he doesn't respect his own wife & expect this from others" Such double standards!!!
after reading the precap, I'm looking so forward to the Arnav-Khushi showdown...

Waiting for the update!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the FF...plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update!!
Nice turn of events!!
Can't wait for the confrontation!!
Loved the precap!!
Continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome⭐️
Precap sounds awesome...angry KKGSR...😃

PS: THANKS FOR THE PM
Edited by Dhishtee08Arshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r

edited...

HINTS:

1) This Part would have the awaited Aman - Arnav - Khushi Fight track.. Aman would support Khushi this time and not Arnav.. which Arnav would surely Hate to see..

wow...this was unpredictable...gr8 to know...😉

2) I told you that someone Heard the conversation of Aman - Preeti and Khushi in RM about the contract.. I also said that Aman - Khushi - Arnav verbal fight will also be heard by someone .. But remember these are two different people.. ANd I wont reveal who they are.. So soon...

two different people!!!
oh...ok...😊

3) Next week is Khushi Blackmailing ASR Track for Telling her the reason of their marriage.. And Arnav inturn handling it in his own Way..

hmmm,khushi blackmailing her ASR,now thats what am waiting for...😉😛

4) Many asked me if Rishi KAshyap is somewhere related to Lavanya Kashyap.. NO Guys.. Lavanya is not in this Fiction..



ya,i too thought to ask,but i dint read La's name anywhere here,in this fiction,so dint ask..but still u cleared it...thnks...😳

5) Many wanted to know if Rishi is the one who is the new Entry and Negative?? - I confirm Rishi is not the New Entry I told you guys before.. Its someone else.. YET to be revealed.. And that person would be Negative to ASR.. Not KHUSHI..

Damm,negative to ASR!!!
if it would have been negative for khushi,toh zyada maza aata,par koi nai...am still eager to know more bout this "NEW ENTRY!!"😉

THNKS for giving the hints...
love u loads Madhu...😊
Shraddha...😳
Edited by trivedishraddha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
im sure maya is the person who heard dat !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aesome baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi madhu iam a silent reader of ur stories such a superb stories madhu each stories has unique concept realy wonderfull ,iam dreaming abt arshi as per of ur story i red all the stories forcib,ugly,conflicte,love tohate,forbidden,wretchd knot ,tic tac.every thing finally i finished every thing of ur story i need to read next chapters update very soon and all so i seen forcibly yours 2 precap nice plz continue that too tanq tanq tanq for ur story that made my days happy ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thankss for all the updates!!
you are the best
im soo so srry i couldnt comment regularly, only becuase school has started but dont worry i will try to read when i can and comment when i can!! thanks for the pm and hope to read more soon <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 20:

Arnav: Know what.. I think You, me and Aman need to talk together on this..
He pulled her hand and then walked with her straight down towards the car for going to his Office.. Maya was sitting with Nani and watching TV and she could easily see how irritated ASR was and dragging his wife somewhere.. She didnt stop him ..

Maya (To herself): He cannot respect his Wife and he expects others to do it.. Typical ASR..

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Arnav parked his Car at the Office Door and then Khushi and Arnav got down.. He still held her hand and tried calming down his anger not wanting to create a scene at his office.. SHe too walked politely with him inside.. THis was the first time the AR Employees were seeing ASR with his Wife in their office. That too holding hands .. That was surely grabbing everyone's attention inside though nobody talked about it.. Aman was sitting at his desk and was typing something on his Laptop when he saw Arnav and Khushi coming towards him.. He just stopped doing his work and got up from his chair.. He could see something was surely wrong.. But why had he got her at office?

Before Aman could think anything right, Arnav and Khushi came at his desk and Arnav ordered him..

Arnav: Aman.. Meet us in my cabin..
Arnav again moved ahead towards his cabin with Khushi and Aman followed them all confused what was this all about?
Finally Arnav came inside his cabin and made sure he closed the curtains of his Cabin not wanting anyone to see what was happening here.. Khushi just stood at his desk and Aman entered inside.. He looked at Khushi once and then at ASR..

Aman: ASR.. Whats wrong?
Arnav gritted his teeth and then turned back to see Aman..
Arnav: Atleast you know something is wrong Aman.. I had thought you wont even realize that..
Aman was again all confused.. He stood there all Blank..
Arnav: What the hell have you trained her Aman? DO you even realize she has failed in most of the steps.. Firstly she didnt read the damm contract before signing it, then she doesnt even know what her wify duties are.. She keeps resisting me all the time.. She orders me to do things as per her way.. How could she? I thought you are the best person who can teach what I want and I am sorry to say Aman.. You failed me in that..
Khushi was really angry hearing this.. Aman Failed? She FAILED? How could he even think something like this.. She did everything for him which no normal girl would do knowing this is a 6 months wedding only.. She too blurted out her feelings in anger..

