OS - Why he killed himself that Day? Part 5 pg26

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Gazal-jaan le lia he tumne meri😭
Oh God! the last part was literaly unbearable for me!!😔
U killed Arnav!!
& Khushi too!!
How cd u??
But apart frm the Arshi's death,that was a superb ending,the last para frced me to cry👏
U prtrayed emotion beautifully-Thats the biggest strength of ur writting👍🏼

Now write sme happy shappy story,os's & make me happy with a huge smile,pls,Gazal😃
Thnx for the PM
Big hugs🤗

Edited by coronapsyche - 13 years ago

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Gazal..

@Gazal..

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: coronapsyche
Gazal-jaan le lia he tumne meri😭
Oh God! the last part was literaly unbearable for me!!😔
U killed Arnav!!
& Khushi too!!
How cd u??
But apart frm the Arshi's death,that was a superb ending,the last para frced me to cry👏
U prtrayed emotion beautifully-Thats the biggest strength of ur writting👍🏼

Now write sme happy shappy story,os's & make me happy with a huge smile,pls,Gazal😃
Thnx for the PM
Big hugs🤗

Thanks buddy... I have started writing new story...didn't u get the PM😲

Btw...i have to kill both... 'coz i can't bear Khushi without Arnav😳

Edited by Gazal.. - 13 years ago

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

omg.. arnav and khushi both died... this was really unexpected...😭😭

i thought ASR would plan in such a way that shyam gets into the trap and he will be escaped.

arrrghhh shyam...😡.. all this happened only because of anjali..

arnav was selfless..and even khushi proved that she is no less... giving her baby to anjali..

yes. they will be together in another world.

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tv_watcher

@tv_watcher

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

gazal,wat shud i say???

though nobody can stop me from speaking...but u did,u left me speechless...

i mean,i never expected such an end...but yes,it was beautifully written(otherwise i wud hv been mad if nyone else would hv written abt arshi's death)

well done...👍🏼

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

omg..serious sad ending..but beautifully written...👏

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shivahari

@shivahari

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Your writing was superb. You clearly showed hw our Arnav is. He will give up anything for his loved ones.
Even though i'm a bit sad about his death.
Will wait for ur works.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

amazing n sad ending

thanks for the pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

so sad he died just so he could get shaym arrested
but then she killed herself too after giving birth to their baby
but at least they are together some where