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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Loving how every thing sorting out in their life
Wonder wht will ashna's reaction be toward arnav

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

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KC, I seriously cannot decide which chapter I like, I read a chapter n think yeah this is my fave so far, then you come with the next chapter n I say again that this one is now my fave!!! I know am going round in circles!! 😆 what can I do??? you write sooo well!!!

n yes, this was yet again another awesome update!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! hoping it's a mega long one n you break your record of updating looong chapters!! 😃

Edited by Riima_Azraa - 12 years ago

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asmaali0987

@asmaali0987

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Wow that was an amazing update loved reading can't wait till next update n big thank you for the pm 😊
Love you

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sejal

@sweet_butterfly

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

glad Aashna is ok... eagerly waiting for Arnav - Aashna bonding...

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Finally u update

u actually updated i waited so long

awesome update

its just a start of new bonding between arnav khushi and their Aashna

i actually looking forward Aashna reaction when he meet arnav

how is Aashna and arnav relationship but above this plz also elaborate teh khushi and aashna relation.

love the way arnav trying to see Aashna but get afraid

Arnav feel too sad and painful by their loss

loss parents

loss love of life

loss baby

my eyes get wet on this

must u a fabulous...u write every thing so clear and impactful

it is short update...good thing u accept that 😆

plz come soon with next update

next update is 30 so come with A to N 😆

thanks for pm

Edited by angel-iqra - 12 years ago

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

AWESOME UPDATE... u know u r a brilliant writer... Reallt i was abt to log out coz i was too sleepy have my clg tomorrow but i couldnt resist ... It was brilliant each n every word ... Felt so bad when Arnav shattered n felt so happy when ashna gain concious n the last lines abt Arnav's views abt the scene of mother n daughter amazing loved it thnx for PM ... Short or long the update was great as usual

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

first of all welcome back actully i was axpecting more but that,s fine good job thanx for pm

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khusharnav

@khusharnav

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Hi KC!

Thanks for the note and the pm! Very nice of you.

Ok, so I just read the update and was barely into it and it just ended abruptly (Guess, when things are beautiful, you just want more!). So I was a bit disappointed, but you promised to come up with a longer update next time. Will be waiting...

It was a very emotional situation - the turmoil Arnav goes through and the way he breaks down and realise how he cannot fix things were all beautifully portrayed. The interaction between Naina and Arnav was brief but powerful. Hope things improve and they go through some happier times!

Happy to hear that you are eager to write - we will get more to read!

👏

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Such a beautiful update!!!

He cried!
He cried for all the loss.
He cried for their baby.

They will be okay ...
As they will provide strength to each other.

With all that love making sessions, I am sure Khushi might be already pregnant.

Or sooon.

Loved the update.
Thanks