Khushi: Enough Arnav.. Do you think we would continue hearing to any non sense that you speak.. Forget the others, I thought you would have known What I am going through since the time we got married.. You have seen every mood of mine Arnav.. Being my husband, I shared the bed with you, I made sure I keep your family happy, I accepted them as my own family, you hide the facts of Maya from me, I still was quiet thinking you must have done it for some purpose, you still didnt tell me why you married me for 6 months only? If Sharing the bed and not resisting you was the only thing you needed then you would have got many other girls for that Arnav.. Why Wife? WHY? Do you think Girls are Some kind of Tissues papers which can used when you need and throw in the bin when not required?

Arnav was blank when he heard that from her. For the first time she was speaking something with so much of hurt, pain and Anger.. He was surely not liking her speak this way to him.. But he wasnt even able to stop her today.. Aman was even more worried for Khushi now since was trying to get the beast in ASR out now by her words.. He was worst when someone speaks so with him in such a louder tone..

Arnav: Enough Khushi..!! Dont you dare speak all this again to me.. I wont tolerate..
Khushi moved 2 steps ahead now towards him and then replied with the same anger..
Khushi: What have you tolerated till now Arnav? Nothing..!! You have always made people to suffer because of you.. Like you did to me.. You make me feel like a Wh**e sometimes who has only one role in her life.. To satify you.. Thats it..

Arnav heard it a lot now.. He raised his hand to hit her cheek but then he was stopped by Aman..

Aman too couldnt take all this anymore.. Khushi was already in pain and Arnav would just increase it by his actions.. Arnav looked at Aman questioningly how he got so much of guts to Stop him..

Aman: ASR.. Dont even try to do that.. You cannot hit your wife ..!!
Arnav: Ohh Really?!! She can speak anything she wishes.. And I cant Stop her?
Aman: She didnt say anything wrong ASR.. I agree you wanted a Wife for 6 months and you got her.. But making her sleep with you every night ..?? Whats the need for that? I know its too late to ask you this.. But if she isnt comfortable to do something like this, then you being a gentleman should understand and backoff..

Arnav waved his hand off his and then turned towards her..

Arnav: She signed the Contract on her Will.. I never forced her to.. She knew that she had to spend such nights with me.. Then why the hell is she resisting now?
Khushi: Because I never knew that the person I am marrying is so insensitive that he wont be consider my will if I wish to skip it sometimes.. I was ready to fulfil all my rights Arnav.. But you didnt evEn give me time to understand what you are.. Even in arrnaged marriage, people dont directly jump to intimacy on their first night ..They make their partner understand and get comfortable and only when she wishes they move to the next level..
Arnav: Do you mean I forced you on our first night? You didnt resist me Dammit.. How am I supposed to understand you werent interested in it.. Try to remember Khushi.. You didnt even say a "NO" once that night.. You looked only confused to my acts like every girl does on their first nights..

Aman was unable to hear all their private talks.. Why was he even called if they had to discuss all this?

Khushi: Right I was confused.. But that didnt mean you would take it a YES from me and continue..

Arnav roamed his hand angrily in his hair and then banged his fist on the side wall..

Arnav: Fine... Lets just stop all this now.. I wont touch you or get intimate with you henceforth.. Thats it., This is what you want.. Is it? Fine... I wont.. Now get hell away from my eyes.. I dont wish you to be here and continue this..

Khushi: You got me here.. I didnt wish to come.. So now drop me back home..
Arnav was about to answer her something when Aman replied..
Aman: She is right ASR . I will arrange a Car for her to drop her home..

Arnav looked at Aman and then replied..
Arnav: Since when did you start supporting her Aman?
Aman: I am not supporting her ASR>. But understand.. She is right in her way..
Arnav: Ohh Really? Know what I chose a Wrong guy to get a Wrong Wife for me.. And now since we married, I cant even do much about it..

He said that and open the door and left his Cabin.. Khushi wiped her tears and she moved behind him outside followed by Aman.. In all this no one noticed that behind the door of the cabin, someone was already present and had heard their entire conversation..

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Khushi reached back home by the Car that Aman arranged for her.. She was not at all in a mood to talk to anyone.. But then she was stopped by Nani..

Nani: Khushi Bitiya.. Where had you been? And where is Chotte?
Khushi faked a smile and then replied..
Khushi: He is at his office Nani.. And he took me to show him office.. He got some work so he stayed and I came back..
Nani smiled at her and thats when Khushi saw Maya entering the main door.. She had been out somewhere and she came back home now..

Nani: Maya.. You came back?
Maya: Yes Nani.. My work is done.. So I am back..
Nani: Fine..

Maya saw Khushi once and then moved back to her room.. Khushi too moved to her room as she knew she needed some time to be alone and relax..

Precap for Part 21 - Page 121

NOTE: I am not updating any other FF's of mine today other than this one and Forcibly Yours - Season 2 Part 1 .. Little busy.. So.. Will update all tomorrow..
Edited by Madhu123 - 13 years ago

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